Literature › Re: The Extremely Appalling Poor Quality Of Writing On Literature Section. by Daeylar(f): 8:26pm On Oct 15, 2017 |
DarkRebel69: You have my attention. Anything else you want to say? Said what I had to say, you made a lot of sense especially with that paragraph i bolded and I just had to point it out. |
Celebrities › Re: Dangote Carried Baby Davido Home After His Christening - Aig-imoukhuede Reveals by Daeylar(f): 7:58pm On Oct 15, 2017 |
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Literature › Re: The Extremely Appalling Poor Quality Of Writing On Literature Section. by Daeylar(f): 7:50pm On Oct 15, 2017 |
kayo80: You could say this if your criticism was constructive, but it definitely wasn't. It is obvious you have tunnel vision when it comes to literary works and expect every form of writing to be one-way. And it is also obvious you have never created anything before, that is why you are so quick to tear down people's works.
Now look at some parts of your initial post and tell me you didn't blatantly disrespect all the great writers in this section.
"I haven't been able to make it past a single paragraph of any story I have clicked on, DESPITE READING OVER 60 STORIES ON THIS BOARD."
"The writers who managed to utilize proper grammar in their first paragraphs were just terribly uncreative with words and the expositions and descriptions were like something you'd read from the transcript of AN UNEDUCATED 8 YEAR OLD NARRATING AN ORDEAL."
"The imagery I got from the ones I managed to read past a sentence were dull, ugly, uninspiring frames and shapes that EVOKED DISGUST AND ALMOST MADE ME GAG AS THEY AROSE IN MY MIND."
If you call the above CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM, there must be something wrong with your brain. I have a background in Psychology, and it is very clear you have a case of superiority complex. It took you five paragraphs to get to your point in your initial post. You were too busy displaying your use of the English Language (which is great by the way), which was a sign that you were really trying to show off your skills than constructively criticize anyone.
You can come back with another response, and try to bamboozle me with your big grammar, but deep down you know what I have said above is the bitter truth. And please, I would love if you could (in your leisure time) 'try' and write a short story of about 2,000 words. You don't have to post it here, just attempt it, and when you are done, do a critique of it. Thank you. Wow, he said all that? I didn't even read the trash he wrote because I've seen him go from section to section antagonizing everyone but that is too bad, No wonder you were so pissed. 1 Like |
Literature › Re: The Extremely Appalling Poor Quality Of Writing On Literature Section. by Daeylar(f): 7:48pm On Oct 15, 2017 |
Lilyjoe567: Hello Mr THT80,
So I've gone through the first, and now to this current page and seen all comments but one really stuck. The one with the constructive and destructive criticism.
It's okay to criticise, fine we even need it. But it's very wrong to condemn every persons work on here just because you think it's not up to per standard, cause what you did is just destroy some people's morale.
Some of us here are introverts and writing is what makes our voices be heard in a way. But you doing this right now has done more damage than you could possibly imagine
You read something and didn't like it, fine, you could've just pointed out where the persons went wrong, not condemn everyone's work that they've worked so hard on.
We're not all professionals. Some might be, but some aren't, so it's not right to openly be mean, cause that's what you are. And you are egotistical, not sure if you know it though. But I have a feeling you do
So next time you feel the need to say something in a public forum, grab a book and a pen and write the things you wanna say. When you're done, read what you've written, and if you read it and a little, if not much just that little part of you feels it's gonna hurt a lot of people, then tear it off and begin again in a fresh page till you can come up with a nicer way of saying it
And to all you wonderful people trying to stand up for all writers on here. You guys are all amazing
And sorry this is coming a bit late This was very nice, He is just going from section to section causing trouble everywhere 2 Likes |
Romance › Re: “if I R@pe You And You Cum, It’s Unfair To Call The Police On Me”- Twitter User by Daeylar(f): 7:40pm On Oct 15, 2017 |
izzou: Just came back from work  When's your birthday?  |
Fashion › Re: Embracing The Beauty Of Your Natural Hair by Daeylar(f): 7:32pm On Oct 15, 2017 |
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Literature › Re: The Extremely Appalling Poor Quality Of Writing On Literature Section. by Daeylar(f): 7:32pm On Oct 15, 2017*. Modified: 11:12pm On Oct 15, 2017 |
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Fashion › Re: Embracing The Beauty Of Your Natural Hair by Daeylar(f): 6:34pm On Oct 15, 2017 |
Why did I just see this thread now?  I love this thread  Nice one lovelygurl |
Romance › Re: “if I R@pe You And You Cum, It’s Unfair To Call The Police On Me”- Twitter User by Daeylar(f): 6:06pm On Oct 15, 2017*. Modified: 6:57pm On Oct 15, 2017 |
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Family › Re: Man Should Not Beat Woman: What If She Slapped Your Mother? by Daeylar(f): 5:57pm On Oct 15, 2017*. Modified: 11:13pm On Oct 15, 2017 |
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Romance › Re: Call Out Those Nairalanders You Miss A Lot Right Now by Daeylar(f): 5:52pm On Oct 15, 2017 |
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Family › Re: Most Men Doesn't Want Their Wives To Be Richer Than Them, WHY? by Daeylar(f): 5:43pm On Oct 15, 2017 |
Acidosis: Cooking is not a function of who has less money. Stop idolizing money. My wife will cook, and that's not because I earn more..
Many men will not cook because it is simply not "manly" for them to cook all the time. A man or woman that wants to cook will do so even while he/she earns millions.
If at some point, a woman earns so well that she can no longer take care of her house, the ideal thing is to assign some of the roles to an alternate HELPmate. A husband is not a helpmate . A husband is not a helpmate? It is finished |
Romance › Re: “if I R@pe You And You Cum, It’s Unfair To Call The Police On Me”- Twitter User by Daeylar(f): 5:38pm On Oct 15, 2017 |
izzou: You almost beat up that dude
Happy Sunday. How's you doing? Ah.  Its a lie  , Happy Sunday also, You is good, you is good And you?  |
Romance › Re: “if I R@pe You And You Cum, It’s Unfair To Call The Police On Me”- Twitter User by Daeylar(f): 12:20pm On Oct 15, 2017 |
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Family › Re: Most Men Doesn't Want Their Wives To Be Richer Than Them, WHY? by Daeylar(f): 11:11am On Oct 15, 2017 |
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Politics › Re: North Got Lion’s Share Of World Bank Projects Under Buhari — Documents by Daeylar(f): 8:04am On Oct 15, 2017 |
otil1: No! You got it wrong.
Biafran got £20 for any amount whatsoever they left in their bank accounts, even if you have £1billion!
Those without bank deposits got nothing. So it's not like £20 compensation. It's a mark down to £20.
Confirm it! This is why we should teach history. Incase anyone misses this |
Family › Re: Most Men Doesn't Want Their Wives To Be Richer Than Them, WHY? by Daeylar(f): 6:32am On Oct 15, 2017 |
cruchenutii: [s] Lets just agree that Women are complicated beings that start messing up when they are giving little power LOL[/s] Misogynist |
Romance › Re: My Neighbour's 8year Old Daughter Is “sexually Precocious"...any Advice Please? by Daeylar(f): 5:31am On Oct 15, 2017 |
madridguy: Though am not doctor but I would suggest Female genital mutilation" female circumcision " for the 8 years old girl to calm her body before it's too late. This. Is it Even after all your nonsense in politics section this is the one that finally shows that you have lost it. It is finished |
Romance › Re: People Ask: Is Sleeping With A Drunk Person Considered Rape? by Daeylar(f): 5:26am On Oct 15, 2017 |
It's rape |
Family › Re: Most Men Doesn't Want Their Wives To Be Richer Than Them, WHY? by Daeylar(f): 5:17am On Oct 15, 2017 |
Afam4eva: If you make more money than us, what then do we have to offer other than our pen1s...
Right there is the reason why a lot of men (not all) don't want their wives to make more money than them because it takes away their true manliness. The manliness is the reason they are respected and in some occasions, feared by their wives, so why risk something like that? I like people who speak the truth |
Romance › Re: Sapiosexuality: My Profound Attraction Towards Intelligent Women by Daeylar(f): 4:54am On Oct 15, 2017*. Modified: 8:12am On Oct 15, 2017 |
Sapiosexuality: It's not fair. When you are expecting a life-changing mention but you are seeing grapes everywhere. It's not fair.  you guys who use words in the English vocabulary as monikers are just setting yourselves up. Lol |
Romance › Re: Call Out Those Nairalanders You Miss A Lot Right Now by Daeylar(f): 7:57pm On Oct 14, 2017*. Modified: 5:52pm On Oct 15, 2017 |
nwamaikpe People took him too seriously, He made me laugh  although I admit he did go overboard sometimes. |
Romance › Re: “if I R@pe You And You Cum, It’s Unfair To Call The Police On Me”- Twitter User by Daeylar(f): 7:24pm On Oct 14, 2017 |
Mynd44: This is why I wrote that it is better to ask plainly "are you sure you want to do this?"
Look, this might seem "lame" or make it seem like the guy has no "game" but it is a sure way to stay out of trouble.
Trying to read signs and acting on them can get one in trouble very fast.
But when the message is (said to be) garbled, the decision rests with the judge/jury Thanks |
Romance › Re: 'I Curved Him For 4 Years, Dated His Bestfriend & Brother. Had A Baby 4 His Cuz by Daeylar(f): 7:15pm On Oct 14, 2017*. Modified: 7:33pm On Oct 14, 2017 |
Chai, Speechless  This babe is strong, she dated his brother, friend and cousin yet she still wants to marry him. Should I say congratulations?  Anyway, it's their life, I wish them well |
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Family › Re: A Woman Has My Dad Under Control by Daeylar(f): 6:33pm On Oct 14, 2017 |
Jman06: The hypocrisy of some Nigerian men is being exhibited on this thread. Imagine some guys typing that the man is only enjoying himself and should be allowed. See them making light of infidelity! If the woman was the one cheating, all of them would have slut-shamed her. I wish all women whose men are cheating on could start paying them in their own coins. It will help to tame the infidelity of some men. It's their way, useless hypocrites |
Car Talk › Re: ₦70m: Amazing Images Of Land Rover Discovery Converted Into A Mobile Kitchen by Daeylar(f): 2:22pm On Oct 14, 2017 |
Aliex: I suspect their primary audience is campers/those who spend much of their time in remote areas. Not uncommon in US/Canada. I understand, I applaud them, like I said they always look for a way to make life easier, Some campers may use RVs, this is just another option, it's nice. |
Christianity Etc › Re: Atheists, Christians, Muslims And Deists Are All Irrational People by Daeylar(f): 1:07pm On Oct 14, 2017 |
segunojo866, I read this topic before got confused and left it, Decided to give it another try,
So since everyone is irrational, who is actually rational? And what makes them rational? |
Crime › Re: Bag Snatcher Caught In Onitsha, Beaten To Pulp By Mob (Graphic Photos) by Daeylar(f): 11:49am On Oct 14, 2017 |
Nairaland and graphic pictures,
This is too bad |
Christianity Etc › Re: Do This With Your Tithe Instead Of Giving It To Private Jet Owners (see Photos) by Daeylar(f): 11:45am On Oct 14, 2017 |
Wow  That's nice of him |
Family › Re: A Woman Has My Dad Under Control by Daeylar(f): 10:40am On Oct 14, 2017*. Modified: 6:31pm On Oct 14, 2017 |
Sheun001: i suspect that as much but this marriage is over 21yrs and i dont want one stupid lady that didnt go through thick with us to now comman scatter the marriage You dad is the one scattering the marriage not the 'stupid' woman.  The same way he chased them away before he should have done so now That you dad hasn't done such before doesn't mean he can't start now. Can you talk to your dad about this? If you can Try |
Jobs/Vacancies › Re: See Nine (9) Dos And Don'ts While Going For A Teaching Job Interview In Nigeria by Daeylar(f): 10:34am On Oct 14, 2017 |
fakoo1: Teaching job remains the best job anyone could apply for in this country. I am proud to be a Teacher Nice |