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Larrysun, I respect you sir.

cassbeat:
What an update bro

glad you liked it.

Blackween:
This got me on my toes, I hope jerry getting into the camp is part of the plan though

I love the crimes, well done sir

Thank you for the concern. We crime writers love you too.
Yeah I hope so , quite a lot has happened so far.

enirock:
This just keeps getting interesting. But Seth is heartless o. I hope Kadiri would not alert his co-conspirators ? And him placing bombs in strategic areas means he really must believe in the plan or he is blinded by ideology, or his loved one is in Seth's custody or his love for money but whichever it is, I hope he is foiled by Itoro before Ife gets herself killed.

Thanks boss for the updates

I couldnt have summarized the updates as good as you did. Wow! Made me re-visit and read the update again. Thank you for the apt and conscise comment.

Continued

Kelly
He said I can. Or he will shoot the little girl.
“To do that." I hastly replied“ It will take almost a week. To change commands and voice recognition."

“ What? A week?

“ Seriously?! ” He yells. Then stares at me. “ How do I get it to work?

“ Repeat the command."

He did.

Caiden replies “ Updating in progress..... Drones located. 36°, 48' North of the Atlantic Ocean... System hack in progress... Please stand by"

Seth asked how long this would take?

“ I cant tell. A while"

“ Damn!”
*****

Narrator

That same cold Tuesday Night. Gerrard and his men surreptitiously arrived a safe spot about 100 meters away from the camp. They hid behind thick bushes and enjoyed the camouflage of the night.
They advanced towards the camp of the terrorists.
His night vision cam became very useful and the gps locator which the tech guy- Mr Itoro Abasi- gave him was still blinking. It was obvious that the boy or Seth was around these parameters.

He squatted. Told his men to halt. He spot two guard on patrol. They walked above a bamboo raft supported by large mahogany woods. The camp had a single entrance with high steeped bamboo fences all around.
He spotted a bent chimney to the right. It's walls were made of brick. Smoke escaped the nozzles towards the East wind. He checked his GPS locator once more- seems like the red blinking dot was in the East direction- hopefully. That is their goal. The chimney.

“ Proceed with caution.” He whispered into his intercom.
****

ITORO

From the big screen in the Emergency Room 001 we watched the operation. Gerrard Finder's night vision Camera was our eyes in the darkness. I felt cold shivers travel up my spine. I took a good look at everyone's face and contenances. The president was no doubt tensed up, she ran her index fingers over each other consistently as she watched the screens. Mr Green kept adjusting his blue tie. Samantha Walsh did not seize to tap a pen against her lower lip. Many others had different reactions.

My gaze finally rested on Ife. She perched like a bird at the entrance to the large office. Did not speak a word.
After two minutes I was forced to repeat the process. Everyone still doing the same thing in anticipation. Tension made my toes cringe in my shoes. I dropped my files, and told one of the tech guys to take over and monitor the schematics on the map.

For a moment, I had a gut feeling telling me to turn backwards. I did. And spotted Ife leaving the room. From her movements I could assertain her to be trailing someone.
I followed them. This led me into the much isolated parts of the building- the holding areas for suspects on detention. She was trailing Rumeh Kadiri. I noticed him installing bombs at different corners along his path.

Rumeh came upon holding room 004. Thats where Aremu Johnson is.
I watched from a distance as Rumeh sneaked upon the guards and killed them silently.

.....

yungbanks:
Nna creeza u don murder me oooo more pls abeg no hang leg let it flow we are here

I no hang leg bro... It is flowing already. thanks for reading

EbonyQueen001:
Thanks for the mention. Name change, I understand your reason for doing so.
Keep up the good work Creeza.

Thank you dear.

Episode 23- She is dead

Kelly
To be honest, I am startled. Okay I am puzzled. Even more now as Seth gives the young man the cup in his hand. Inside a chimney, just about five metres from Seth's position, laid a steaming sauce. Fresh pepper and oil scent filled the air. I sniffed but yet still puzzled.

He ordered him to scoop the sauce from the pot.
They young man had no choice than to obey as three other terrorists raised their guns at him.

He focused his weapon at me, “ The codes.” He said “ Give them up.”

I replied “ What? I don't understand."

To start with, I thought; where the hell are we? Who built this place? Very sophisticated structures with colonial traits. What's the connection with the codes and hot oil sauce?
I immediately asked before he could say anything else: what are you going to do with those?

He paused for while. “Very well then” He says “ I will show you"

He ordered his men to decapacitate Salamatou's clothings. Her dress was ripped apart, legs grabbed and stretched wide open. Just then, cold breeze from the night grew on my skin and sent chills into my pores. The breeze stuck in an aggressive manner to my clothes as we arrived here. So I thought maybe Seth put up a chimney to warm the environment. Why have her clothes ripped out? except-.

Salamatou's arms were held backwards, private parts open to the eyes of everyone. Including her own little daughter- oh God!- in front of her little baby? You sons of the devil are beyond berseck. Can't belive this is happening.

Those meaty lips of flesh in between dark hairs, down her pelvic region.
Salamatou screamed and begged in tears.

“ Hold her!” Seth yelled out.

He raised a gun at the young man. So did Kendrick who held on to Salamatou with his other arm- very tight behind her.

“ You wanted in right? ” Seth asked the young man“ Away with it! Do it!”

The man hesistated.

“ Do it! Seth screamed at him

Wickedly, without flinching , he poured the hot peppered sauce into Salamatou's wide open private part.
She vibrated and squirting in pains as the stench of burning flesh filled the atmostphere.

Aisha cried out. “ Mama!”

Awestruck. I could feel my toes cringe as I watched Salamatou struggle to withstand the pain.
“ No-” I began in tears“ You can't possibly be this evil? No- no”

The men held on to her as she fidgeted one last time before the white of her eyes revealed. She is dead.
He killed her.

“Mama- ” Aisha screamed and rushed the young man. She hit him hard on the lap. “ Wicked. Wicked. You are wicked. You !! You killed my mama”
He stood numb and let go off the cup in his hand. It hit the floor.

“ seize her! ” The devil gave more orders.

The men left Salamatou's lifeless body and Kendrick immediately grabs Aisha.

The young man eventually threw up in disgust.
“ Hold the little girl. " Seth said “ Bring her!"
“ No! No! " I rushed in and cried “ Please I beg you. Please don't . I'll give you the pass code. I will. Just-- spare the girl. I beg you!”

He stared at me without saying a word. I ain't going to wait for him to say something else. I better take the lead
I rushed to the device and powered it on. Caiden requested for the password.

I quickly said. “I MISS MOM”
“Password correct.” Caiden replies .
Seth pushed me off the device with such strength id never seen before. I fell to floor and broke a finger in the process.
“ oouuuu-cchhh!"
I moan.
“ Let go off the little girl” He told his men. “ Keep an eye on Jerry.”

Oh! So the young man's name is Jerry. Jerry you are such a wicked soul. While I'm in severe pains and having crazy thoughts in my head, little Aisha rushed to help me up. Poor child.
I just have to be strong for her.“ Its alright. Shhhh! Don't worry. I got you baby. I got you- you are safe now!”

I noticed sympathy and regret in the eyes of the young man- Jerry. Underneath Aisha's whimper and shock I noticed his lips move in the dimly lit room. He uttered something like " I'm sorry. I really am"

The fire in the chimney illuminated the room.

Seth said“ Caiden. Retrieve at once the coordinates of the French Missiles. Drones on patrol preferably. ”

“ Excuse me sir!” Caiden replies“ Who are you? Unfamiliarity in your voice and choice of command. Where is Miss Kelly?
Seth Devin stares at me from above the table. Shock in his eyes.

“ Im- I'm here. Cay. I replied. " I moan in pain. “ I'm here. Just do what he says... Just do it-”

“ You dont sound fine" The AI replied. “ I - you are hurt. Strain in your voice.”

“ I'm fine, Caiden."

Seth picks up his gun from the table. Aims it at me.

“ Are you kidding me? He asked

“ What did I do?

“Make her stop asking me stupid questions and wasting my time."

“ I can't"

The story continues...

Olumyyde:
Tnx, sent another message.

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Olumyyde:
Hello, i sent u a pm.

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cassbeat:
Yea I think you should, cos the former title gives it some kinda feels like you know that you are about reading an action packed intriguing piece...

well that's the problem sir. Capital crime gives the whole plot away. And its a bit too upfront. Nevertheless, I will explain at the end why I changed it.

BTW dm me on whatapp bro. Urgent