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cloaked: ....ah!...my bad!!!...i guess, i need 2 get some rest nw!...nightie-night cutie!

#sleepingmode

i tot so. Sleep talker

cloaked: ...hmmm!...dat's quite intriguing bloke!

u?

GodzBELOVED: Oga Saikoloji, what are u thinkin o?

i dint say anytin.
Mouth zipped

cloaked: ....hmmm!...abi make me n u start 2 dey go training ni!....at least b4 d next AFCON we go don sabi play!...abi wetin u fink?

PS: i hope say u no get pot belly sha?...lols...anyway no probs, even if u get, u go just dey keep 4 us!

guy i no be u. Am a baller right from time.
Park well

GodzBELOVED: Wow,nice! I'm living around there!

interesting.
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....rendezvous...
Am thinking

cloaked: ...cool fin cutie!...i guess we belong 2 same faculty!

yea. Soc. Sci

cloaked: ....fella, ur words re just lyk a lit lighter or match stick in a room filled with ethene gas!...i just hope it doesn't explode directly in ur face!

boooooooooooooooooooooooooooooom!!!!
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i think it just did

GodzBELOVED: Isolo. Se o mo isolo sha? Lol

haaa, story.
Laughing in greek
Place where i don live sef.
Ire-akari estate to be precise.

kaaaa, hope u dint miss dis show.
All d supa eagles wit awards:
Keshi - CON; amokachi, ike shorunmu, other assistant coaches and yobo - OON; other players - MON; Plots of land for each players in abuja, cash prices, excetra.
Really happy for this guys.
Cant wait for maracana '14

cloaked: ...hmmm!...u've seriously got a wonderful imagin-ing sense!...have u tried writting a movie?...an epic one 2 be precise!...#justIMHO!

lol, thanks

kuiye: Dude my name came out on d merit list, in fact I already new I got admitted since d day d cut of was published. There's no nid 2 cover up 4 Oau. Dat school is frustrating people.

wat more can i say than we're so close.

nna mennnn, dis thread don move up wella dis night alone o

kuiye: Can someone pls tel me wat's wrong with oau. I can believe dis match 4th that I've been dreaming about is jst a speculation and there is nothing tangible about it(considering d fact dat's it's not official, I'm thinking of anoda Jamb o, because it's like Oau doesn't intend 2 admit this year). Oau is nothing but a confused university moving @ a snail pace(no offence guys)

d only reason y u wud tink of anoda jamb is if uve not seen ur name

GodzBELOVED: hehe. O baje ti! Do u stay in lag too? If yes,where?

@ d mainland. U?

Olastep1: na wa o. So all this e-criticism is going on right behind me, huh? I think i should drop my macintosh and pick up my bullet-proof vest cos i may be hit by a stray e-bullet.
This gloatfenk never cease to amaze me... I can see u have a great flair towards writing but u dont realy know the basics. Permit me d sharp criticism. Trust me, i wouldnt call ur writings a peom. I would rather call it a figurative write-up. A poem dont just start from no where n ends somewhere. It doesnt involve so much slangs n abbreviations. My guy, i'm not poisoning ur mind. I'm telling u in a better position, that is, that u shud try learning what poems means. Do a little googleing.
And dont forget in a poem, u dont loose contact with ur audience. See, there's nothing bad if u accept what i said. The fact remains i strained my eyes to get 75% of what u mean. Though, its not bad but u can do better....

*wears my bullet proof vest already*

*shot*
*shot*
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dint anyone tell u not to wear d nigerian police bullet proof vest?
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look wat uve caused, my james bond 'walker kp3' pistol just passed tru it.
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anyway ure lucky...
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...u dint make it to hell

GodzBELOVED: What's your course? If you can get to Adams' at Oshodi, you should be able to buy there.

hmmmm, lagosians full here ooo, eko o ni baje

GodzBELOVED: Lol. It's normal o. I have this 'inner-eye' for poems or articles so if I see a good one, I know. And if I see one that needs lil changes, I know. If the write-up is nothing to read abt, I'd know that too. I wouldn't have read all of the poem buh I felt it was a nice one when I read the 1st few lines and that's why I gave my verdict. If I didn't like the poem, I'd have jus scrolled down and ignored it. Buh as we can see, I've become at fault for pointing things out. It's just life anyway. I can deal with it.

i knew u would

GodzBELOVED: Thank God at least somebody here knows this! Bless yu!

you too

sseeyyii: 53 Remi Fani Kayode Crescent Ikeja GRA... bt its dat of Osun State...

ok

GodzBELOVED: *deep sigh* I sincerely do not know how to reply you. Who ever said we don't have flaws,huh? Everybody does! You see, I'm not the kind of person who gives mild correction. If I take my time to read thru ur poem and I find sumfn to point out, I wouldn't keep quiet. I'd point it out,cuz I know yu can do better,it's now left for yu to check it. If sum1 else doesn't c ur wrongs and tell u,how wud u knw them? If I write and somebody corrects me on sumfn or rates my work 0.5 over ten or tells me a better way to write, I wouldn't get all angry and reject it- in fact, i'd even be happy to receive the correction. The person may not even know how to write buh I'd still heed the advice. Well,mr man, no man is an island,they say. U need contributions to make u grow. U need criticism to make u better. I don't regret anytin i've said so far- i jus regret that I gave yu valuable correction on my own part. I'm very sure that sum1 else wud point dis out to you sooner or later. I'm nt feeling important buh i'm sure of that. Mark my words.

good remark.

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but...
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...you spoilt d whole thing with d 'mark my words' u used.
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thats like stabbing someone in d heart and forgetting to remove the knife...
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...leaving d person cold.
Am not hapi wit dat

Fynestboi: yap am dne wit jamb no time to check tym, jamb is nt a new tn 2 me!!(my 3rd tm) so if u knw pls tell me

wat course are u in for?

Sir mikky: Normal...more?

i'll spare u d details

gloatkenf: Abio, thanks jae, omo iya, chop knockle nah, ehn ehn ehn, oya, gba, ehn you get am jo, you ja gan... I gentale o jae... But won't dare keep silent unnecessarily, where utter action is scarce jae, in such situation, when has got to talk wella...

a lot of pple here will actually be shaking their heads for u in silent mode.

gloatkenf: Ah ah, HALAUSA O, DO YOU WANNA SEE quranic/boko-haramic version, all dey wella... Were lie...

u dey take style call me were abi?
1-0

Sir mikky: All of una dey here when Tosin ACCA been dey ask phrasal verbs questions..etc,una nor gree ansa...I don see lyk 15 ansas to d last question naw...mk ah guess......it dey cheap? Hahahahahaha, keep it up guys... Sir Mikky™ nonilizin

let me tell u a little bout me...
...i dont give what i dont have

sseeyyii: Jst got my Certificate of Origin 2day....Omo see questn dat's fustratin bt tnk God i finally av it.....OAU waitin 4 u ooooooo

where did u get it?

Fynestboi: Pls were can i get oau past questn. @ surulere, mushin, itire?

past question for wat naaaa?
Are u trying to say uve cleared up dat of jamb at just d second week of february?
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first things first.
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i repeat, first things first

GodzBELOVED: lol. I shake my head and smile ruefully. It's obvious you don't want to be corrected and yeah,that's okay. If you think I meant any hard and dream-killing criticism,then you need to think well. I only commented 'cuz I felt that although, you have a sense of writing, you still need to work on it and I pointed out things that you should do to help you. One wud expect yu to take to correction and learn. Do you think it's everybody who wud have time to start reading yur works and start telling u where ur flaws are? Think, please. If you have a p with being corrected or criticized, then that's one very bad trait I must tell yu....and I can't vie on dis case with yu,that wasn't my intention in the 1st place.

P.S: I am not a guy, I am a girl!

uve got a point in d reading aspect. Not evribody will hav d time to read it.
Like me, i stop reading from d 3rd line, then i scroll down and continue d last 2 or 3 lines.
Am just bein honest

Tonisious504: *lukin confused* i didn't get dat.

might be a poem...u'll never know

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gloatkenf: [b]Big bro lols, don't contrast this era with Shakespear's era, thegene/ the inborn ability matches though but the styles at which a sensitive poet inserts into his works varies, chum, abstract, you made me laugh out loud Walahi Kristi ngbo, guy, who transfered the tainted tit-bit to you that I have been crowned to being an ordained bard, am yet on the path of perfection and I guess we all are, ehm, Mr. Guy,pen yours and let's vie cos of the same on this poem matter, ehn nah, I do this daily... Guy, don't victimise baselessly, Shakes just didn't become the just now fore for ever Shakes within a macro sec nah, go and enquire your grate ones, perhaps, ehn, exume 'em who cares nah besides, your words stinks so so laced with sinisterous remarks and kind of pinchy butwho cares about any that dares but hey, that ain't me first penning, munch that, hundreds had been published and had been supra-rated, askmy parley nah, www.google.com he's o'er there bro who the hell on earth seeks your sloppy ratings? Abi nah, say more guy...[/b]

King James version english.
Am clapping

Lickingleks: aside d undisputable fact dat d criticism ws overly harsh, i also tink it ws both impractical n unappropri8. I apreci8 d idea of criticism bt i bliv dat it shld b balanced. Wen u maximize a person's failins n minimize his creditable achievements, he tends 2 bliv dat his effort ws mostly bad. Dat is a TERRIBLE tin

na lie.
Criticism is all bout blasting, lambasting, name it.
Dat balance word shud not be used.
Dosnt exist when criticism comes to play