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IN LOVE WITH HER PASTOR-EPISODE 15 BY ROSE
Although she was feeling a bit down…down with all the events of the past weeks…this piece of info Eddie had just given her made her smile. ‘Are you for real..Franklin Edwards’? she couldn’t believe it…she had heard about his live performances but she never got the opportunity to attend any..this was her golden opportunity and she had to be there. ‘Let me see…’ she grabbed the flyer and studied it carefully…it was going to be great show.. tagged ‘Glorious praise night’. ‘Well…if this would help get me out of this mood …I will definitely come…weeping may endure for a night but joy comes in the morning’.
Eddie smiled satisfactorily…she knew how to get her cousin out of her depression. ‘Where’s Naomi…we should start preparing..you know the Church Auditorium is going to be heavily populated…we need to go early’. Yetunde nodded, she understood what went on in such programmes..’she’s asleep obviously tired of colouring papers’. Eddie chuckled lightly…she loved her niece..such a talented beauty..then she remembered how Mr Calvary had played with her the other day. The scene broke her heart, he smiled at the little girl and played with her just like her father…she wished Naomi could have a father figure in her life. This was the time to get the gist from her cousin…she had barely escaped her boss’s wrath earlier…and she knew he would call her back. She had to find out….
She inhaled deeply knowing Yetunde’s mood swings…she could take this lightly or she could flare up…this was a new Yetunde…she was the most lovable person on earth before she met with Femi. He destroyed her emotionally and those wounds were taking time to heal. Yetunde stared at her cousin closely..she looked a bit worried or scared..’Edidiong what’s wrong with you?’ she dropped the clothes she folded and walked towards her. ‘there’s something I would like to ask you…please promise you wouldn’t get upset’. Yetunde nodded quickly….. ‘What’s the relationship between you and Mr Calvary’? for a moment…silence danced in the room…then Yetunde broke it….. ‘nothing much….we had an ugly encounter one time…he hit my car and I slapped him..but he deserved it…he’s such a mean person’.
Eddie squeezed her eyes unbelievably…her cousin had slapped her boss and from her tone she wasn’t remorseful… ‘how could you do such a thing..slapping a total stranger…I think you’re the mean person because knowing my boss very well he must have apologised’. Yetunde shrugged and resumed arranging the room.. ‘So you are on his side down…well I don’t like him…he is proud and full of himself ..just imagine what happened in his office…he threw my files on the floor…’. Eddie shook her head, this girl was really a shadow of herself. ‘Why the questions’? Yetunde inquired feeling curious…had he asked about her?
‘He asked me to tell him everything about you…and he sounded upset’. Yetunde smiled to herself…he asked about her…that made her feel somehow special…. ‘so what did you tell him’? Eddie bit her lip.. ‘nothing..what did you want me to say? Listen Yetunde…you need to see him and probably beg him..remember Naomi is still at home…you still need this loan’.
She paused at the thought of her little angel who had stopped attending school and exams was fast approaching…..but she couldn’t beg any man…after Femi’s betrayal..she had vowed never to surrender or be at the mercy of any man especially Mr Perfect.She knew his type..probably born with a silver spoon and had everything easy…looking down on someone like her…no…she would never beg him.

IN LOVE WITH HER PASTOR-EPISODE 16 BY ROSE
‘Okay enough of the argument…always consider Naomi’s future before your pride…we need to leave..the programme starts by 6 o’clock’. ‘Whatever’ Yetunde groaned and left to rouse Naomi from her deep sleep. They all ate a light meal and packed up their bibles….it was indeed going to be great.
‘So have you been to the church before’? Yetunde had heard about the church a lot…but she never dared to go…she just couldn’t find herself in any church. She had failed god once and he was still punishing her for her sins. ‘No now…am new in town…so I haven’t really settled down..let’s just see what happens..maybe I will worship there’ Eddie smiled at the cab she had just waved.
‘Grace Arena church’ she yelled to the cab driver and he stooped…looking at the two young women and the baby …he had the perfect set to exploit…he coughed and cleared his throat ‘Five hundred naira’. Yetunde was already boiling with anger…men..always wanting to exploit…’five hundred what? Did we tell you we want to chatter’? the man feigned anger ‘Una no sabi the price of fuel for this country..no be Grace Arena Church Along Ore Road’? . ‘Just go..go your way’ was all Eddie could utter, no one was going to spoil her mood..today was all about praising God and giving him beautiful worship.
***
Calvary hummed his favorite tune as he drove…God was indeed faithful..they had taken months to plan for this programmed and it was finally a success. He prayed mighty things happened to people…healing…salvation of souls. ‘And crown him…lord of all’ he continued whistling…then he slowed down. He had spotted Edidiong from afar..this was the time to ask about the rude young lady…he wasn’t going to be free for weeks. But as he drove closer he saw his little friend..in her mother’s arms…so the rude young lady could hold a baby so gently? He mused and horned to get their attention.
Her heart started beating again…just like in his office…she tried to calm herself by shifting to the other side…why was she behaving this way? Like a shy teenager…was she shy of him? He stepped out of the car and exchanged pleasantries with Eddie. She tried to look away but she couldn’t..he wore a black denim with a blue cloured shirt and he looked perfect. His dark eyes focusing on her cousin suddenly turned and caught her staring at him. She blinked and quickly looked away.
Calvary felt a little excitement crawl up his spine…was he mistaken? He had seen admiration in her fiery eyes…did she like him? He walked towards her and the toddler immediately leaned out and followed him..leaving her mother startled. ‘What’s the meaning of that…give me back my baby’ she paused to listen to herself…was she overeacting? Because Naomi looked quite comfortable in his arms…his strong arms. ‘chill they have met before at the bank’ her cousin scolded.
‘My little painter…’ he squeezed her cheeks..and stared back at the girl’s mother..this was the perfect time to do what the Lord had asked him to do. ‘Hi…am sure you know my name’? she stared at him with disgust…who did he think he was? Some celebrity? He put out his hand for a handshake but she ignored it and left his hands hanging in the air. Edidiong stepped in…’am sorry sir…she is just in a very bad mood..we were actually hurrying somewhere’.
He raised his brows suspiciously…his secretary was cunny…he stared at the rude young lady ..she was going to be very difficult to please. ‘What’s your name? at least tell me that’ he continued as she jerked Naomi out his arms. He felt hurt…’Yetunde Peters’ Edidiong chipped in…receiving a murderous glare from Yetunde. ‘Sir we really need to go’…Eddie continued but he just smiled…and it left hr confused. Which man smiled in the face of embarrassment? ‘where you off to..i could drop you’? he offered kindly.
‘Sir we are going to Ore road…but you don’t need to stress yourself…’ he opened the car door and smiled ‘ I insist’. But as they both turned…Yetunde had already waved a cab and stepped into it….Edidiong shook her head ‘Typical’. ‘Am sorry sir…she is a very nice person …she has just been in a bad place lately. He nodded and started the car ‘it’s okay’…but it wasn’t okay…the young woman..Yetunde hated him obviously..but she couldn’t blame her. He had broken her car light…wait…could that have been the reason she wasn’t driving? He wondered and hoped not. He had to find a way and appease her…

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Yetunde was so furious with her cousin…how could she be on Calvary’s side? She ignored Naomi who tried plucking her lashes again…’you too…you had his back’ but the toddler didn’t understand. She closed her eyes and saw the kindness in his eyes as he played with her daughter…she needed a father..but Femi had asked her to abort the pregnancy…she sighed…could she ever love again? She had vowed never to trust any man..she would work hard and take good care of her daughter.
The abrupt halt of the cab brought her back to reality..she quickly paid the driver and walked towards the massive building. The area was filled with so many cars and people and she felt lost for a moment…she really needed to find her cousin. She wasn’t familiar with this place..she suddenly regretted her actions..they had to stick together in this crowd. And what annoyed her most was the poor network…’lord I need you’ she whispered and moved forward.
‘Welcome’ an Usher greeted politely and she was led into the auditorium…she smiled happily…the turnout wasn’t that explosive yet…she had to pick the best seat. Luckily for her…Edidiong called ‘where are you?’…she gave hr directions and in no little time..they were together. An aura of joy saturated the whole auditorium. ‘Momma…pee….’Naomi complained and she knew what that meant…’take care of our seats’ she instructed Eddie as she left.
Edidiong carefully placed their bibles on the empty seats next to her…her cousin was really dramatic. Her behavior towards Mr Calvary was quite childish and she would call her to order later. Although Calvary had hurt her and embarrassed her but he was truly sorry…she could see the remorse in his eyes but her cousin was blind to that. She looked around once more…just to get their coordinates so they could know the way out as they hadn’t planned on staying to the end. But her heart stopped for a minute…she blinked her eyes to be sure of what she had seen…no…it couldn’t be…not here and not right now.
She saw him smiling and speaking to an usher…she had to get her cousin out of this place….it was Femi.

Your Opinion about this story counts...say something..criticize...tell me what you want...spur me on...I like me some motivation...see you guys depending on your response

nice one, I like the way you use your words. I think i like the idea of Femi returning, but in church? abi is he now born again ni? can't wait for more

Angelsss:
Your Opinion about this story counts...say something..criticize...tell me what you want...spur me on...I like me some motivation...see you guys depending on your response

lovely story

Angelsss:
Your Opinion about this story counts...say something..criticize...tell me what you want...spur me on...I like me some motivation...see you guys depending on your response

lovely story, are you a professional writer

Thanx Phaitmoe...Femi was a devil...people change..so watch out...
am not a professional writer ...buh I love writing... its a hobby...maybe in future I could publish

wow, dz is really lovely looking forward to d next update #thumbs up

Nice write up Angelsss,

Nice story

I'm in love with Angelsss!
That's all.

lovely write up, jus keep coming. femi ready for a slap

Angelsss, keep it up. I'm patiently waiting for the next episode

I am seriously loving this.....

IN LOVE WITH HER PASTOR-EPISODE 15 BY ROSE
Although she was feeling a bit down…down with all the events of the past weeks…this piece of info Eddie had just given her made her smile. ‘Are you for real..Franklin Edwards’? she couldn’t believe it…she had heard about his live performances but she never got the opportunity to attend any..this was her golden opportunity and she had to be there. ‘Let me see…’ she grabbed the flyer and studied it carefully…it was going to be great show.. tagged ‘Glorious praise night’. ‘Well…if this would help get me out of this mood …I will definitely come…weeping may endure for a night but joy comes in the morning’.
Eddie smiled satisfactorily…she knew how to get her cousin out of her depression. ‘Where’s Naomi…we should start preparing..you know the Church Auditorium is going to be heavily populated…we need to go early’. Yetunde nodded, she understood what went on in such programmes..’she’s asleep obviously tired of colouring papers’. Eddie chuckled lightly…she loved her niece..such a talented beauty..then she remembered how Mr Calvary had played with her the other day. The scene broke her heart, he smiled at the little girl and played with her just like her father…she wished Naomi could have a father figure in her life. This was the time to get the gist from her cousin…she had barely escaped her boss’s wrath earlier…and she knew he would call her back. She had to find out….
She inhaled deeply knowing Yetunde’s mood swings…she could take this lightly or she could flare up…this was a new Yetunde…she was the most lovable person on earth before she met with Femi. He destroyed her emotionally and those wounds were taking time to heal. Yetunde stared at her cousin closely..she looked a bit worried or scared..’Edidiong what’s wrong with you?’ she dropped the clothes she folded and walked towards her. ‘there’s something I would like to ask you…please promise you wouldn’t get upset’. Yetunde nodded quickly….. ‘What’s the relationship between you and Mr Calvary’? for a moment…silence danced in the room…then Yetunde broke it….. ‘nothing much….we had an ugly encounter one time…he hit my car and I slapped him..but he deserved it…he’s such a mean person’.
Eddie squeezed her eyes unbelievably…her cousin had slapped her boss and from her tone she wasn’t remorseful… ‘how could you do such a thing..slapping a total stranger…I think you’re the mean person because knowing my boss very well he must have apologised’. Yetunde shrugged and resumed arranging the room.. ‘So you are on his side down…well I don’t like him…he is proud and full of himself ..just imagine what happened in his office…he threw my files on the floor…’. Eddie shook her head, this girl was really a shadow of herself. ‘Why the questions’? Yetunde inquired feeling curious…had he asked about her?
‘He asked me to tell him everything about you…and he sounded upset’. Yetunde smiled to herself…he asked about her…that made her feel somehow special…. ‘so what did you tell him’? Eddie bit her lip.. ‘nothing..what did you want me to say? Listen Yetunde…you need to see him and probably beg him..remember Naomi is still at home…you still need this loan’.
She paused at the thought of her little angel who had stopped attending school and exams was fast approaching…..but she couldn’t beg any man…after Femi’s betrayal..she had vowed never to surrender or be at the mercy of any man especially Mr Perfect.She knew his type..probably born with a silver spoon and had everything easy…looking down on someone like her…no…she would never beg him.

IN LOVE WITH HER PASTOR-EPISODE 16 BY ROSE
‘Okay enough of the argument…always consider Naomi’s future before your pride…we need to leave..the programme starts by 6 o’clock’. ‘Whatever’ Yetunde groaned and left to rouse Naomi from her deep sleep. They all ate a light meal and packed up their bibles….it was indeed going to be great.
‘So have you been to the church before’? Yetunde had heard about the church a lot…but she never dared to go…she just couldn’t find herself in any church. She had failed god once and he was still punishing her for her sins. ‘No now…am new in town…so I haven’t really settled down..let’s just see what happens..maybe I will worship there’ Eddie smiled at the cab she had just waved.
‘Grace Arena church’ she yelled to the cab driver and he stooped…looking at the two young women and the baby …he had the perfect set to exploit…he coughed and cleared his throat ‘Five hundred naira’. Yetunde was already boiling with anger…men..always wanting to exploit…’five hundred what? Did we tell you we want to chatter’? the man feigned anger ‘Una no sabi the price of fuel for this country..no be Grace Arena Church Along Ore Road’? . ‘Just go..go your way’ was all Eddie could utter, no one was going to spoil her mood..today was all about praising God and giving him beautiful worship.
***
Calvary hummed his favorite tune as he drove…God was indeed faithful..they had taken months to plan for this programmed and it was finally a success. He prayed mighty things happened to people…healing…salvation of souls. ‘And crown him…lord of all’ he continued whistling…then he slowed down. He had spotted Edidiong from afar..this was the time to ask about the rude young lady…he wasn’t going to be free for weeks. But as he drove closer he saw his little friend..in her mother’s arms…so the rude young lady could hold a baby so gently? He mused and horned to get their attention.
Her heart started beating again…just like in his office…she tried to calm herself by shifting to the other side…why was she behaving this way? Like a shy teenager…was she shy of him? He stepped out of the car and exchanged pleasantries with Eddie. She tried to look away but she couldn’t..he wore a black denim with a blue cloured shirt and he looked perfect. His dark eyes focusing on her cousin suddenly turned and caught her staring at him. She blinked and quickly looked away.
Calvary felt a little excitement crawl up his spine…was he mistaken? He had seen admiration in her fiery eyes…did she like him? He walked towards her and the toddler immediately leaned out and followed him..leaving her mother startled. ‘What’s the meaning of that…give me back my baby’ she paused to listen to herself…was she overeacting? Because Naomi looked quite comfortable in his arms…his strong arms. ‘chill they have met before at the bank’ her cousin scolded.
‘My little painter…’ he squeezed her cheeks..and stared back at the girl’s mother..this was the perfect time to do what the Lord had asked him to do. ‘Hi…am sure you know my name’? she stared at him with disgust…who did he think he was? Some celebrity? He put out his hand for a handshake but she ignored it and left his hands hanging in the air. Edidiong stepped in…’am sorry sir…she is just in a very bad mood..we were actually hurrying somewhere’.
He raised his brows suspiciously…his secretary was cunny…he stared at the rude young lady ..she was going to be very difficult to please. ‘What’s your name? at least tell me that’ he continued as she jerked Naomi out his arms. He felt hurt…’Yetunde Peters’ Edidiong chipped in…receiving a murderous glare from Yetunde. ‘Sir we really need to go’…Eddie continued but he just smiled…and it left hr confused. Which man smiled in the face of embarrassment? ‘where you off to..i could drop you’? he offered kindly.
‘Sir we are going to Ore road…but you don’t need to stress yourself…’ he opened the car door and smiled ‘ I insist’. But as they both turned…Yetunde had already waved a cab and stepped into it….Edidiong shook her head ‘Typical’. ‘Am sorry sir…she is a very nice person …she has just been in a bad place lately. He nodded and started the car ‘it’s okay’…but it wasn’t okay…the young woman..Yetunde hated him obviously..but she couldn’t blame her. He had broken her car light…wait…could that have been the reason she wasn’t driving? He wondered and hoped not. He had to find a way and appease her…

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Yetunde was so furious with her cousin…how could she be on Calvary’s side? She ignored Naomi who tried plucking her lashes again…’you too…you had his back’ but the toddler didn’t understand. She closed her eyes and saw the kindness in his eyes as he played with her daughter…she needed a father..but Femi had asked her to abort the pregnancy…she sighed…could she ever love again? She had vowed never to trust any man..she would work hard and take good care of her daughter.
The abrupt halt of the cab brought her back to reality..she quickly paid the driver and walked towards the massive building. The area was filled with so many cars and people and she felt lost for a moment…she really needed to find her cousin. She wasn’t familiar with this place..she suddenly regretted her actions..they had to stick together in this crowd. And what annoyed her most was the poor network…’lord I need you’ she whispered and moved forward.
‘Welcome’ an Usher greeted politely and she was led into the auditorium…she smiled happily…the turnout wasn’t that explosive yet…she had to pick the best seat. Luckily for her…Edidiong called ‘where are you?’…she gave hr directions and in no little time..they were together. An aura of joy saturated the whole auditorium. ‘Momma…pee….’Naomi complained and she knew what that meant…’take care of our seats’ she instructed Eddie as she left.
Edidiong carefully placed their bibles on the empty seats next to her…her cousin was really dramatic. Her behavior towards Mr Calvary was quite childish and she would call her to order later. Although Calvary had hurt her and embarrassed her but he was truly sorry…she could see the remorse in his eyes but her cousin was blind to that. She looked around once more…just to get their coordinates so they could know the way out as they hadn’t planned on staying to the end. But her heart stopped for a minute…she blinked her eyes to be sure of what she had seen…no…it couldn’t be…not here and not right now.
She saw him smiling and speaking to an usher…she had to get her cousin out of this place….it was Femi.

IN LOVE WITH HER PASTOR-EPISODE 18 BY ROSE AKPABIO
‘There is power in the name of Jesus…to break every chain..’ Yetunde rushed in to see the owner of the angelic voice that sang those words…she loved that song so much…it was one of her best gospel hits. She held her baby tightly and hurried to her seat…but she paused at who she’d seen….this was getting crazy…she stared at her cousin who looked like she had seen a ghost. But what greater surprise could there be..than seeing Genevieve…Eddie told her the name of the arrogant lady that attacked her at the bank. There she was ….high and mighty…singing with the voice of an angel but she was a demon.
This was going to be interesting …she sat comfortably and hummed to the song. Although this woman was evil..she had to give it to her..she sang good. Eddie was surprised at her cousin’s composure…because of the woman on stage but they needed to leave immediately…she couldn’t see Femi not with Naomi… ‘don’t you think we should go back home’? ..Yetunde stared at her…what had gotten into Eddie… ‘Are you okay? Because you acting all jittery like you saw a ghost’. Eddie avoided her eyes…’I just have a bad feeling…are you sure you are comfortable and with Genevieve on stage..you must feel weird..you know’..she closed her eyes..she sounded really ridiculous. ‘Okay you know what Eddie…why don’t we stop talking and enjoy the praise and worship session’ …she nodded quietly and prayed they shouldn’t bump into Femi.
The crowd cheered and clapped their hands..the praise session was wonderful. Faces were filled with smiles and hearts with joy all giving glory to Jesus…Yetunde waved her hands in appreciation for his mercies upon her life. And at that point…she made a promise to God..never to fail him again…always to trust him in every situation. She felt her burdens being lifted up…she was at the right place…Bethel..the place of worship.
She closed her eyes and joined in the worship chorus…then the voice switched to a deep male baritone. She paused…she didn’t want to get distracted..but the voice sounded awkwardly familiar…no it couldn’t be…what was he doing here? Then she felt Naomi’s little hands on her skirt and she was forced to open her eyes…..her cousin was right…they should’ve left a long time ago..

IN LOVE WITH HER PASTOR-EPISODE 19 BY ROSE
She saw him and shuddered…she had to leave immediately…she felt so bad…but the crowd behind would spoil her plans. She sat down gently to gain some balance…she couldn’t believe it…the man standing on the pulpit was introduced ‘Pastor Calvary Aduga’ and the crowd applauded him. Her cousin stared back at her in widely in disbelief…’Eddie..did you know about this’? Edidiong was just as shocked..so her boss was also a Pastor. She hadn’t expected it..but she wasn’t too shocked because he lived a righteous lifestyle…he was very kind and humble except for his wife to be. She shook her head sadly..and wondered how such a marriage would turn out.
Yetunde felt stunned as the man began to preach…she quickly whispered some words of prayer in her heart…she felt horrible…all her stubborn pride fled away when she realized..she had slapped a man of God… ‘please show me mercy..i didn’t know’. She shook the thought out of her mind as she remembered her stolen car…maybe that was the punishment she got for slapping a priest of the most high. He was a genuine prophet as he had just spoken a word that met her at the point of her need…
‘The bible said…whoever calls on the name of the lord shall be saved…and that is what we came to do tonight..to call on Jesus with our songs..our praises ..our worship to him…haleluya’ he paused and continued… ‘the holyspirit has just ministered to me…there is a young woman here…your life had been taken away from you since you fell into the sin of fornication…you are still running away from God’s presence ..but he said he has forgiven you..and if you hold on to him and worship him tonight…he will make your life beautiful again’ Yetunde froze at where she sat…while the crowd thundered amen as he began to make other declarations.
She couldn’t hold it anymore…that was God speaking to her…she had been forgiven..she knelt and cried.. ‘thank you Jesus’..while her daughter who sat comfortably with Edidiong…looked confused and stared back at her Aunt for an explanation. Eddie was as shocked as the little girl..she held her close and pecked her cheek

IN LOVE WITH HER PASTOR-EPISODE 15 BY ROSE
Although she was feeling a bit down…down with all the events of the past weeks…this piece of info Eddie had just given her made her smile. ‘Are you for real..Franklin Edwards’? she couldn’t believe it…she had heard about his live performances but she never got the opportunity to attend any..this was her golden opportunity and she had to be there. ‘Let me see…’ she grabbed the flyer and studied it carefully…it was going to be great show.. tagged ‘Glorious praise night’. ‘Well…if this would help get me out of this mood …I will definitely come…weeping may endure for a night but joy comes in the morning’.
Eddie smiled satisfactorily…she knew how to get her cousin out of her depression. ‘Where’s Naomi…we should start preparing..you know the Church Auditorium is going to be heavily populated…we need to go early’. Yetunde nodded, she understood what went on in such programmes..’she’s asleep obviously tired of colouring papers’. Eddie chuckled lightly…she loved her niece..such a talented beauty..then she remembered how Mr Calvary had played with her the other day. The scene broke her heart, he smiled at the little girl and played with her just like her father…she wished Naomi could have a father figure in her life. This was the time to get the gist from her cousin…she had barely escaped her boss’s wrath earlier…and she knew he would call her back. She had to find out….
She inhaled deeply knowing Yetunde’s mood swings…she could take this lightly or she could flare up…this was a new Yetunde…she was the most lovable person on earth before she met with Femi. He destroyed her emotionally and those wounds were taking time to heal. Yetunde stared at her cousin closely..she looked a bit worried or scared..’Edidiong what’s wrong with you?’ she dropped the clothes she folded and walked towards her. ‘there’s something I would like to ask you…please promise you wouldn’t get upset’. Yetunde nodded quickly….. ‘What’s the relationship between you and Mr Calvary’? for a moment…silence danced in the room…then Yetunde broke it….. ‘nothing much….we had an ugly encounter one time…he hit my car and I slapped him..but he deserved it…he’s such a mean person’.
Eddie squeezed her eyes unbelievably…her cousin had slapped her boss and from her tone she wasn’t remorseful… ‘how could you do such a thing..slapping a total stranger…I think you’re the mean person because knowing my boss very well he must have apologised’. Yetunde shrugged and resumed arranging the room.. ‘So you are on his side down…well I don’t like him…he is proud and full of himself ..just imagine what happened in his office…he threw my files on the floor…’. Eddie shook her head, this girl was really a shadow of herself. ‘Why the questions’? Yetunde inquired feeling curious…had he asked about her?
‘He asked me to tell him everything about you…and he sounded upset’. Yetunde smiled to herself…he asked about her…that made her feel somehow special…. ‘so what did you tell him’? Eddie bit her lip.. ‘nothing..what did you want me to say? Listen Yetunde…you need to see him and probably beg him..remember Naomi is still at home…you still need this loan’.
She paused at the thought of her little angel who had stopped attending school and exams was fast approaching…..but she couldn’t beg any man…after Femi’s betrayal..she had vowed never to surrender or be at the mercy of any man especially Mr Perfect.She knew his type..probably born with a silver spoon and had everything easy…looking down on someone like her…no…she would never beg him.

Hello guys...am sorry for the mixup my phone been acting funny lately...Read closely ...posted new episodes 18 &19 ...
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U just made my night jare, welldone angel with the triple 's'.

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IN LOVE WITH HER PASTOR –EPISODE 20
Yetunde smiled as they boarded a cab back home… ‘am so happy you invited me..thank you Eddie’..Edidiong smiled and thanked God ..they hadn’t seen Femi. But she felt a little bit guilty for keeping it to herself…Yetunde had the right to know but this wasn’t the right time. Her cousin had never been this happy…she didn’t want to get her in a bad mood again. The night had been eventful…they had recorded live performances of many songsters and they would talk about it for a long time.
‘Edidiong you are awfully quiet tonight…are you sure you’re okay’? Yetunde asked again only to receive the exact response as earlier..two nods. She sighed..something was bothering her cousin but she let go of the issue and tapped her sleeping child as they approached the house. She believed every word of the Pastor…she had stopped thinking of him as Mr Perfect…there was no good thing about mocking an anointed servant of God. Her admiration for him grew stronger…he was her ideal man…she pushed the haunting thoughts as she remembered his arrogant fiancée. She wondered how he ended up with such a vile woman…but the bible said ‘Judge not..that ye may not be judged’….
They all walked towards the house…something wasn’t right…Yetunde quickly walked to the courtyard and found her neighbours weeping. ‘what happened here’? asking no one in particular as she spotted the lifeless body of her landlady. ‘We were attacked by armed robbers’ one broke down and wailed loudly. Eddie took Naomi and rushed to Yetunde’s room…the door had been greatly vandalized and her television was missing..she hoped that was all and nothing more. ‘Yetunde …come over here…’
She paused and observed her one room apartment…her television was missing…but that wasn’t the important thing…she had just received part of her gains from the savings committee she had joined…she plucked her yellow bag from where it hung…she bit her lip and controlled herself…’God…was this your promise to me’? she wept silently…something was wrong in her life…she hoped to pay part of Naomi’s fees with that money but it was gone now…

Beautiful update more please

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But your writing is too jam packed, kindly introduce spacing and also show who is talking and responding with their names.

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Naomi: Angelsss, we are waiting for more updates.
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IN LOVE WITH HER PASTOR- EPISODE 21 BY ROSE
Yetunde had moved in with her cousin for the mean time…she thanked God for Eddie…she took care of them so well. She smiled as she placed the cash Eddie gave her for her personal shopping. She wished her job at the supermarket was well paying..she would never have any worries. She dressed her little angel..today was her free day..she wasn’t on duty…so she had to get some things for herself. ‘here we go baby..am going to get you ice cream’.
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Calvary thought of Yetunde as he drove…he hadn’t apologized yet to her..he needed to do that but he had been so busy with meetings here and there and had no time to engage Edidiong in any informal discussion. This was his lunch break and he had to find it…his mother’s birthday was coming the previous week..he observed she liked his perfume and he was going to get it for her. He loved her so much..since the demise of his father, Dr Ibrahim Aduga..she was their pillar and she loved her children dearly.
The salesgirl was all smiles when he walked in…she knew he would tip her..he did on most occasions…he was a very nice person. ‘Hello..Onyinye…am looking for this perfume’ he showed her a piece of paper..she directed him to the ‘Paris’ perfume section while returning to the other customers. He rolled his eyes…Genevieve had gotten him that perfume on his 30th birthday..he wished with all his heart to find that exquisite scent. His mother made him laugh..she always enjoyed wearing masculine perfumes..she would say ‘I like the ones that smell strong’.
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Yetunde walked into the beauty store and started her shopping…she needed to get toiletries for them..she didn’t want to use her cousin’s ..the girl had done enough for them. She felt happy ..at least she had a helper…her parents had totally abandoned her to rot. She saw a pretty girl pass..she quickly hid behind the heap of body creams…that was her coursemate..Helen Ojoma…she would’ve been a graduate now ..if only she didn’t fall for Femi’s lies and deceit. But staring at her little angel…she refused to regret..she got up quickly and left for the counter…she had to leave immediately.
The girl weighed her basket and brought out each time..after minutes of calculating.. ‘madam..your money is not enough..it remains about two thousand naira’. She stood still…this was horrible as Naomi was already screaming…. ‘mummy..buy me icecream’. She breathed deeply and was about to return some items when a hand grabbed her basket and dropped it on the counter.
Calvary smiled at they lady who looked confused….. ‘Onyinye..double it…It’s on me’..the girl hesitated but obeyed. He was so happy he had seen her..he picked up Naomi who smiled showing her beautiful dentition… ‘you want icecream?’? he asked and she nodded excitedly and bent to pluck his lashes.
Yetunde felt glued and nervous…she felt like running out..but he was holding Naomi…she swallowed and felt shame wash her like shampoo. The man she had slapped was now helping her…she collected the basket and followed him to where he packed his car. She couldn’t look at him straight in they eye..she was too shy to do that..she hated being helped… ‘Thank you’ was all she muttered but he just kept staring at her. He chuckled softly….. ‘you are quite funny…am sorry for the way I treated you..am hoping we could be friends’. She nodded not able to return his gaze…
The female voice interrupted them… ‘Pastor good day..am surprised to see you here’…the woman eyed Yetunde suspiciously …who was she? And what was she doing with her future son-in-law. Calvary smiled politely… ‘Good afternoon mummy’…the least person he expected to see was Genevieve’s mother.

IN LOVE WITH HER PASTOR- 22 BY ROSE
From the woman’s countenance Yetunde easily deciphered that she wasn’t liked…who was she anyway? She looked away as Calvary discussed with the woman still holding her little angel who was so engrossed in pulling his lashes. Then she thought of Femi, her one time lover who had asked her to get rid of such a beautiful child. Maybe one day she would fall in love again, but it wasn’t going to be anytime soon.
He cleared his throat and eyed her …she looked uncomfortable around him ‘so where were we…this angel here says she wants icecream’ he winked at Naomi but Yetunde couldn’t have it..he had done enough already by paying for her stuff even asking her to pay more. She didn’t want to impose besides men never gave anything for free. Her heart raced…maybe he liked her…that’s why he was so interested in her business. ‘Am sorry Mr Calvary but you’ve done enough..thank you very much and am very sorry for the way I treated you’.
He smiled warmly and squeezed her shoulders ‘that’s why you owe me…after the icecream you are free to run but right now…I need your apologies’. He directed her to the car and settled Naomi on her lap. Yetunde gasped…this was too much for her to bear…they looked like a perfect happy family..which she was not going to have anytime soon. Which man in his right senses would marry a damaged woman?.. he hummed his favorite hymn as they approached the fast food, he stole a glance at her..she looked worried and he wondered why. He felt drawn to this young lady for some reason…he was going to find out about her. Definitely she wasn’t married…she had no ring on her finger…..for some reason he felt relieved. This was getting very confusing….
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Naomi devoured the icecream happily…gaining the attention of the two adults..she felt very special that very day. ‘So…mind telling me a little about yourself’? he looked into her brown eyes but she quickly looked away. He was right! She was a soft lady with a tough exterior…she paused and stared at the window… .. ‘there is nothing to tell’. Why was he so interested in her personal life…could it be because of his generosity he had the right to pry? She closed her eyes…this man was an anointed servant of the most high and she had hurt him once. She was just not used to total strangers…being overly nice
She told him everything except the part about her illegitimate love affair and how she was abandoned by her family. She couldn’t bring herself to do that…she felt embarrassed. He nodded and wondered how she came about the little girl…but he was afraid to ask…he didn’t want to spoil her mood…then his phone rang…… ‘Hello ..Gene..am not in the office right now but…’ he paused as he tried to understand the reason behind her rude response…. ‘Where are you right now….tell me…am coming’. He cut the call immediately, she sounded so rude on the phone. For once, he wondered if Genevieve was a hypocrite because she had never raised her voice on him.

Genevieve is she an APC member, always spoiling things