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We're waiting for the next update o.

Interesting, but this update is too short to quench my thirst OP. Thumbs up anyway, you're doing a great job.

Haynnie:
What do you think about the last episode you read?

I believe that Tammy is in a fix and he doesn't know it yet. Things can escalate fast at this point, hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. Oyin will definitely not go without a fight, the funniest thing is that she knows that she's obviously not in love with Tammy. Things like this can actually happen in real life situations too. My opinion might be wrong sha, you're the one in charge of the driving seat. More updates pls.

everton4life:
That's all for today

Nice one OP.

Haynnie:
Btw, I've dropped a new episode. You can kindly go and check it out. Thanks!

Thanks OP, I just finished reading the latest episode you dropped. Still keeping my fingers crossed though.

Haynnie:
Thanks man
I've been sick si I haven't been able to write but ill try drop an update today if possible!

You're welcome OP. I'm here for you, all the readers of your story are here for you.

Haynnie:


Thanks

You're welcome sir.

Haynnie:
Hello guys and girls,

I’m so sorry for not posting part 5 of OBSESSION. I’ve been critically ill this past week and I'm on the journey to recovery. I hope I pick up my pen again and write the later episodes when I get better.

I promise to drop two episode on that day for keeping y'all waiting.

All I need is your prayers to recuperate quickly.

Thank you!

Eyaa, quick recovery OP.

You're doing great OP, just a few corrections and you're all set. More updates o.

Hermix:
You supposedly didn't read past the first line of my post, yet you are making strong remarks about my writing? Your attempt at derision is pathetic.

Below are paragraphs from your Royver and paaragraphs from misswrite. If you think Royver is a better writer, then you are not worth exchanging words with couldn't identify good writing if it was staring you in the face.

Thank you for providing another quack for me to unmask.

Really?
Now I know that I'm exchanging words with a toddler or a boy with the mentality of a toddler.
By the way, I'm still waiting for you to drop a story better than Larrysun if you have one since you claimed that you're a better writer. I'm not in for trolls right now, I'm in for business and damned serious mate. Give us a better literary work to read Mr better writer and I'll sing your praises all over this forum. If you fail to do this, then it's either you're less of a man and suffering from a bad case of low self esteem or you're not even a writer to start with.

Hermix:
Chioma gave out a harsh half-stifled yell as her phone fell off her hands and onto the floor. She grabbed firmly at her neck, her eyes wide with fright. She tottered around, still clutching her neck with both hands. It was as though she had a large mango seed stuck in her throat and was trying fruitlessly to get it out.

She lurched forward in the direction of the door, froze still, and then flumped backwards onto the floor; her head colliding with a side stool on its way. The thudding sound of the collision reverberated through the room.

I couldn't hide my excitement. I let out a loud "Yes!!" which probably explained the horrified look of surprise on her face as she lay on the floor paralyzed and helpless, gasping for air, every cell in her body fighting to keep her alive.

She inched her head forward in my direction, as if to speak, but no words came out. Just a burp. I drew closer and crouched in front of her. I wanted to get a better view. I wished I could pull the words out from her throat.
"Say the damn words you idiot," I bawled. She responded with a blank stare and vacant eyes. She was dead.

Trolling gone wrong, zero imaginations. Pls I'm still waiting for your literary work, Mr better writer.

Hermix:
This isn't a story. This is simply an attempt at trolling. Yet it's better written than the hot pile of garbage that you and your ilk celebrate on your beloved literature section.

It was originally posted on romance section to gauge people's reaction to the subject matter. I tried to make it seem like I was actively in the process of killing someone. The moderators moved it here.

Some paragraphs in my rushed posts, are more beautiful than anything your god Larrysun has ever written in his entire life. Imagine comparing me with a writer whose prose is on the level of primary school students.

Please come up with a different adjective other than bland.

This so called attempt is still thrash. I didn't read past the second line before I stopped. The so called garbage is still better than the best story you've ever written. I bet this is the second time you'll try to write something sef. You don't come out to criticize people who are better than you are destructively, it's a sign of your weakness as an individual, an inexcusable character flaw. If you don't see what I'm trying to point out to you, then I wish you the best in your endeavors. Just drop a better story than what Larrysun has written and I will personally sing your praises to the high heavens. There are and have been lots of great writers on this forum, I've been reading stories here as far back as 2011. The other writer you quoted as being the best here is even far from the best in my opinion. I can recommend writers I considered to be better than her if you like. Search for stories written by the likes of Royver and let me see you repeat that your childish comment again.
Only kids throw tantrums when they see others playing with better toys than theirs, learn to criticize others constructively. I repeat mate, if you can't comprehend this then it's a serious character flaw you have to correct about yourself. Peace!

And for the record, I've never and I don't idolize Larrysun. His works are not the best I've read on this forum, nevertheless I appreciate him making his literary works available for folks here. I've read stories written by him and other writers for free on this forum, drop yours too if you believe you can do better than them all. It's a challenge I hope you'll take up.

Romeo and Juliet by Shakespeare, saw it in my grandpa's library and as per lover of literature wey I be I decided to dive in and get entertained. About an hour later my eyes were dim, I was feeling dizzy cos of a terrible headache.

Omo, even though I believe this story is fictional, it's too bland OP. To even imagine that you accused a writer who's miles ahead of you about dropping bland lines/updates. I decided to check out your story thinking that you have something better to offer, I'll rather read thousands of Larrysun's bland stories.
You can improve sha, there's always room for improvement. But then destructive criticism of others even though you can't do any better is annoying.

I'm with you OP, following you bumpa to bumpa. Abeg we need updates o.

frankwriter:
Thank you.

More stories coming

You're welcome sir. I'm expecting that OP.

Thanks a lot Mr OP, for gracing us with this wonderful piece. Hopefully, we'll get to read more of your stories on this forum. Stay blessed.