jodeer:
U are great girl. I have read 2many stories on nairaland whch are very interesting and captivating by great authors of nl, but urs is so so out of dis world. Neva read a story dat makes me wanna cry....makes me so emotional. This piece is so gr8 emotionally, spiritually, educationally, i could go on and on. U are talented girl. cant put down all my expressions here cos they are 2 many. Just in diz words "U ND ARE AWESOME"

Eniqurl:
Bibijay123 kindly mention me if u wahn start another story. Thank you.

bibijay123:



Hi enny. Started another story....... Allen Avenue ( Story of a call worker)

bibijay123:
* Continues*

A year later


A round of applause resonated in the beautifully decorated and lit hall as i was called by the MC to the poidum. My eyes scanned round the hall and settled on the front row.The front row was occupied by those dear to my heart, the first lady, Pam, now six months pregnant was glowing beautifully and full of smiles, seated beside her was his excellency the president of our great nation. Next was Chantelle, my beautiful daughter who had flown in from France where she had gone to continue her studies. Next was Ama, the vice president of my life changing foundation and Bibi the founder of ' How it all began'.





The only people absent were Mami and Npa(father) who insisted they were too old to be moved about. I have come a long way, from a hungry and desperate boy to an inmate and now an author of the best selling book ' The Devil has the money', also the founder of life Changing foundation and a motivational speaker.


The crowd continued clapping, so many of them held my book in their hands. The book with the help of the intelligent founder of ' how it all began' was a huge success. It became one of the best selling author biography to sell millions of copies in a week! Our gathering today is to premier another life changing book written by me.

My heart swelled with happiness, there is truly fullness of joy in the presence of the lord. When you are for God, nothing and no one can battle with you and win. If not for God' s mercy where would i have been? i remembered the herbalist i had gone to see when i was only fifteen. His words to me " You have been called unto a greater path, your purpose in life is not this way". It might take long but it will be worth it in the end. There is truly no gain or fulfilment in quick riches. How i wish my beautiful Nma and Efo Albert were here to witness this day. I know they were both happy for me and it was truly time to let go of the past.



" Good evening ladies and gentleman, please stand up for the national anthem" i said into the mike.
















THE END





Thank you all for reading, another wonderful one premiers soon.@ bibijay indeed a beautiful piece,,,,u'rily tried,,,i had 2stay up dis late 2complete the story @ 2.45am,,God bless the work of your hand,,,

austinfan4love:
@ bibi jay,,,,what a lovely piece,,,i rily enjoyed it,n,i had 2stay up dis late 2complete the story @ 2.45am,,,God bless the work of your hand,,,once again,,lovely piece

Opeoluwa99:
Wonderful story ma
Your stories are always captivating

Happy birthday in advance ma

bibibabs:
Bibi, my name is Bibi and i must confess you got me glued from the beginning to the end.
Well done .

vicdall:
This brought tears to my eyes. Bibi, you are a very talented writer who's going places. This story is not only entertaining but inspiring. Wondering if it's a true life story, if not endeavor to publish. KUDOS!!

succyblinks:
Oh bibijay plz permission to copy?

bibijay123:



Granted.

bibijay123:


Loool @ Vaseline crew. Thanks, d story is fiction but spiced with some real stuffs, u get? BT that rules applies only to some state, my state.

gabazin080:

hello bibi, are you a togolese?

unmask:
Chai bibi just stole my weekend.....not fair o

Good stuff......sorry mind blowing stuff here

I am crushing on you already....yea l said it

You remind me of my best author Sidney Sheldon

Akposb:
I must say you are a very fine writer and I enjoyed the story. The layout from the beginning made me feel like I was reading an already published material.

Anyway you have some areas that you need to work on in this story which may aid any future decision. Your use of English was top notch but you consistently used Am instead of I am or I'm. Also you somehow lost your plot or narrative. This I suppose ought to be a novel but you ended up with a novella. The transition of the boys into men was done in a quick manner which may actually have hurt the flow of the story but I must commend your characterization. Just keep up with the good work and may your mind never run out of ideas.

Akposb:
I must say you are a very fine writer and I enjoyed the story. The layout from the beginning made me feel like I was reading an already published material.

Anyway you have some areas that you need to work on in this story which may aid any future decision. Your use of English was top notch but you consistently used Am instead of I am or I'm. Also you somehow lost your plot or narrative. This I suppose ought to be a novel but you ended up with a novella. The transition of the boys into men was done in a quick manner which may actually have hurt the flow of the story but I must commend your characterization. Just keep up with the good work and may your mind never run out of ideas.