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That immortal dey save her real daughter "AKanwa" abi na wetin be ha name.

Congratulations Plomoe. Maybe i should give you an atom of trust.


Double post by you . . .there

This thread will never die, even for years . . Lol.

Please encourage an amateur

www.nairaland.com/1458354/lesser-power-short-amazin-story#18441129

chistar01: nice one, you kept me stucked to my phone screen until I finished the post but it Seems like a nollywood script and I hate nollywood movies.Anyway, carry on. *following*

My Oga himself is here. I'm honoured bro.

Lol.. You hate Nollywood? Me too. But you can't run away from it. This no be nollywood naa, abeg tel l me the place wen look Nollywoodlike, so i can change it.

Please don't forget to correct my errors sir.

adegwurulez: yesoooo i'm one of ur pioneer fans. jst incase dis makes front page, i was here

My heavy bros, i'm humbled.

You said "front page?" LoL

Thanks for commenting.

desertboom: Nice so far. . .
What's the theme of the story?

Thanks very much sir, i hope you enjoy the rest part.

I will give you an award for commenting first ooh.

Thriller, i'd say.

"Oh, what a hell of a kingdom i would have had without Ozoigbon,"
he thought forgetting the Guard standing there.

The Chief and Ozoigbon had tormented this young man so much to make him suicidal, but he grew bigger and more powerful.

"Oooh How i hate that boy," he found himself saying, thereby noticing Edafe. "What does he want?"

"Where is he now?"

"Why am i getting the message now?" He poured the questions to the poor Edafe, who was contemplating confusingly the question that fits answering first.

"He awaits your call, your Highness"
Edafe finally find himself saying- praying it pleases His Masters ear.

"The Chief was calm, a mixture of anger and sadness filled his soul. He felt like strangling the devil of a boy. 'Send him in, if you want to!' He spat out at last." Edafe zoomed off.

He came back a minute later Ushering in a young man. The young man was tall and fair; he was in his late 20's/early 30's. He was a handsome young man, full of smiles; his clothes were all white: he had a suit on. He walked as if he had no problems, counting his steps one by one.
Emiru was his name.

The Chief looked up and saw his worst enemy walking smilingly towards him.
"Ooh if he knew how i hated him" he thought.

One thing the Chief hated he did, and is still doing "Smiling heavily & happily when all was never well."

"May i sit Chief?" a calm voice came from nowhere, and interrupts the Chief's thoughts.

"That's if you want to" the Chief answered with hatred, visibly showing him how much he hates him.

It didn't prick Emiru as he smiled and sat down. The Chief wanted shouting, he was furious and highly mad. He couldn't comprehend the fact that this dude would still smile, after all he've made him pass through. Though he wasn't really behind his whole torture but he supported Ozoigbon Lately. The Chief objected to Emiru being killed at birth, and to the lynching of h is parents and siblings for having something to do with a "foreseen bad egg."

He was now regretting his actions: for ever disagreeing to Ozoigbon's decision since it caused a great misunderstanding & the Lad had become a thorn in his flesh.

He looked at him, there he sat as if he owns the whole world. He cared and worried less about anything; this got the Chief confused.

"What should i tell him now, 'i hate you Emiru or what?'" he thought within, but was caught off guard when Emiru spoke.

"Why are you tormenting me, Chief?" Emiru said.

He was a man of few words; a friend told that all his said words since birth aside his sermon and prayers, would not amount to a thousand.

"What is he talking about?" the Chief's Mind asked his Heart.

"As if you don't know" the Heart replied sadly.

``Yes! I had tormented him badly, i had hurt him and all the people dearly but, they caused it.`` He defended himself to Himself.

"I should be the one asking you that question, elf" the Chief spat out with contempt.

"You should mind your use of words when addressing with a Man of God, chief" Emiru advised calmly.

"And who the hell are you to determine how i reply my subjects peasant?" the Chief replied angrily.

*TBC*

My people don't view and walk away ooh. Put something down, it's an amateur write up.

I'm someone lesser than an amateur in literature, this is my first write-up ever.

Please bear with me, with God and Time i will improve.

Your corrections, suggestions, encouragements, critics would be perfectly honoured with great delight.

It was un-usually cold that uncertain Tuesday evening.

Cold innocent air ran through the face of the Chief as he tossed uncomfortably while sitting on the gold coloured magnificient chair.

He thought about the happenings in his own nutured kingdom- his mighty fortress, his power and authority being dragged to dust by a once rejected son of a diseased father.

He cursed the day the young man was born, he regreted his actions: for not allowing Ozoigbon the great priest, to do the killing of the young man himself.

What a great loss a negligeble mistake as such, had caused.

"oooh, why now that i'm at the peak of my reign?" He thought aloud.
The guard nearest to him was alert at his master,. "what should be bodering this great cheif?" That was what his facial expression read.
The chief gave him a knowing look, on realizing his mistake and asked him to piss 'off.
Like lightening the guard was off.

Now he was alone, his most trusted guard was out. He was free to think even louder without worries. He looked upward and fixed his gaze at gigantic ceiling fan rotating speedingly, he shook his head slowly and bit his lower lips.

"what is wrong with me?" He asked himself rhetorically.

He was supposed to be the strong-hearted god-like creature highly feared and highly revered in his kingdom and all over Africa.

Here he sat, so engrossed in his thought; that it seems he would go mad. He was deeply in thoughts mixed with soliloquy when he noticed something. He fixed his gaze at a creature who appeared obstructing his view, it had the shape of a man, extremely dark in appearance, it had something like horns and thorns all over his body. It held a spear in his hand, and was approaching with a great speed towards him.
The Chief left out a very brisk shout in fear, he held his hands together with his mouth agape, and eyes wide opened as if in great shock.

"It's me your Highness"

The chief heard in disbelief, he thought he saw an approaching beast, a beast addressing him as "Your Highness?" what an irony. He melted.

There stood Edafe, the chief's most trusted guard half bent, with his hands almost touching the bricked floor- he almost lying flat on the floor.

He was pleading, begging for his life. It was a purnishable offence to scare the great Chief. The last guard that did it out of drunkeness was boiled to death, now Edafe was lying down flat begging for even a reduction in his purnishment.

He came in to deliver an urgent message to the King: That The Chief's arch enemy visits, only to find the king shifting backwards and shouting in great fear and dismay. He was dead.

"Stand up and stand out," Edafe heard the Chief saying.
Edafe stood out waiting for his death sentence, he prayed silently.

"Let it be a quick death," he wished.

"I asked you out, why are you here?"
The chief asked angrily.

"I'm sorry Your Highness" Edafe retorted confusingly.

Now the Chief was almost boiling, he needed an answer and not an apology; he tried relaxing himself in an attempt to bring down his high temper, before he do something he would definately soonest.

"I had an urgent call that Emiru visits you" Edafe added.

""Emiru?" the chief said, rather rhetorically.
The same young man he detests so dearly visits him, or what's he talking about?"

What on the deep blue hell would that troll-like creature wants from him. He had been the cause of his agony, the pains he'd been nursing secretly.

He'd changed his once Autocratic Kingdom into a near democratic one, but for the help of Ozoigbon.


*TBC*

NairaLand got talent

I pray i write more than you guys someday.

Nice so far . .



But i'm having a two thought about some. .. Lemme leave that part sha

Sammy Hoe: Na wa o. My mind just keep thumping each time I view the thread. Maybe I should not even submit anything again ##

Don't be a coward. . .even with what you've got, you may win the money for us . . . . You will do better only if you believe you can. . .oya Carry go ===>>

"A pain in the a"rse"

Wow, it's lovely to be born again..!

HumbledbYGrace: My half, when did you land?

please deal with this controversial guy for me, I no trust you wen it comes to this kinda things

Few minutes ago my dear. . .


LOL . .if you guys go mad at Foxy, then i don't think y'all would be comfortable in Delta State . . .because everything/everybody are annoying in some aspects

Just give him what he wants. . . "Unserious words for an unserious dude"

[quote author=Foxy_Flow]Can I abuse your papsman and get away with it?[/quote]Yea Sure. Even my mum . . .buh not my God

Nobody'z above insults. . .


As they've said "You're becoming annoying" . .not err one can pardon

texanomaly: *sucks in air...coughs as popcorn is sucked down into my lungs. kingphillip starts slapping me on the back. The popcorn is dislodged and I gasp for air.*

chinedumo may be right...this story is for the guys.

*Gets up. Thanks kingphillip for the popcorn. Smiles at all and says good bye. Walks out*

Wence goeth thou?

Stories av got no sex


After "Man wey dey reason" i havn't really "laughter" hard . . . .fortunately for me, there'z a remedy.


Make una make this story "Sex free" naa. I mean for both sex.. . . It's too masculine

Roy. . . So when the story is getting "saucier" you nailed the empty plank abi? You for add more sha. . . Niceeee.


HBG give Foxy what he wants make he leave you alone naa...

Foxy Redeath

Confirm. . . .NEXT

LOL. . .thanks 4d update

Choose what I want..

THREAD CLOSED FAH?

I'm thinking of reading it again self ^_o