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Samtolly4JESUS: Seconded sire!meaning sir...... |
Olastep1: I have PRAYED for NIGERIA, FASTED for@olastep, this can simply be coverted to poem, work on the word usage n convert it to poem. Although, it can be complex if u're not an art student.... Just follow the poem writing procedure n convert it to poem. I will like reading it as poem... U can give it any title anyway.. It just an advice oooo |
Great congratulation to those who have sail through the hurdle of admission. Us who are still looking forward in other list shall not be let down in jesus name... Oluwatola let pour champagne n not G-flake pls don't tell me S.U don't celebrate... @fyneiboy n others, congrant... We that are still hoping shall celebrate in jesus name... |
I will implore u guys to continue ur argy-bagy cos it one of the thing that will keep this threading moving... I won see samuel peter and kleshcoky in the boxing ring of nairaland.... |
I thank God for my safe journey to oau... One doesn't need to stay @home n think miracle will happen overnight without working towards it, i went to ife today to seek help from my faulty admin cos am 3.5 behind the cutoff mark, n i take God cos is not 2 late for me... Praying to God to see me through... |
GREAT NIGERIA STUDENT!!!. Great ife, great oauite. Am writing with high dignity to address the oauite here on nairaland. I have been staying behind the bar for so long watching the superb drama going on between oluwatola and co. Concerning the G-flake and the jet stuff (no long thing, D G-flake is highly paramount that no one on campus can stay without it). Fyneboi, i know u can't remember me very well but if u check through ur c.rk n literature thread u will know me better... Am not in support of the executive of the group u found because you didn't consult the elders on this thread before u position the executives... Willing to meet u guys all in oau, most especially oluwatola my course mate..., Best student school in best place like oau. |
Pls, urgent reply is needed. I want to go to ife on wednesday to lobby with the official in my faculty... Pls will they be there, asking those who ve been to ife to check the cutoff... |
Congratulation to those who ve made it through the cutoff, though am a bit concern cos i ve 3.5 behind my cutoff mark..... Going for eng edu, @oluwatola5, hoping to meet u in the faculty..... However oluwa is involve.... No qualm we shall all celebrate........ |
I felt ve hurt myself, i never take the competiton so serious... I submitted the least of my poem n was rated last 6 contestant, actually i know my poem(THE FORTUNE TELLER) Lack some poetic licence, rule n rhyme..... I feel cheating myself cos i never take it serious, just saw the competiton online n paste one of my poem in my journal..... Great to the moderator, like the u organise everything... I was the one who sent u a message requesting on how i was judge but ve seen it.... Wishing to be part of this next time n give my best shot. |
carik: [/b]now dat it ve been edited ur comment |
seydam21: You are welcome!.....but i dont no how u made such a mistake. First page 1: comfirmation of a valid pin numberD Did ve been done now, n the worst part is i don't know anybody in offa. Infact ve not been there before let alone know where the school is situated.... Is there no means to edit or will i be admit and in the other screening i will tender my paper... I ve all my paper n i wrote d waec in 2011..... Can u help me out |
I have written the exams but i didn't fill my o'level cos i didn't see it while registering, or i did not see because of my tension. Pls wat can i do, cos it written on my status: core requirement not satisfied. Other requirement not satisfied... I hope this will not deny my admission cos they will think i used awaiting result.... Need an urgent suggestion... @seydam21, am highly indebted for every tips, supports and helps of urs that u offered to me.... I will like u to help me with the above blunder i made.... |
Oluwatola5: Am feelin so jittery about all dis, Lord pls jxt let dis b favourable....nothing to be afraid of, it will always favour us.... |
Guys i must be factual, am frustrated with dis offa stuff. I just get someone who will help me buy the card but the question now is will bank come tomorrow... |
You guys, should help with pin stuff... I ve been unable to get the pin since monday, i went to skye bank ikeja plaza in lagos all to no avail.. I delve everywhere in lag but could not get it, pls help... |
[b][/b][color=#990000][/color] NO 30 THE FORTUNE TELLER I had known my future, Not through the fortune teller, Through the vision of hard work and prayer, My yesterday is dim, Today is showy, Definitely my tomorrow will be splendid. Who is a fortune teller to say my destiny? Who had empowered the fortune teller? To cast my destiny with cowries, My destiny is myself,myself is destiny. You are a palmist of lies, If you had seen my destiny, why not know your. A fortune-guesser you are indeed. My destiny is myself,myself is my destiny. Fortune teller you see nothing, But you form something. You say the fisherman shall be impecunious, fortunately he had become affluence as a fisherman. Through word the world is generated, Everything that comes through words the saint says is good, But yours is destructive. Soothsayer of deceit, Remember you forecast declivity to the alien, Now they are better than you. Forecaster of evil Making silver paper through cowries of lies, Throw your cowries and tell me the country's future, Your result is nothing than maybe. Your libation is to cajole, If the creator says yes, who are you to say no? Author by: Tosin damilare Iyiola(tosdam). |
Oluwatola5 drop me ur 2go account, so dat we can discuss our department..... |
POEM THE MIGHTY ARE FALLING!!! The mighty are falling, into the pit of deceiving, calling the attention of the nation, to the failure of the nature. This is a bad omen, in the country of men. The loser are gainer, and the mighty are deceiver. Let israelite, judge themselves by their work, No, they won't because they know evil are their work. Let our figure head judge themselve if they are righteous, No,they won't for they are wretch. Let the judge, judge themselves if they are not deceiver, No, they won't because they are receiver, The mighty are falling, into the pit of deceiving. Corruption start in the mind of a mighty man, and end in mind of the country man, Mighty, have this mind among yourself, that you must works of him who sent you. For there will come a day that shall account to him that sent you. Whether you hear or refuse to hear, The one who sent you shall judge you. |
A poem from the collection poems of "IYIOLA OLUWATOSIN D". ODE TO MAAMI Maami the orisa of my life, That drove me to earth in a journey of nine month strife, Discomfort herself for my journey. Maami, my first cry in this land of bitter and honey, Is to tell you thank you! After my journey, the first thing you taught me was how to eat, Which mean i must learn how to live within me? Later, i learn how to crawl before you, This means i will always live to give my honour to you. Then, i learn to speak, This means i will not be coward before anybody. Orisa of my life, You are the deity i can't reject or ignore in my life, You warm me when i was at cold, You become a proletariat before the bourgeois to overcome my odd. Maami, i shall pay all my debt i owned you, Because you are what i become today, I have prayed and fasted to the creator, To safe your soul for me. When i look at my wall mirror is Baba i see, But when i see you i know you are the gold of my life. Maami, a million thank you is not enough for you, You guide me in the thorns of life, Tell me which way to follow. Orisa mi, i can't forget you, You are the only statue i built in my heart, That will remain till my last breath. |
It's so paining that i get to know this thread at late time, this is a thread that add more credit to a writter. It's my pleasure to join as a writter of the association. However, if not late to join contact me through my email: tosindam61@yahoo.com, 07031953755. Am ready to devote my time,effort and intelligent to make it animate. Looking forward to hear from the figure head of the association. |
Ur comment is highly needed, to know if the poem is good to go. |
ferdimako: My friend edit that your headline. Why do people always do not know when to turn a verb into an adjective? To be cancel...God is involve,am confuse.Thanks brother, but the headline can't be edit again, i knew it's as well i made the blunder in a haste to post. Thanks for your concern but i think the content matter most. The headline ought to be "Either utme or ume should be cancel" |
It is no more a rumour or fabricate lies that both jamb and post jamb had been corrupted by there administrive body, the issuing of admission is no longer base on merit but rather on connection and lobbying with official body with money to get your name fix on the admission lists. The corruptive act is becoming unbearable as so many merit student are deprive of admission at the expense of the rich and the so called connected ones. This act is a major factor leading to nigeria producing half bake graduate, because the admitted are not worthy of admission. The paining aspect is that the super lazy student score higher mark than the industrious student in any given exam through cheating and malpractise, their renegade behaviour earn them rewards and praises from relatives and friend. The assidious student are neglected, because the common slogan around now is no excuses for failure which discourage the hardworking ones, causing them to substitute cheating for reading. The university tertiary matriculation examination (utme) and university matriculation examination (ume) are now clearly know to be a money making venture extorting student yearly for there own selfish interest. The excerbating one is that scoring 200 and above in both jamb and post jamb this day is not a guarantee of being giving admission in university, most hardworking student now give it up by going polytechnic or college of education leaving the connected one to school in university. The question now is either of this body need to be cancelled, which one do we cancel because both are corrupt. |
[i][/i][font=Lucida Sans Unicode][/font] is this thread still flowing, contact me @ tosindam61@yahoo.com . |
Nice one guy, though one of the problem on this thread is that people don't encourage with comment. I can visualize your rhymes, the diction is too simple and you need to ingredient your poem with literary terms. you can as well check out for my poem on this thread. Nice one, keep it cos Rome is not built in a day. |
I highly need the comments of the gurus and elites on this thread to know the faulty and amiss area in the poem. |
POEM: OH! NIGERIA. Posted by Tosin Iyiola Damilare Nigeria our father land, flowing oil like water, growing natural resource like tree, declining like candle, suffering like slave. Oh! Wicked Nigeria, why thous forsake your children children, father gnash his teeth on his soil, sun steal him during his survival, made him drank from the river of pain. Father wasted his life in war to rescue you, free his children children from bondage, oh! wicked Nigeria why had thou father effort be fruitless, blessing father had on us before his last breath, anathematize you turn it to. Oh! Wicked Nigeria, why thou made alien live like king on father land, riding us as horse, increasing children children heart-throb, controlling children children on father land, Oh! Wicked Nigeria, awake from slumber, dry the tear of children children, hear our prayer and calm like sea water, crown us with love,unity and peace. |
Hausa: @ u sir, i hav just checked thoroughly and ur name isnt there.205 and 216 respectively.... |
Hausa: naaaa.I will be grateful if u can offer help to me by checking my name on the v.c law list for me. Reg no 25924712HG TOSIN DAMILARE IYIOLA. Since they said it hasn't been upload. |
GodzBELOVED: It is out. I saw it when I went to the admissions office on tuesday.pls check my name for me on the law v.c lists.reg no 25924712HG TOSIN DAMILARE IYIOLA. Since they said it hasn't been upload. |
Sadeluhv: 1. Litotes1/4 dat ur score. Correction 1. "the hoe is her barber" a. metaphor is a direct comparison b. Hyperbole is exaggeration of words c. Personification is an act of animating inanimate things, that is taking non-living things as if they have life.e.g the hoe barbed my hair. D. Litote is an understatement. From the analysis of the objectives A. Is the answer, direct comparison, comparing a hoe to barber. 2. Metonymy, that is using a things to represent another. 3. "lazy bone with kleptomania fingers, axing neighbour door at night with hunger, crepst had made neighbour labour in vain, twenty years hard labour with hot blood flowing in vein, now derelict to pain. That poem was excerpt from my poem, the poem by me entitle "THIEF" . 1. The subject matter of that poem is thief, kleptomania fingers means people who steal what does not belong to them, they are regarded as lazy fellow who doesn't work but steal. When they are hungry they came to broke neighbour door packing away his twenty years hard labour, what he work hard for to get where been pack away on of a sudden.... I wish u read the poem. 2. The sound use is rhythme which is aabb. If u wish to read my collection of poems never hesitate to ask for them. I may post it online. |
fynestbarrister: SolutionThat ur past question is nothing but a failure, am very sure and 2 sure to say dat richard constitution of 1946 was expected to last for nine year(principle of Government and citizenship education textbook page 84). 5. Am not very sure of number 5, but i taught it should be separation cos the separation of power avoid others organs to interfere in the work of one another which create room for the existence of check and balance. 6. Is nothing but state ownership, 7. Am very of this to be dissolution pls get a textbook to mark my work am very sure, if am to fail it should be no 5, wish am not very sure of, for others take it to any prof to mark..... |