Good ending I may say, it wait is worth the while. Meanwhile the story of Ide getting pregnant is a good twist, hope it leads to a new story.

great story , pls tell me the baby is not for Tonye, Swifty.

I cant beliv u did this.i thot u were using this strategy to make us read n buy a novel u might have written.i had stoppd readn a long story bt u made do dat n i enjoyd. U strategy workd. I u had postd all of em at the same tym many pips includn me would had ran away.thanx my dia.what name do we name/theme shuld we giv dis so dt i wld add it 2 a buk i had read?

Its over!,    thanks for your accolades and kind words, i really appreciate it!

Thanks to y'all who kept coming back to this thread after the first parts till the end, to all who fought for me when i got banned, to all who got banned cos of trying to help me get this story out and especially those who kept on encouraging and chasing me to get off my lazy butt and get the story on. You guys are wonderful, honestly i dont think i could have done it without your help.

Am glad i was able to in some way  bring back a bit of discipline in reading culture and patience to many, and most importantly being able to indulge with me using the unique power of visualization- a gift that can help man achieve anything.

Watch out for more stories soon, ill holla when we meet on other threads, till then LOL- (LOTS OF LOVE not laugh out loud) 

I remain Swiftycool 

welldone swiftycool, a great gift u've got there, i enjoyed every bit of your story. Keep it up.

guy you are really cool but you cant end the story plssssssssssssssss what happen to ide,the baby,how did gloria took the news,what was tonye reactions plssssssssssssssss complete the story .i know you are putting us in another suspence

swiftycool:

Its over!,    thanks for your accolades and kind words, i really appreciate it!

Thanks to y'all who kept coming back to this thread after the first parts till the end, to all who fought for me when i got banned, to all who got banned cos of trying to help me get this story out and especially those who kept on encouraging and chasing me to get off my lazy butt and get the story on. You guys are wonderful, honestly i dont think i could have done it without your help.

Am glad i was able to in some way  bring back a bit of discipline in reading culture and patience to many, and most importantly being able to indulge with me using the unique power of visualization- a gift that can help man achieve anything.

Watch out for more stories soon, ill holla when we meet on other threads, till then LOL- (LOTS OF LOVE not laugh out loud) 

I remain Swiftycool 

U're right man, your story assured me that my reading culture is not dead yet; maybe I've not been seeing un-putdownable stories like yours for a very long time.
Man, need I tell you that this story can make a good novel, no matter how short the pages are?
Please try to think along that path, get a good publisher and you'll make some cool dough putting this story in the market.
Big up man! Earnestly looking forward to your next story.

very beautiful piece,

nice.well done swifty.

good one swifty, very good soft landing

Excellent ending Swifty. Did u get my mail, pls check your junk and let me know what u think.
looking forward to more stories from u

stay blessed

buoy u the best.

these often happen to richer ladies, ego

thank her God she came back to her senses on time.

swiftykoolll mooooooooooooooore story.

Swifty, how far now, nairaland has been quite dry for sometime now. any more stories please

Gosh, swifty! I've got an eye 4 talent, and u've got it. I just couldn't stop reading. Kept going from one page to the next page. How u could make a simple plot such an interesting read is what i can't understand. Dude, ever considered writing screenplays? You've got it in you. . .

steeze:

Gosh, swifty! I've got an eye 4 talent, and u've got it. I just couldn't stop reading. Kept going from one page to the next page. How u could make a simple plot such an interesting read is what i can't understand. Dude, ever considered writing screenplays? You've got it in you. . .

Thanx Seteeze, so u guys actually went to dig out this story. i had long forgotten, thats really cool

Dahbutter:

Swifty, how far now, nairaland has been quite dry for sometime now. any more stories please

Bros ive been quite bizi, but ill do it again once i got some free time, but maybe it would be shorter then as i have noticed, people today hold a short attention span.

^^^
Horray! At long last, subscribing straightaway

THE PRIDE WTH LADIES BEING HIGH WHEN THEY HAVE THE UPPER HAND IS NOT WTH ALL ALDIES AND CANT DO THAT WTH ALL MEN AS WELL, YOU CAN C THAT WHEN TONYE LEFT AND GLORIA SAW THAT SHE CANT MAKE IT WTHOUT THE MAN,SHE STARTED DYING SILENTLY TO GO BACK EVEN IF SHE COULDNT VOICE IT, I KNOW OF A COUPLE TODAY IN WARRI,DELTA STATE THAT THE WOMAN HAS FINISHED HER PHD AND D MAN IS JUST STARTING FOR 1ST DEGREE IN DELSU, YET THE WOMAN IS STILL SO HUMBLE,
IN D CASE OF GLORIA, I SUSPECT SHE GOT ALL THOSE TRAINING FROM HR MOTHER AND LATER REALISED SHE WAS LOOSING HER MAN N MARRIAGE,COUPLED WTH D FACT THAT NO OTHER MAN CAN TOLERATE ALL THOSE TRASH FROM HER, SHE THEN DECIDED TO BE HUMBLE N BECOME WHO IS SUPPOSE TO BE, AND I BELIEVED SHOLUD BE TREATING HER LIKE THE SHOLUD,REGARDLESS ALL HER MISTAKES,KNOWING THAT HE IS A NICE GUY, AS FOR IDEE,AM SURE GLORIA DESERVE IT SO THAT IN HER NEXT WORLD,SHE WILL STAND FIRM TO HOLD,TREAT N PROTECT HER MAN WELL EVEN IF HE IS WRETCHED,
GOODLUCK TO EDUCATED WOMEN THAT ARE HUMBLE, PROUD TO BE A WOMAN

This story got me teary eyed.


sums up what happened with me and my ex.

The only difference is we r still not together.

sorrytoo:

This story got me teary eyed.


sums up what happened with me and my ex.

The only difference is we r still not together.

Aww what a pity, hope u are doing fine now though. By the way are u male or female?

Good story but i will like you to tell us more on this as the drama goes on

nice story

One of the best stories on NL,

this is nice, i pray it won't happen to me oooooooo, cos i can percieve it around

dubliu:

this is nice, i pray it won't happen to me oooooooo, cos i can percieve it around

Girls are the same. Its better you put the marriage on hold till you are financially buoyant enough. Else, you put yourself into problems like this.

deoyel25:

Girls are the same. Its better you put the marriage on hold till you are financially buoyant enough. Else, you put yourself into problems like this.

Sounds like you've had some really bad experience, wanna talk bout it?

nice story,keep it.

Wow! Please holla at me when you gat other stories

Chei! Now this is a very deep one. Nice work poster

Who is still reading this wonderful piece in 2019? Click like

Damn! Now that's a story!