Kellibae:


U still didnt answer any of my question.

Because the questions were of no relevance. Sorry.

This is 2017 and I don't want to curse anyone, but e be like say some people just want free curse sha.


Thunda faya all those people quoting the OP's posts just to make a silly comment.

The post is long itself already. Do you have to quote it?

Meanwhile, OP come and conclude your story. It's quite interesting.

xynerise:


Na your way! You don finally sell your papa land?

No! Na him car I sell.

obataokenwa:
Can't you get it that Yorubas has offended Igbos more than other tribes in Nigeria? They don't know how to marry so we advice our women against marrying them. they love what's in the skirt and can use charm if need be. I love my people so no apologies. Thanks

Amazing people still reason like this in 2017. Good luck to you both. Not my business how you choose to conduct your life's affairs.

ephi123:


Because the questions were of no relevance. Sorry.

Hmm ok then keep off my mention.
I just said my own mind.
U cant force me to think otherwise.
Goodbye!

Essentials1:


Hahahaha... I know that you are one of those people who will never spend a Penny to buy the story if it were a novel being sold in the market...

You are easily the most annoying and tactless poster on this thread.

Teacher, don't teach me nonsense. It's called writing style for a reason. The key word is style. Style is subjective and personal. So what is the ultimate test for a style that works? The results, the raving fans, the people baying for more, which, as you can see, she has in abundance.

Are there areas she could still improve upon? Yes, who doesn't have one? Does she have a winning style? Absolutely! Are you a poor communicator? Yes, a bad proud one at that.

So shove your writing clinic where it truly belongs - your critical behind.

:PThis is season one please give us season two...
I love d suspense

ephi123:


Amazing people still reason like this in 2017. Good luck to you both. Not my business how you choose to conduct your life's affairs.

Facts most times looks foolish. 2017 is a year we are trying to get it right among our haters too. I love my people.

Kellibae:

Hmm ok then keep off my mention.
I just said my own mind.
U cant force me to think otherwise.
Goodbye!

Obviously I can't , your thoughts are your thoughts.

i am bored already abeg. . .its not worth my time

ephi123:


Obviously I can't , your thoughts are your thoughts.

Yea dearie byeee!

ephi123:


Obviously I can't , your thoughts are your thoughts.

You dey find trouble be that. lol

Kellibae:

Yea dearie byeee!

She too like you sha. make una settle.

Op ur story wan turn Inconclusive?

Sorry gentlemen n ladies, the story have ended... next season is coming out soon... watch out...

curvyibogirl:
WoW?

miss producer when are you concluding this script

...we heard from reliable source that I phone 7 op got from mr k had been retrieved from her so she can no longer type until her mama could be able to organise her any cheap phone


Sorry guys for keeping you waiting...

obataokenwa:
She too like you sha. make una settle.

Hhaha obviously

curvyibogirl:
WoW?

lazing around waiting to read the final story. I've refreshed more than fifty times. where the hell are you? (copied from Trump)

Kellibae:

Yea dearie byeee!

Bye too!

obataokenwa:
You dey find trouble be that. lol

Which one be your own there

Culin:


Safe

I don't doubt its safety joh. but after I come, what will nau happen? cox its cox of u I wanna relocate and change destination maybe I can locate my missing rib

Rita1982:
Mention me

can we go out? I like you

Smell like fake story to me. Too long to be real

ephi123:


Which one be your own there

Two of una go make good friend. Try it.

Oluwapresley:

I don't doubt its safety joh. but after I come, what will nau happen? cox its cox of u I wanna relocate and change destination maybe I can locate my missing rib

let my boyfriend catch u first. You'll lose more ribs

carmag:


..are you feeling so special or entitled

..swerve jor..

Its funny how you don't get to mind your business.

All these naija girls that think their yansh is worth iPhone 7. Olosho that cannot respect the privacy of a stranger phone. Sha come and complete the season film u are writing

Essentials1:
i saw that DaySpringer complimented the Op writing skills although I wouldn't consider this story a good write up curvyibogirl...

I consider this story you are sharing as simply a life experience and not a short novel.. I consider it as something that was written the way it happened subtracting the laws of writing...

I wouldn't consider you having good writing skills because just anyone can do what you did if they can tell a story about romance and/or which what most Nigerians want to read...

But am in no way condemning you... am telling you that If want to consider writing ad a hobby, as an art ( that is as an expression of yourself) or on a professional level.. you should read further on this and produce a writing style which this story lacks and also implement the laws of writing...

There is a lot I want to type here but I will live you to ponder on this for now

Hello sir! What's your idea of a short story? Where does stories emanate from? For all I know we have several types of experiences (real or unreal). What do you simply means by laws of writing, I guess you don't read a lot of novels, if not what type of writing skills does Amos Tutuola adopts, or made you can say his story is baseless and lacks laws of writing.

Have you not heard of writer's style? And please be popular first before you make others. Instead of criticising, what is bad for you makes another healthy. Why not commend her efforts, bros na 2017 we day ooo, bad belle is not allowed, if she wants to take writing as a career, I guess she knows what to do to be professionally good in it.

Havilah93:
This is 2017 and I don't want to curse anyone, but e be like say some people just want free curse sha.


Thunda faya all those people quoting the OP's posts just to make a silly comment.

The post is long itself already. Do you have to quote it?

Meanwhile, OP come and conclude your story. It's quite interesting.

A ki gbo buburu lenu abore , o se inu odun tuntun
Compliments bro, you just switch lane ...hope everything is fine ?.... stay blessed

Probably she has a bf but greed n self deception won't let her be contented.oloshos everywhere