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Tolexander[/quote]guys bring it on

On a long journey to the land of the spirit, branches in Sammy hoe's thread, wow the guy is doing a good job o, maybe I should take me along sef so he'll keep writing along wit me.......nice one bro

Bookmarked.....nice job

dazz661: I really don't understand damex's story...... or is there
A second part to it ?

chill the guy dey come

repogirl: Sambroose, nice try, simple, the conclusion was unexpected for me, with a message to pass along. Good job, will keep the remainder of my opinion for later.

Ishilove: Nastydroid and sambroose, thank you for the commendable attempts.

Where are the rest of the entries? C'mon people, we need more entertainment!!

repogirl: Sambroose, nice try, simple, the conclusion was unexpected for me, with a message to pass along. Good job, will keep the remainder of my opinion for later.

in kslib voice all izz well

Wow.....our own Eze promoe is back(nwanne ndewo)....Nice one

<Two wrongs >



There was this land which was suspected
to be rich with natural
Resources such as crude oil, the land was
owned by my grandfather, it
was located along the village stream,
where every villagers get there
drinking water from, My grandfather is
now late, So his two sons was at
war over who to claim the ownership of
the land, but the tradition puts it that the first son is the rightful owner of the land, but My father couldn't afford to lose the land to his senior brother. The two wives tried there
possible best to settle the
differences, but it wasn't helping
matter, like the saying when two
elephants collides, the ground suffers the
damages, we the children and
the wives were the people suffering the damages.
Ichie Amadi was my father and the
younger brother to Nwa oku, Nwa
oku was the first son.
Ichie Amadi my
father was a very powerful
an in the society so he thought he could
use his power to snatch the
land from his elder brother, he even went as
far as buying over the igwe on
his behalf, but his children(my siblings)
were not in support of his
actions, I was the Judas of the house, cox I was the only person supporting
my father's evil way, my father cherish
me because of that.
On that faithful day my father told me to
prepare that we are going to
war at nwa oku's compound, that we are
going to destroy his ego, my
father said his senior brother could have
easily given him the land
but was scared on what the villagers will
say about him, that he was a
weakling, that was why he was still
holding out on the land, but on
that faithful day my father vowed to
settle the scores, I was excited,
I wanted them to fight, I wanted my
father to beat the old fool up in
his own backyard, I was agitated, I was
even optimistic.
So we set out without even informing
our household about our quest,
on reaching Nwa oku's compound my
father started shouting where is
that Man who calls his my brother and
still behaves like a monkey, yes
I was smiling at the side of my father, My
father continued his ranting
saying that when a palm branch reaches
its height it gives way for a
fresh one to grow, nwa oku you're too old
to manage that land, why
can't you leave it for me, am still young
and agile, my father was
beginning to sound paranoia,was he
pleading with the old fool or what,
I was still about to figure out the right
answer,nwa oku was steel and clam,he finally clares his throat
to speak, Amadi you no that
the elephant and the tiger do not go
hunting on the same pasture, At the
mention of tiger I tried not to laugh,so
these old fool his calling
him self a tiger, wonders shall never end,
I was impatient, I can't
wait any longer, I wanted my father to
chase the tiger away from our
pasture abi which kind rubbish be dis,
Nwa oku continued his tiger
speech saying he who pursues an
innocent chicken always stumbles,
finally the old fool confesses that he
was still a chicken, atleast I was relief that he's no more a tiger but a mere
chicken, and a mere chicken can
never withstand an elephant no matter
what, since my father was still
an elephant then there is nothing to be
afraid of, Amadi I'm your
senior brother, I remembered the day which our
mother gave birth to you Amadi,
you were very small, I even carried you at
my back when we were
younger, I protected you from the village
bullies, Amadi don't bite
the hand that feeds you, Nwa oku was
sounding emotional, what the fvvck
was these man talking about, I looked at my
father direction, he was
looking like a confused man, I bet he
wasn't thinking straight at that moment, I wanted to help him shorn the old man
ranting, he continued Amadi we
shouldn't be fighting because of our
father property, we could manage
the land together, we could work
together and ensure that the white
men coming to survey the land next
week will not start planing on how
to cheat us, I was even started to see
senses in what the old man was
saying, My father dropped to his
knees and started shedding hot
tears,apologizing to his brother, I was also
confused, in a battlefield if
the leader falls his followers surrenders,
since we are defeated, I
had no choice than to join my father and
beg for forgiveness. Nwa oku
was also crying and he came forward to
hug us.

Let join hand to make Nigeria a better a
place"" HAPPY INDEPENDENCE
IN ADVANCE""

The End.

repogirl: For me a think the 10000 words idea would b great....for subsequent editions anyway. The plot would be better developed. for me personally, it would be easier to write a 10000 word story to a 2500 word story cos there'll be more depth. 2500 words is more of an essay and quite short.
Anyway, good luck, maybe there should be a prize for who submits first to ginger some people. I'm on standby o, waiting to read.

What shall it profit a man to submit first and still loses out on the $100......yes I said it $100 dats ma main motivator

Why do you always like to make me shed tears......ehn glowing......why

Damex333: sam, thanks bross, mehn expect an update by monday sha am trying to do an exam and you know the $100 stuff

Ma guy no be beans o, infact am planing on re_writing and re_editing mine ......$100 no be sere_sere

Ewwww****shedding tears****oh glowing can you dry ma tears

*****Yawns******odikwa serious

Action--The Tenth Generation by Frank3.6
www.nairaland.com/1139191/tenth-generation
Thriller--The Guardians Rise Of The Powers That Bee by Mynd_44
www.nairaland.com/1279737/guardians-rise-powers
Crime--The Religion by Frank3.6
www.nairaland.com/1273303/religion
Fantasy--Love Life On Campus by Bukkydan
www.nairaland.com/1147210/love-life-campus
Romance--Chocolate And Sushi by Glowingscenes
www.nairaland.com/1296911/nigerian-story-chocolates-sushi
Comedy--Man Wey Dey Reason by Floww1759
www.nairaland.com/1217099/man-wey-dey-reason
Adventure--Attai The Player From Kano by Floxy_Rebirth
www.nairaland.com/1154793/attai-player-kano
Horror--Ghost-Full by Slickest
www.nairaland.com/1211210/ghost-full/3

More garri for damex......the dude is doing great

[quote author=Mazi_Omenuko]Floor is still open for more writers...[/quote]game on, mazi am interested

dam it, I can't take dz any longer........I'll be writing for Maria, Mr.zuby painted ha wrong.....

Slickest you're so so on point,your single is mind blowing,ur dairy is soul blowing.
You're the boss**i commot cap for you o

Nice write up.......keep it coming

I just deposited N500,000. ma guy hope u done see am, oya come continue Jor

Damex333.............nice write up( don't lemme call you the bomb yet)

Foxy.....stop lying and come and update Jor

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