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Re: Without Promises... by Nobody: 6:33pm On May 26, 2018 |
thanks for the updatess. |
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Re: Without Promises... by Nobody: 8:33am On May 27, 2018 |
SapphirePRINCEX your story made it to front page 2 Likes |
Re: Without Promises... by donnaD(f): 8:36am On May 27, 2018 |
sapphirePRINCX nne if i have bp becus of suspense know say na u cause am.please bring it on,i eager for the next update. |
Re: Without Promises... by obyikye(f): 11:31am On May 27, 2018 |
SapphirePRINCEX:And you didnt bother to tag me madam, I am not following again please. |
Re: Without Promises... by obyikye(f): 11:36am On May 27, 2018 |
Cadec007:present Sir, I heard my name just now, thanks so much. 1 Like |
Re: Without Promises... by SapphirePRINCEX(f): 11:45am On May 27, 2018 |
obyikye:Biko nnem adim very very sorry.. |
Re: Without Promises... by SapphirePRINCEX(f): 11:47am On May 27, 2018 |
obyikye:Biko nnem adim very very sorry.. |
Re: Without Promises... by Ehibiggirl(f): 2:42pm On May 27, 2018 |
SapphirePRINCEX:started to feel like a p Collins production so I stopped reading. BTW u are a good writer,u had my attention until it lost touch with reality. |
Re: Without Promises... by donnaD(f): 9:13am On May 28, 2018 |
Ehibiggirl:she wrote the first one that was so real over sabi people tagged it her true life story,now she has written this one that is fiction people again said that it's not real haba what can one do to please the world?shall its a free world one man's meat is anoder man's poison cheers . 9 Likes |
Re: Without Promises... by Ehibiggirl(f): 9:54pm On May 28, 2018 |
donnaD:people with your complacent attitude can hardly take corrections, there are inconsistencies in the story and its like the storylines of local nollywood movies, for goodness sake an innocent girl from the village that has never been to the city has a name called Britney and knows how to do MouthAction, its just too shallow. But I must say that she is good but needs to do more. |
Re: Without Promises... by donnaD(f): 10:07pm On May 28, 2018 |
Ehibiggirl:madam she must not be perfect,go read her first story and see how gud she is but people with i too know mentality tagged it her true life story. 2 Likes |
Re: Without Promises... by stevodot22(m): 7:50am On May 29, 2018 |
We should all learn how to appreciate one another, some people can't write an ordinary essay let alone writing stories. Even the so called geniuses make lot of mistakes, we are not equally endowed but we are unique in our own different ways.Thanks for the update. 4 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Without Promises... by skubido(m): 1:12pm On May 29, 2018 |
If u want to correct someone tink u shld do it in a way d person will appreciate u RATHER than saying trash... If u cant read anymore unfollow. No crime in that. Those that will read we read. No Mata how bad a story may be. You will gain view things. Human being sha Haba. 5 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: Without Promises... by Nobody: 10:05pm On May 29, 2018 |
skubido:Correct bro, that's life for you, people(not all) will always find reason to complain. The best thing is to be Focused irrespective of critics. Op, ride on, we dey your back. 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Without Promises... by skubido(m): 10:58am On May 30, 2018 |
Godwindanielboy: Abi oo.@focused tinz. I tire for them oo. God go dey help us sha |
Re: Without Promises... by SapphirePRINCEX(f): 6:23pm On May 30, 2018 |
Being hectic for me o... Sorry readers for not given up on me Might update tonight... Gracias 3 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Without Promises... by mum2bsoon: 7:08pm On May 30, 2018 |
SapphirePRINCEX: Please do, I read this and the other one In 2 days. You are a great writer dear. May your ink never finish o. Kisses to darling Zizi 2 Likes |
Re: Without Promises... by SapphirePRINCEX(f): 8:21pm On May 30, 2018 |
"Nnem" I answered still chewing some debris of bread as I got close to the backyard. I was taken aback at the hefty clothes on the floor and the ones she still had in her hands. "Here" she started as she dropped them on the heap of clothes "I need them washed and possibly ironed before sunset!" She ordered and walked past like I was just an object in the door. My heart was beating fast, not cause I couldn't keep up pretending to be that good wife material girl but cause this passion of deep hatred were already brewing inside of me. "Breathe Britney breathe" I reminded myself as I set to work and began with separating of the clothes. I looked around for a bucket I could use but I found none, as I was still scouting around, I saw a big basin. The basin was close to a small hut Frank had told me used to be his mother's kitchen before he got the house renovated. That basin was strange looking, not only was the size kind of weird, it has strikes and dots of blood inside of it. "Those are for fowls" I heard from my back and I quickly turned around in fear. She had been peeping me from the window all along but didn't say a word. Truly something was strange but I just couldn't figure it out. I picked up the basin, rinsed it off and got busy with the clothes but one thing was certain with me, I wasn't going to spend the night here ever again. God has been merciful to me, I wouldn't want to use up my chances. Mother and son were seeing a movie when I got into the house. The bond between them were amazing that for a second, I wish they could carry me along and let me share in there conversations without momsy being a thorn in my flesh. Just then, I noticed that the figure of his mom was blurring like an illusion and fear gripped me. I believed Soo much in my chi, I believed in clairvoyance alot that I knew one when I experience it. "Mama doesn't look real" my instinct told me, "it feels so" I muttered to myself as I walked past them to get my bags packed. Frank might have tricked me into bringing all my properties to stay with him, but until am convinced he isn't a ritualist, then nothing would ever bring me to his house ever again. "Am leaving" I announced as I walked into the living room, I had my eyes on mama, I needed a conviction that she was human and real. "Ahhhh so soon?" She quickly interrupted and continued, "my clothes are not dried and you haven't even ironed them yet". Frank who was supposed to applaud me for the laundry I did and perhaps covered up for me about ironing nodded in affirmative "you haven't even ironed momsy clothes o" he said and then another flimsy excuse of not having fuel in his car to see me off. These two weren't acting normal at all but I maintained my cool and just when they were through whining I started "Frank it's either you give me tfare or I trek back to Awka on foot, I have something important to do this evening don't hinder me" I said bluntly. His mom shaked her head negatively and was like "Edozie ifugonu udi nwanyi ichoro iduta bem okwaya? (Edozie you have seen the kind of woman you want to bring to my house abi?)" I was just looking at the both of them acting so strange and talking to themselves in some sort of whisper like Frank trying to defend me and mom's disapproval of me. Finally, she got up, walked right in front of me and said "consider yourself lucky that you are leaving today if not!" She breathed heavily and then drew back her breathe, spat and walked out. "Don't wear those sleeveless rags to my son's house again!" She said almost trying to scream her lungs away. She was angry but I cared less. "Frank my tfare" Tbc 12 Likes |
Re: Without Promises... by Nobody: 9:16pm On May 30, 2018 |
Thanks for the update. God bless Keep it up. |
Re: Without Promises... by skubido(m): 9:34pm On May 30, 2018 |
SapphirePRINCEX: Tanks a lot ma'am. How family? 1 Like |
Re: Without Promises... by Cadec007(m): 9:39pm On May 30, 2018 |
donnaD:I'm back!!!!, really missed literature....... So this noise about fiction and reality is still ongoing? Wonderful! 2 Likes |
Re: Without Promises... by Cadec007(m): 9:46pm On May 30, 2018 |
SapphirePRINCEX pls carry on you too much 2 Likes |
Re: Without Promises... by Cadec007(m): 9:48pm On May 30, 2018 |
Gucciqueen38, sis oya come, refreshments is sorted out |
Re: Without Promises... by stevodot22(m): 9:55pm On May 30, 2018 |
Wehdone ma, more update plssssss!!! |
Re: Without Promises... by Nobody: 9:57pm On May 30, 2018 |
Cadec007:I'm here oo 1 Like |
Re: Without Promises... by Nobody: 10:14pm On May 30, 2018 |
Food don land again |
Re: Without Promises... by donnaD(f): 12:11am On May 31, 2018 |
Cadec007:My brother I tire oo 1 Like |
Re: Without Promises... by queenitee(f): 7:52am On May 31, 2018 |
Sule is still asking for tfare |
Re: Without Promises... by skubido(m): 9:44am On May 31, 2018 |
Re: Without Promises... by izaray(f): 10:08am On May 31, 2018 |
Thanks for the update |
Re: Without Promises... by Giddyperson: 2:02pm On May 31, 2018 |
SapphirePRINCEX:hEY, Sent you a mail on that e-mail |
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