lalasticlala:


Op, pls are you the writer of this story?

Yes lalasticlala. I am the writer of the story....Still writing it though. Please hope I broke no rules ??

Kai , when on this earth will i be 1st to comment ?

Dz one wey lalasticlala dey question Op. Make I hide for backyard before e go ban all of us.

goodheart02:


Yes lalasticlala. I am the writer of the story....Still writing it though. Please hope I broke no rules ??

Doc am sure you broke no rules

I think I can smell FP for this story.. d OP should put more. updates.. your new followers are gonna need dem..
donkross1 no need. to hide.. ole.

labaski:
I think I can smell FP for this story.. d OP should put more. updates.. your new followers are gonna need dem..
donkross1 no need. to hide.. ole.

Abeg make I still dey here dey hide first.

goodheart02:


Yes lalasticlala. I am the writer of the story....Still writing it though. Please hope I broke no rules ??

No. You didn't, just wanted to be sure it's yours, because, other stories I have seen in this section, the posters do indicate that they are the writers..

Op....come and update o

lalasticlala:


No. You didn't, just wanted to be sure it's yours, because, other stories I have seen in this section, the posters do indicate that they are the writers..

Okay then. I better indicate it.

goodheart02:



Okay then. I better indicate it.

Your narration... Its too straight for the kind of work you doing, try changing approach and include element of suprise between words. Lets see how it's going to be.

Hmmmm

Interesting read ....
@Goodheart02 Is this your original work?

Its getting scccaaaarrrrrrryyyy. Can it b visualized?

goodheart02:



Okay then. I better indicate it.

You don't have to indicate anything, a simple search through Google and few plagiarism software shows your work is original, just make the storyline a little more interesting but great job, definitely a great author in the making!

ccm back

Finally, a good old fashioned horror story. Following..

Waitingggggggg...scary but catchy!

Oya op, continue naa... d suspense is getting long o.

spooky........and pls op don't keep us waiting for long oo....following sha bumper to bumper.

Following

Seriously I'm following this ....

Sinizia, let's go through this together

I'm scared of reading this.

Nice write up @op keep it up

goodheart02:


Yes lalas.ticlala. I am the writer of the story....Still writing it though. Please hope I broke no rules ??

Please continue

Wow i'm loving this story.bros abeg you dey try keep up.i love horrors

Fearville.....funny name

Wow... Nice
100%following

Nice. I would let the immediacy of horrific occurrences slide. You termed it a short story after all.

Laveda:
Seriously I'm following this ....
Sinizia, let's go through this together

Give me 5 minutes and I'll be right by your side.

This is so fun