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[quote author=Mynd_44]2. The author already allowed a Facebook page access to certain parts of his work which means it has been duplicated and not exclusive to NL which makes it crazy to track.[/quote]funny how you make it sound like it wasn't exclusive to NL when it was first pirated by the facebook page.

@yemi, lol... I'll take that as a compliment.

@toeyean, thanks dear.. I'll make corrections, didnt even notice...

yemi2plus2: to make matter worst, you need to sign up on the website first.

guy i just tire oh, I'm not taking any risk again...

IZUKWU: Chistar, i saw your work or atleast some part of posted on this site :codedruns.com, did you give them the go ahead to do so.

another piracy issue.. .. No I didnt give them the go ahead.. Dear Mynd where art thou?

VULCAN: 1. The correct spelling is Michael. A cardinal sin to misspell your main characters name. Loll

2. How did Michael take a blood sample by himself?

3. Someone said you should stop it and it appears u consented.

4. When sandra walked in on Mike and Ify. Her eyes filled with tears immediately. It doesn't work that way.

5. And perfume doesn't go ahead of someone like an escort rider.

6. How did mike know the make n model of the gun that the capo pointed at him at his front door?

7. Surprised that there were no reprisals from the cultists after their arrest.

8. After being robbed he went home wid his fone. C'mon

9.The general impression given by the story is dat uniport girls are always on heat.

10. Another unrealistic part is the fact that none of these girls are materialistic or even financially dependent on guys.

11. He gave his life to christ and it had absolutely no effect on his behaviour whatsoever.

12. No explanation given for why urch doesn't have a car.

13. His auntie is always sending him money when banks are closed.

14. Tenny giving him a public bj within a few hrs of their meeting was unrealistic.

15. It ended a bit too weakly.

16. How do u relate the end to the beginning.

Thanks bro! I really appreciate your comment, but let me try and reply some of your questions, I.E the ones that have answers tho.

1. Lol, yea, I had a little doubt on the spelling and even MS. Word and autocorrect happens to point out Micheal as an error but on the controversial side, 'Micheal' is the spelling used by a couple of friends I have and they claim it means the same thing and its pronouced same way, so I just continued that way. But I'll try using 'Michael' since its more acceptable.

2. I didnt say he took it by himself, I didnt want to delay to write up with unnecesary 'gist', definitely, its assumed a nurse took it.

3. As a writter I try to write in a way the readers would like, so I tried to compromise where I could without spoiling my style, that way, its a win- win for both of us. But your point is highly taken, I'll resume with the high suspense in my next novel.

4. Hmm, good point I'll modify that when I make a book out of it, hopefully.

5. When you truly love someone, you take note of the weirdest and strangest of things and the perfume or on a broader sense 'her scent' is not an exception.

6. Lol, I actually knew ntn about guns until I got to that part of the story, thanks to google. But I guess I over did it there. I'll modify it.

7. Lol, well Michael is still in his 300lv so lets just imagine how it went down, I made a statement about a cult waiting for a guy to get to his final year before striking.

8. Lol, they took Michael phone nah, lets assume he had a second phone although smaller and of little value, like a nokia torchlight phone.

9. This was my major 'concern' when writting the story. Uniport girl arent cheap atall, Michael just knows how to manipulate the female mind. If he was in U.I, unilag or any other school, the same things would have happened. There are guys who are just like that and Michael is one of them.

10. Ify was a runs girl, I made enough points to show you guys that, and Micheal is financially 'ok' so I dont think it would have been nice to talk about the little 'financial help' he rendered to some female charaters in the story. But I'll add a few of in the full and complete book, maybe in a funny way, am already having Ideas..

11. Being a christain aint easy, the devil is always tempting us and Micheal faith is not that strong. He tried avoiding Ify after the church service but that was as far as his faith could take him.

12. He eventually bought a car, didnt you notice when sandra said she and Urch are coming to pick him up from the front of ETF hall?

13. Yes, she does I.banking so can transfer money anywhere anytime any amount.

14. She had a crazy crush on Michael, and I tried to point out that fact several times. And being a virgin doesnt mean much nowadays, its just wen the hymen hasnt been broken nothing more.

15. Yea, I know. But I had to end it quickly due to reasons beyond my power, once the book is out you would get the full story in between.

16. I tried to pass a message to those who dont believe that love conquers all. The story is all about Michael stay in uniport his first two years, there were more challenges after he and Sandra reconciled but as at the time but love definitely conquered again. Lets just say Michael and Sandra were meant to be. And the flash back on how Sandra became Micheal bestfriend stopped when she caught him and Ify kissing, maybe I'll highlight that later, just thought you guys would get that the real story started after that happened.

Thanks once again bro. Please point out more as it would help the 'book' to be a masterpiece. I'll be expecting in my next story that starts late this week.

Peace.

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foslink: owk anuda Q are u realli 18 as u claim to be or ur jst being anuda football star wu likes to trow it on our faces

lol, funny you. Events in the story didnt just happen, they happened like two years ago so lets just say am older now. But I was really 18th then

ARareGem: The correct sentence reads 'I spent time reading Chistar's story IN ORDER TO get to the end quickly', not 'I spent time reading Chistar's story IN OTHER TO get to the end quickly'. You kept interchanging the phrase throughout the story.

thanks dear, frankly, I occasional find using those phrases challenging. I'll try and work on it. Thanks

foslink: Chister u did not tell us what u did wth d 5ok u aunt gave to u

lol, yea I know, I didnt tell you guys a 101 things purposely. I'll let you use your imagination to Fill in the blank spaces . But just for the record, how long do you think 50k can last in my hand considering how everything in PH is expensive? Good morning btw

papindinho: mod o........ https://www.nairaland.com/1314002/2go-
love-story
this is a product of frontpage o... It belongs the o.... Kindly see to it sir Mynd

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Chuksemi: Oga mi,criticize me nah!

lol, I've seen nothing yet, just work on you spacing and start every noun with a capital alphabet.

Come and continue sha

#just an advice# keep on posting constantly and don't bother about the comments yet. Dey would come in due time. Nice story.

[quote author=Miz_Sammy]oga chistar brought me hear. Wonderful story chuksemi *following*[/quote]lol! I see you babes! . Welcome and please have your sit.

ugopeter: @Chistar Just 1 question 4 U...of all d girls u dated/ slept with, who did u REALLY love most...chidinma or Sandra?

lol, read the last update again

Flashaldrin: i'm thinking a large part is missing. From the point were you slumped in your room to the scene with the orange woman. I suspect a very large chunk of the story is missing!

YES! You are right, very right, I copied and pasted it wrongly. But Its kindof too late to add it now, I'll just go and modify the post now and make sure it matches. But don't worry, nothing really IMPORTANT happened, just some descriptions and a few jokes. Thanks alot

Reserved

PS: Love isn't complicated, they love you or they don't. Or they want to be with you or they don't, it's that simple.
So no matter how far you run from it, it would always find you.


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Wow, nice!! Each post makes me want more!