kobonaire:
Interesting read .... @Goodheart02 Is this your original work?

Yes bro.

vivaciousvivi:
Finally, a good old fashioned horror story. Following..

Thanks dearie.

Sexytemi:
spooky........and pls op don't keep us waiting for long oo....following sha bumper to bumper.

I just dropped an update.

Laveda:
Seriously I'm following this ....
Sinizia, let's go through this together

I'll hold you.

zzzzy:
I'm scared of reading this.

Don't be bro. It's just a story.

MightyFortress:
Fearville.....funny name

Lol

tgmservice:
The only horror am going to go through is reading this long thrash

Thanks a lot. Atleast you opened it.

sade1:
Doctor goodie goodie, hope we won't have to wait long hours for the updates of this...BTW wasup with our other two stories, you on FP already here oh, so no shigbin shigbin

My dear I was surprised to see it on FP oo. The other threads are still rolling.

hfinest1:
everyone is here except me... even the chief himself, chief lalasticlal... the bashorun of Nairaland kingdom... this looks promising... make i pitch my tent here


in other news: labaski you fall my hand... you see confam Tory like this, u no fit mention hfinest1 make i come follow u gbadun... u dey gbadun alone... diaris God in everything you're doing


eniqurl will surely love this story

You're welcome bro.

goodheart02:



I just dropped an update.

okay ....tnx......still waiting for your updates....I'm a fan of horror stories.... and nice job u doing.

phantomiced:
op. you got me hooked and walked away?? why evuls

No bro. I just updated.

tuzle:
op see what u have caused now, i no fit go toilet go urinate and piss dey catch me die

Abeg try.

Idydarling:
nice story op, updates abeg

An update just came in dear.

goodheart02:




I'll hold you.

Waiting for the next update

eROCK247:
I think I'm going to love this...following.

Thanks a lot pal.

gwenj:
Ooohhpee were are u neh?Come update abeg,u can't fit leave us like dis!

Shey you don see the update.

Randyhot:
Op after i dont see you in the next 15 minutes, i will start wrappin my bini weed right here, come laveda and sexytemi i go have 3some with ya'll, make una go buy that thing from chemist come back jare.

Loool

is it finished

Chai see film.... Abeg, adjust make I sidon near you.

goodheart02:




Don't be bro. It's just a story.

nice story. I just finished reading the already posted chapters

Horror OMG!I L♥√e horror.
Keenly followin
Nice piece GOODHEART kipt it up

Abeg make I use this opportunity ask. I hear say LALASTICALA na the CHIEF of Nairaland. Abeg, I no Sabi the person o. Make una help o

ride on bro.... at ur back.....

Nice one but the update too short na
Abegi,make u feed us jhare

goodheart02:

Yes bro.

great work - keep it up.

Okay!!!
I saw this on the FP...

I've read all previous posts and well done

GoodHeart02...
U've got an impressive write-up here...I like the pictures &imagery you paint using words...I still feel you can improve on them.

This is necessary to give your readers a clear picture of what you want them to see...Horror stories need a whole lot of description in a brief, concise...and eerie way!!!

More spontaneous flow of ideas to you.

Thumbs Up!

Following!!! (More Updates)

OP,ur story line is dope...Ammonit.Pls keep 'em coming.

I don't wanna be a silent follower.

Well done .

Goodheart I hope U didn't post this short update to keep peoples hopes high?what is taking ur time and u can see u have enof readers so what else or ur short of ur story?

Purposebabe:
Abeg make I use this opportunity ask. I hear say LALASTICALA na the CHIEF of Nairaland. Abeg, I no Sabi the person o. Make una help o

No be chief na Nairaland chief priest him be.

























I beg na JOKE OOOOOH

NXTpls Am Seriously Following. Hi Peepz

Yea,going gud...but ehn,e be like say na only morning or afternoon i go dey read this story o b4 i go begin dey dream 4 nyt like marie...Op,nice one.kip it rolling