₦airaland Forum

chistar01:
@Bobbybube I was hoping no one would notice it. The pressure to end the story was getting too much as it was dividing my fan base so I had to rush the end a bit even though I initially planned on elaborating more on how deeply in love Maxwell and Funmi were in love but decided to just cut it short using just a few chapters to do that to the best of my ability. Anyway thanks for your input and I would try to make sure the edited book would surely hint more on their feelings for each other.

As for the critics, I'm not one to complain over criticism because ask for it always as it makes me better, however, I always remind myself its the internet and people with different opinions are all over here so I read all the criticisms and pick the constructive ones while I ignore the others. Granted, this piece took a long time to complete but the way some of you guys put it was quite offensive like I'm being paid here or I owe anyone here so thank you mzchistar for standing up for me once again. Nevertheless, do keep the criticisms coming but try to be constructive.

The secondary moral of this story is simple, no matter how we try, like really try, some stories don't just have a happy end, that's just life. I'll let you decide what the primary moral is.

My vote of thanks would come after chapter 40.

dannybomb:
those spilling bad drugs here should be careful. writing b*llshit is not criticism. if you are impatient about this lovely sweet story u can go n hug ojuku grave for all I care

Dandeson1:
girl shut up, i wasn't talking to you in the first place, learn to mind your business sometimes . How can you write without a time frame, if at the beginning he says this story is gonna take 1yr or 2 or 3yrs to finish it would have bn difrnt, i just saw dis story bout 2weeks ago and i was even surprised its bn on for 2yrs, am sure u are a kid wus got nothing doing so its easy to play around 4 you, truth be told it actually starting to bore, its not enough to be good at something you also need discipline to excel, besides you sound to desperate to always get chista attention, what's up with dat, are you that cheap.