You are doing a good job, lady PamelB. Do you need assistance with the typing

Great job nne, its been an awesome story. You may have to check again your introduction, I think the character "Chukwu Emeka" was introduced as "Chukwu ebuka", pls have a look.

Meanwhile, happy birthday and many happy returns to your Sis.

this story is a bomb,,,,nice one,,,thumps up

Good story. Lessons learnt

God bless u Amanda for making my day! Sweet sweet....

[color=#990000][/color]It serves them right,meanwhile,Amanda is a gurl with a big heart.keep it rolling pamelB,more ink to ur pen•••

Bestlily



Your sister is suffering from multiple heart break... Come console her!!!

Forgive me. I started as Chukwuebuka but I checked again and it was Emeka so I had to continue like that.

Pchinak:
Great job nne, its been an awesome story. You may have to check again your introduction, I think the character "Chukwu Emeka" was introduced as "Chukwu ebuka", pls have a look.
Meanwhile, happy birthday and many happy returns to your Sis.

We started talking to mum,asking her of possibilities of getting Nenye out of the house. She was surprised about our sudden interest in her. We had to tell her what happened that Thursday,then she said something that I never thought of.

Mum: If the police can get that criminal to confess to the crime and name whoever sent him which is madam Okoye, it will be a lot easier. She would be arrested and you'll get all your properties back. That way,you can take care of your sister without her having to leave the house.

Kamsi: Mum you're a genius. Let's go to the station immediately.

Mum: But wait. Why will a woman treat her child that way? I've never heard of that.

Me: I'm surprised myself.

Mum: Anyways,let's just go immediately. That woman doesn't deserve to be with a child.

We called Ted,Ken and Gospel who were all at work and they decided to join us at the station.
We got there an hour later and mum informed the DPO on duty of our mission which was to see the criminal. He willingly brought him in and I saw him. He was the boss,the one who had molested me most.

He saw me and looked away immediately.

Me: Why?

He looked at me and bent his head.

Me: I'm I not young enough to be your sister? What did I ever do to you?

Guy1: You no do me anything abeg.

Me: Then why? Why did you do that to me? Every girl always cherishes her first time. But look at what you did to me. You made me regret being a woman,you made me wish for death. Why?

Guy1: Sister abeg no vex. Na your mama o. My mind never settle since we do that operation. i bin no wan talk but now wey i don see you,abeg,forgive me. She pay us good money for that job. I no suppose say this one but na me and my guys dem kill your papa.

Kamsi and I shouted in surprise. Mummy looked away and shook her head.

DPO: Inspector,take him back to the cell. Get three boys from the counter. We're going to arrest someone.

Inspector: Yes sir.

He led the rapist back to the cell and in the next minute,we were all riding to the Okoye's house. It was when we were driving out of the station that Ted, Ken and Gospel were also driving in. We all got down again and tipped them all that happened.

We all drove in a convoy and soon enough,we were at the house. We got down and I led the way into the house. Mrs Okoye was watching a premiere at televista. She saw the entourage and sat up.

Mrs Okoye: Amanda,you're here. What's happening?

That moment,Nenye came downstairs. She came and hugged Kamsi and I,then greeted everyone else in the room.

DPO: You're Mrs Okoye right?

Mrs Okoye: Of course.

DPO: You're under arrest,for masterminding the rape of Miss Chimamanda Okoye and the death of Mr Alex Okoye.

Nenye: What? Daddy?

I nodded

Nenye: Jesus.

Mrs Okoye said nothing. She just stood up and went to the police officer.

Mrs Okoye: Can I call my lawyer?.

Mrs Kalu: Imagine. What will he defend? Its crystal clear that you're guilty.

Nenye was sobbing now and I was holding her affectionately.

DPO: Thanks for not resisting arrest. You all will also follow us to the station to write down your statements.

Mrs Okoye was arrested and while they led her away,I slumped on a couch to cry while Nenye went upstairs to change into something better.

I felt a hand on my shoulder and I looked up. I looked up and it was Ken.
I stood up and we hugged each other affectionately.

Ken: It's okay. Stop crying.

Me: She killed daddy. She killed the father that I know. Why is she this wicked? Because he said he was going to take me out of the house?

He hugged me again and this time,he didn't let go.

Ken: We're here for you now. I promise you'll never feel pain,hurt or heartbreak anymore. We won't leave you,I promise.

He let go and pecked my forehead.

Ken: Come,we'll ride in my car.

He left while I waited for Nenye to come down.

Wicked woman....u shall rot in jail

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With money,life could be so easy. But on the other hand,money can't buy everything.
With the necessary connections and a wonderful lawyer,mum got me back my properties and I officially became a land and property owner. Of course,I gave all the papers to mum. She had given me everything I needed and hoped for in life. I knew those documents were not enough to pay her back for everything but at least,I started from there.

It was more of a reunion. We were all happy including Nenye. She had insisted on leaving for the village but mummy refused,telling her that she would live with the Kalus till she's ready to settle down.

While we partied and drank wine, Ken was mostly beside me,never leaving my side. We were about eating when I asked Nenye to go up and call Kamsi,who had gone up to take a call outside the loud music. I watched her climb the stair,admiring the way her hips has expanded due to the pregnancy, I don't know but she turned immediately and her foot slipped,then she fell,rolling down and landing at the foot of the stair. She zoned out immediately. There was blood on her head and blood was also coming out from her body. I froze. Ken and Gospel rushed to pick her while mum shut down the music. I started crying immediately. How can I loose the remnant of my sibling? As they carried her out,I didn't move. I couldn't move. I just watched them leave while mum followed,saying something that I didn't get.

Kamsi came down and immediately she saw blood,she started screaming,asking me what had happened. I still didn't say a word. She pushed me down on a cushion,yet I didn't say anything.

She started calling everyone but nobody answered their phones. In my state of shock,I wished she could read minds. It was as if I had lost my voice.

They didn't come home that night and I didn't leave that cushion. Kamsi sat down beside me,saying things I couldn't hear. We remained that way till morning when Ken came in with Ted.

I still couldn't speak,my brain hadn't registered what was happening so I couldn't hear whatever they were saying with Kamsi. I saw the look of fear in Ken's eyes as he carried me out of the house,into the car and straight to the hospital where I was admitted immediately.

I don't know how long my eyes were closed but when I woke up,the first person I asked after was Nenye. The nurse who was beside me said she'll call her for me,but instead,Kamsi came in.

She sat on a chair beside my bed and held my hand.

Kamsi: Doctor said it was shock. How're you?

Me: Where's Chinenye?

Kamsi: She's fine.

Me: Let me see her please.

Kamsi: You can't. You're not healthy yourself.

Me: Please let me just see her. I need to see her.

Kamsi: I'll call Ken.

She left immediately and my heart started beating. She was hiding something from me and I must know what that thing was. I'm sure Ken will never lie to me.

The door opened and Ken came in alone. I smiled at him and he gave me a peck on my forehead.

Ken: How're you?

Me: I'm okay. How's my sister?

He breathed out,but his smile never disappeared so I had hope.

Ken: She lost the baby before we got here but she's fine. Though she's in coma now but doctor has said that she'll be fine.

Was I happy or not? I was lost in mixed feelings.

Ken: Kamsi just left to get you food and change of clothes. I'll stay here with you.

He sat down and held my hands in his.

Me: Have you eaten?

Ken: Yes.

Me: Where's mum?

Ken: We asked her to go home. She's being here since the night Nenye was brought here and when you came,her worries doubled and she refused eating or sleeping. Gospel had to forcefully take her home this morning.

I was grateful. I had love around me and it served as a protection. It was all that I needed to be happy.

I was discharged that day so I went in immediately to see Nenye. She looked so peaceful while she was in a far away sleep. I heaved a sigh and said a quick prayer.

Ken drove me home to see mum later in the evening. We hugged each other and shed a little tear before she made me promise her that the next time I'll be in a hospital bed would be when I'm about to deliver. Ken and I laughed and I made that promise,not sure of when it will be but I was hopeful,once I'm done with school and working,I'll get a better man to love me....................that's what all ladies say anyways.


This is the last update for today. Drop your comments,likes and suggestions.
Ghost readers,I just downloaded amadioha's eyes,just make sure I don't cast a spell on you.

PamelB:
Something is not right here. My two browsers has refused to post my update,telling me an error has occured

Devil.....I command thee in Jesus name that you get behind this story!

Amen

Finally got it right. Baba tuale

Am happy for Nenye at least she won't be carrying a bastard child again...thanks pameIB more wisdom,knowledge and understanding,
U really tried today

Mykel4God:




Devil.....I command thee in Jesus name that you get behind this story!

Amen

lol

callmeomotee33:
Am happy for Nenye at least she won't be carrying a bastard child again...thanks pameIB more wisdom,knowledge and understanding,
U really tried today

tankiu. as una no dey here to celebrate with us nau,na so I say make I use six updates celebrate with una.

Good job well done. Keep it up. More grease to your elbow

If i must say! It's a job well done!

Wonderful update, Pamelb... Daalu! Thumbs up!





Btw, I'm quite confused tho... When were the rapists caught and how were they caught??

yyugo6ixx:
I'm totally hooked to this story like a junkie on marijuana...more speed to your thumbs PamelB!

Hi, beautiful
I had seen you viewing yesterday and wanted to mention you so you could comment but the unfortunate happened.... Anyway how went your day? How about dropping a comment on those ones that have been dropped?

So...isn't it yet to feature me in the story? Dnt forget I'm going to be or act as the guy that would marry you at last. Hehehe... Dnt get scared I won't dissapoint you like others did. Loving your work!!

Well done pamel, more ideas to your brain and strength to your thumbs. Amanda and ken warris haponing 'what is happening' am i smelling sumthing or its just my nose

To be sincere you've really tried today. But the thing is that I am an Oliver twist. I'm still craving for more.

CuteChiluv:
Well done pamel, more ideas to your brain and strength to your thumbs. Amanda and ken warris haponing 'what is happening' am i smelling sumthing or its just my nose

its just your nose

Nice work. Keep it up!

saxwizard:
hmmmmmm this story dey sweet me.. .weldone dear...
prince dami as the second in command after op I don mak u group admin ..
ur work don start immediately welcome all the ghost members serve dem popcorn. .mak dem feel at home cos the plane I mean story just started. ..good evening everyone

Lol. @group admin. Anyway, I was about replying and carrying out the task of dishing out popcorn na so that anti-spam bots *abi wetin them dey call am self* ban me o (my first ever tho). I finished serving the ban around 8pm tonight only to be served/slapped with another one. :@ > I vex mail super mods, and the ban was lifted immediately. . But since I no fit do my job that night I chop the popcorn finish alone . I go bring tomorrow sha.

ken what are u trying to do I have always wanted Gospel and Amanda @ Ken go get ur self a girlfriend no vex

PamelaB, Pls don't end this story dating Ken, it will sow an eternal seed of discord in that family and crippled your earlier literati ingenuity. It has to be Gospel, or you reconcile with an obviously sob Hilary or someone else entirely. Don't make the closing part of this epic story too predictable by returning to date Ken. You don't have to practically date every man u encounter in this journey. You could even blank out and cease dating till another date maybe after school. You have a good story and it will make a decent movie. I hope we will talk about this sometime. I seldom comment on Nairaland buh had to break this rule for your outright excellence.

Thanks, we all appreciate it and God will continue to increase u in knowledge and understanding

PamelB:
tankiu. as una no dey here to celebrate with us nau,na so I say make I use six updates celebrate with una.

Great story, keep it up.

Great piece of work