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Poems For ReviewRe: Please Review My Poem -i Weep For My Country:Nigeria by ohaleoghene(op): 7:52pm On May 18, 2013
ultra buzie: Yes ma, ur point taken, its no use arguing since you are adamant. Just remember that we all different point of view. As a training psychologist i can comprehend you, i just wish u could also comprehend me. Anyway:-) twas nice reviewing ur poem, i must say have learnt a lot. Keep the ball rolling....
AM not adamant, but you are not using the right criteria to judge .know lots of critics , my lecturers especially , they woukdnt use any of those to judge a poem . Thank you .
CelebritiesRe: Tonto Dikeh & Solidstar In A Relationship ?(pictures) by ohaleoghene(f): 6:16pm On May 18, 2013
Tonto just like been in the news . After all this porting from one dude to another , I remove cap for the guy wey go Finally marry her
FashionRe: Before And After Make-up Pictures Of Her Friends by ohaleoghene(f): 5:39pm On May 18, 2013
I have never used make up on my face , even my days in the university , was always going plane . Anyways , I dnt condemn it , if you love it , go for it . But too much makes one look like a painted masquerade. If I was a guy , I will go for the first girl withkout make up . She looks finer without make up
RomanceRe: Is My Friend Wrong? by ohaleoghene(f): 9:39pm On May 15, 2013
Does he want his money back ? Then he never truly loves her . If you truly love people , you don't force them to be with you . If she finds happiness with the other guy, let her go peacefully . Two years together , am sure she gave her time , energy , who knows body , too . He will only be acting immature if he wants his money back . Let him patiently wait for his own woman . When you love people , you don't force them to be with you .
RomanceRe: If Couples Doesnt Want Children, What Then Is The Motive Of The Marriage? by ohaleoghene(f): 9:28pm On May 15, 2013
There is more to marriage than just having kids. Thousands of couples have Kidd today yet divorce. If the basic reason for marriage is to bear children , then that should be a good reason why marriage rarely last forever these days . Nigerian parents are so wicked , most of them bare children so that they could have someone to take care of them in their old age . Many today sends their kids to school , so that they could get jobs , and take up family responsibities. Is annoying . Little wonder people don't have the zeal to study real good , they all study to pass and get a job . Have baked graduates everywhere who don't even qualify for jobs , yet they will come out crying unemployment is everywhere when they are so cling to that paper , and waiting upon the government to help . I love to marry , and have children to remind of the love my husband and I share, take care of them , work for myself , never be a burden on them , let them give me out of free will . If children are the main thing in marriage , why then should I marry when I can get any guy to impregnate me ? No , there is more to marriage . Though everyone has their reason . For me , is to love and stay closely to my partner forever .
CelebritiesRe: 'She Sleeps Around, I Want DNA Test For Daughter' - Laide Bakare's Hubby Speaks by ohaleoghene(f): 9:13pm On May 15, 2013
People just can't keep their family affairs private . Even if she tuly cheated , why are you openly saying yes she did ?
CrimeRe: Picture Of A Chinese Man Eating A Roasted Baby. by ohaleoghene(f): 9:07pm On May 15, 2013
Photoshop....that thing could be something else bringing the shape of a baby
TV/MoviesRe: The Production Of Science Fiction In Nollywood by ohaleoghene(op): 7:48pm On May 15, 2013
somadino: The good times are still ahead!
We are still far behind as a result of so many factors, a lot has to be put in place but the good thing is that we are doing something. I can't tell you not to write what you enjoy, please do. But if you write so the script could get made and it isn't, shouldn't you rethink it?
The era of mediocrity and wishy washy movies will go. As I said the good times are still ahead.
Can't that time be now ? Why do this generation keep pushing things to the next generation ? If don't do things now for ourselves, ozr children might never help us either
Foreign AffairsRe: Dead Man Wakes Up At His Funeral by ohaleoghene(f): 7:35pm On May 15, 2013
If na Nigeria, the man for say him see Jesus. When you are dead , you are dead . Is like sleep , you forget who you ever were .
CelebritiesRe: Dr Sid Shows-off Lekki Home by ohaleoghene(f): 4:06pm On May 15, 2013
chinnyonwu: Omo!is education still the key? shocked shocked
See your mouth . Who told you Dr Sid didn't go to school ? Education is not only when you go to the conventional university , that iss what Nigerians think . Over there , they have college for fashion designing , music , art, sport , and many things we think here as been vocational,thus shud be for the paupers. As for me , my girl will go to fashion designing school abroad , not this conventional university we have here
TV/MoviesThe Production Of Science Fiction In Nollywood by ohaleoghene(op): 10:09pm On May 14, 2013
I have asked this question severally 'why is NIgeria rank the third in the world of movies ?'This I used to ask because I know if is quality , Nigeria can't stand films from Mexico , England or Australia, yet Nollywood comes first before these countries . I got the answer today , and I was told that the ranking is base on quantity of films produce annually. Then I say 'oh , as for quantity , truly we should come the third because the number of films that nollywood produce , both the English and yoruba speaking genre put together produce more than we are willing to watch . Then again I asked myself 'Since we 've been expose to the world base on quantity , why didn't our film producers take upon themselves to produce quality movies , both technology and storyline wise ?' Off course have seen good movies like 'ije ', 'last flight to Abuja' , 'Mr and Mrs', and little many more . But we won't use those little to always beat our chest . Is hight time producers began to do more challenging movies , exploring all genres , as Nigerians are tired of watching ritualist movies , or 'runs girls ' kind of movies , as this only speak ills about the country , and probably, who knows, chase investors away , and make outsiders think of all Nigerians as been fetish . One genre I will like to see in Nollywood is science fiction. The world of the make believe is more than what we see everyday , we should employ fantasy , leaving our vievers a lasting impression after watching .The good thing , Nigerians are begining to develop the habit of going to the cinema, our government should help by planting at least two to three cinemas in all cities , with this , the producers can always make returns on the money spent , and this will open doors for investors , and also Nigeria could be a big tourist Center . Art is a beautiful thing , a thing that easily appeal to man . I am a script writer , I have writen some works on science fiction , but nobody seems to want this type of genre, their arguements was Nigerians aren't ready for that type of movies , but we all enjoy sci-fi from Hollywood. With this I ask , when will Nigeria live up to her glory as giant of Africa ?
RomanceRe: She Has Been Pretending All This While. by ohaleoghene(f): 5:27pm On May 14, 2013
Lover boy , first is wrong to have a girl stay with you as students that both of you are . She has told you all with her mouth , what do you want again if not to learn lessons , dust yourself like nothing ever happened , I know is hard , but try . Most importantly , please face your studies leave some person who doesn't have respect for her body as a woman . Sorry o when you are ready , you will get a good woman , but don't habor a girl at home o ..I so hated this when I was a student.
TV/MoviesRe: Bollywood Vs Hollywood - Which Is Better? by ohaleoghene(f): 5:05pm On May 14, 2013
Bros afam , why are u comparing tutus fish to kote ? When it comes to technology and good films , nice story line tha will keep you glued to the TV is Hollywood .They v gone so far that bollywood is only trying to catch up . Though they are trying now , have saw my name is khan , 3 idiots slumdog millionaire, all bollywood movies , I couldn't help but say they are trying too . But pls Hollywood is far far ahead . Pls can someone tell me why Nigeria is ranked the third in the word ? I have been wondering , for we all know that Mexican films beat us hand down .so why was Nigeria ranked over it ?
RomanceRe: Don't Take Off Your Panties Just Because... by ohaleoghene(f): 12:06pm On May 14, 2013
I only take my pant down when I want to wewe , and I took him home because he is just too wonderful yes , he says am beautiful always
CelebritiesRe: SHOCKING!! Top Nollywood Lesbian Of All Time by ohaleoghene(f): 11:57am On May 14, 2013
Genevive don suffer . Is so glaring the second person is her . While chip into people's sex life ? Yet you can't bodly call names . You are a coward , a big one at that .
CelebritiesRe: Nollywood Actor Eating Road Side Food(picture) by ohaleoghene(f): 11:49am On May 14, 2013
I doubt he is an actor , then again if he is , then he should be the 5th to 8th grade actor . Who knows him ? Probably he is been picked once or twice to act as a gate man in movies . Op , allow the man chop , he is human , let him live his life as he might never get a role again to play , if he does , is should often be on a long while with minute roles as a passer by
Poems For ReviewRe: Please Review My Poem -i Weep For My Country:Nigeria by ohaleoghene(op):
ultra buzie: ALL AM CONCERNED ABOUT IS TO KEEP THE READERS GOING...
With all shame and humility i stand corrected you have opened my eyes to the fact that u were nt digressing. Am really sorry for that, pls accept my sincere apology. But as for the rest of my criticism i have more to say on that.
Its a melancholy poem, i agree totally, but would it be better if instead of comedy u make use of sacasm, dry humour, and irony to mock the persona's pledge to an unfaithfull mistress? That would have given the readers sumtin to chew on.
As wendy cope's persona wuld say poetry is boring, even though u re making use of blank verse and free verse there should be a rhythm!!
You not wanting to cage yourself like wordsworth is your own opinion its not by force to use rhymes, but there should a rhythm even if its a prose like poem.
For example, Romeo in shakesphere play was in a melancholic mood when Rosaline betrayed his love, there was suspense, sacasm, ironx and to cap it all a rhythm! Which beautifies and made it an admirable work of art. Shakesphere didnt say becos romeo was in a melancholic mood not to include those literary terms mentioned.
I hope u've gotten my point.
Madam , I have read hundreds of poems during my days in the university and out of it , too . I will appreciate if you criticise my poem with just my own words , not bringing in an external work to weigh it , uless you are doing a comparative work , then you will have to bring up your lines . My poem lacking humour is intentional. Is a satirical work which has establish it existence without the use of comedy . If you insit that I should have use comedy or humour as you put it , then I humbly say maybe you v not read much poetic works . There are some poet whose work are all gloomy , some use humour to lighten their audience , while some care less because they want their readers to take pity on them and feel their anguish . Off course I have some satirical works which I use humour , but this , I deviate from using it . As for my work lacking rhythm, thank goodness you also say is a blank verse , a run off line poem ,then why should I cage myself to put in rhythm. One disadvantage the classical poets had was too concentrate too much on making rhythm, thus some loss the message they are trying to pass . A poem is beautiful once the poet use meaningful metaphor , image and a simple message the readers can easily indentify with . If you had said I have not done a beautiful work base on other arguements , then I would have been happier , because that will help me tighten my seat belt . I didn't even take my time to write the poem , I know it still need lot of brushing up to do .thank you again madam . I wish I had received more reviews. Least I forget , Romeo and Juliet belongs to the dramatic genre , Shakespear didn't use humour in all his lines , there are some places where you will feel gloomy and pity the characters . Ge only use humour to lighten up the readers at long interval . Also remeer this is a short piece , Romeo and Juliet has a long space of establishment
Poems For ReviewRe: Please Review My Poem -i Weep For My Country:Nigeria by ohaleoghene(op): 11:15am On May 14, 2013
ultra buzie: ALL AM CONCERNED ABOUT IS TO KEEP THE READERS GOING...
With all shame and humility i stand corrected you have opened my eyes to the fact that u were nt digressing. Am really sorry for that, pls accept my sincere apology. But as for the rest of my criticism i have more to say on that.
Its a melancholy poem, i agree totally, but would it be better if instead of comedy u make use of sacasm, dry humour, and irony to mock the persona's pledge to an unfaithfull mistress? That would have given the readers sumtin to chew on.
As wendy cope's persona wuld say poetry is boring, even though u re making use of blank verse and free verse there should be a rhythm!!
You not wanting to cage yourself like wordsworth is your own opinion its not by force to use rhymes, but there should a rhythm even if its a prose like poem.
For example, Romeo in shakesphere play was in a melancholic mood when Rosaline betrayed his love, there was suspense, sacasm, ironx and to cap it all a rhythm! Which beautifies and made it an admirable work of art. Shakesphere didnt say becos romeo was in a melancholic mood not to include those literary terms mentioned.
I hope u've gotten my point.
Madam , I have read hundreds of poems during my days in the university and out of it , too . I will appreciate if you criticise my poem with just my own words , not bringing in an external work to weigh it , uless you are doing a comparative work , then you will have to bring up your lines . My poem lacking humour is intentional. Is a satirical work which has establish it existence without the use of comedy . I'd you insit that I should have use comedy or humour as you put it , then I humbly say maybe you v not read much poetic work . There are some poet whose work are all gloomy , some use humour tto lighten their audience , while some care less because they want their readers to take pity on them abd feel their anguish . Off course I have some dtatical works which I use humour , but this , I deviate from using it . As for my work lacking rhythm, thank goodness you also say is a blank verse , a run off line poem ,then why should I cage myself to put in rhythm. Obe disadvantage the classical poets had was too concentrate too much on making rhythm, thus some loss the message they are trying to pass . A poem is beautiful once the poet use meaningful metaphor , image and a simple message the readers can easily indentify with . If you had said I have dobe a beautiful work base on other arguements , then I would have been happier , becausenit will help me tighten my seat belt . I didn't even take my time tobwrite the poem , I know it still need lot of brushing up to do .thankbyou again madam . I wish I have received more reviews
CrimeRe: Woman Missing Since 2003 Found In Son’s Cupboard by ohaleoghene(f): 10:52am On May 14, 2013
Not surprise, I have been hearing news like this since I was born in this country , and am sure things like this won't stop till THX kingdom comes . All for money kwa ? What you will leave behind when death comes, so why kill to get it ?
Jokes EtcRe: The Pastor, The Wind & The Cameraman. by ohaleoghene(f): 11:04pm On May 13, 2013
The cameraman is a wizard
CelebritiesRe: I Need A Serious Lady In My Life Now, I Want To Get Married – Olu Maintain by ohaleoghene(f): 3:23pm On May 13, 2013
So all this while , na flings you dey do till you reach 40 ? I cry for.you ...let me call ekaete to come appy , she is good in all ramifications
CelebritiesRe: Bukky Wright Spotted Without Makeup. by ohaleoghene(f): 3:18pm On May 13, 2013
[quote author=-Mr Cork-]..this is why i love white womens & dont dont black womens...they uglier without make up (no oofeinse) angry[/quote]Please Mr cork , go for some English classes
CelebritiesRe: Emem Isong Tells Why She Doesn't Feature Yoruba Actors In Her Movies by ohaleoghene(f):
Tribalism is found in
every nook and cranny of the country
CelebritiesRe: Recent Divorcee, Kate Henshaw Spotted With A Mysterious Man At Shoprite [photos] by ohaleoghene(f): 7:10pm On May 12, 2013
icebebe: Yea she's actually enjoyin wiv som1's husband and father,shame on all dis celebs
You embarrassed me with this post . How did you know she is enjoying with one's husband or father ? That she is a celeb means she is going out with all the men seen with her ? Did you for once think that this man could be a in -law , brother , uncle , or a frnd , maybe a business associate . To even know this comment is from a fellow woman is heart aching ...women are the cause of 99 percent troubles we have in the world today , so quick to judge and conclude . Little wonders marriage , and relationship rarely last these days , because we v lost it
CelebritiesRe: Davido Buys New Rolex Watch Of 1.5 Million by ohaleoghene(f): 7:02pm On May 12, 2013
I yah seen it , let me go back to sleep
CelebritiesRe: Yvonne Nelson Shows Off Cute Mum On Mother's Day by ohaleoghene(f): 5:54pm On May 12, 2013
The mother is really beautiful , now I see where she got it from ...they look happy and one will still have that bond between a mother and a child

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