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[quote author=One book!]make i just post am my self na, coz i sent it twice. . .just holla when u ready[/quote]Are you buying time or what?
Oga go ahead and post, Ibime will post mine na.

airmark: Mikuz, thanks for the verdict and appreciate your observations. However, there were some lines which flew over your head suprisingly to me. No wonder everyone said it was a weak brawl. But to me its better than yours and chockid's.

You asked what was meant by cocaine... Chalks? I don't need to explain what cocaines mean again. 'Chalk' is a street slang for methampethamine, which also is a drug. Don't tell me u don't dig.

You said my line '' not on this earth will amateur own vet" is faulty. That gat me laughing, your problem here is "own". Own in this context meant control not possess. Check the dictionary for different meanings of own. So the line is faultless. You can check video titles like ronaldo owned great stars, or ashley cole got owned by ronaldo on youtube. So that line is valid.

Also you faulted my closer, well if you had analysed the bar well its like usin one bar to kill 2. ''From my home to their zone'' is an intro to my success of killing DJ n his boss blaq bonez on the same location lagos state where dj 5naira schooled at hopebay college okokomaiko and also blaq bonez is now known and based in lagos, so it was spot on. This bar to real heads also doubled as call out to blaq bonez who is next on my list after I knew dj 5naira's demise had been completed by the previous bars above. This may look strange to you but its not a bad idea bro.

As regards provision of links, I did it to pprotect dj 5naira in his subsequent brawls. We should be our brother's keeper as a Mod. ℓ☺ℓ. I hope u know if they were invalid, DJ is nt a quiet type. He would have debunked the personals. I know it will b more murderous for exampple seeing dj munching bones. ℓ☺ℓ

Regards to all who voted.

Don't do this. None of your lines few over my head, its either you had a poor concept or your framing was awful. Cocaine is a drug, and yes chalk can also be used as a slang for a drug too. So 'cocaine chalk' was a needless repetetion. Na tautology be that. The concept was nice but the way you framed was disappointing. No imagery. "I could use cocaine as a chalk to write his name . . and he still won't appear do.,pe/" Could have been a better punch. Oga telling us you will write someone's name with cocaine chalk is senseless unless you can prove that some chalks are made from cocaine. Having a decent concept is not where it ends, but possessing the wits to deliver it is what makes you dope.
If you think that there's nothing wrong with this : "not on the earth will amateur own vet" then you need to take a breather. I wasn't refering the word 'own' when a criticized that line. Don't insult my intelligence. Go read my battle with Prince, I said something like " He'll get owned with disses" No? I think you do not grab why people are calling this fight a disappointing one.
Are you battling Dj and Blaqbones? How do you prove that Blaq is his boss? There nothing you did to show us that Blaq is his boss. See, in text battles any personal you make must come with a proof. So if I battle with someone for instance and I use a personal by saying that his babe has a 'k leg',his mum is a horrible witch and his dad is a g@y vulcanizer without proof you will believe it? Ok.

You cant compare my verse against Choc with this two verses joined together. No be mouth. And stop insulting peoples' intelligence with all these claims unless you want to start judging ya own battles. I also feel some of my lines flew over most of the judges and I do not think he was more aggressive than me, but what did I say? Na me go judge my battles? So chill.

EvilChapterz: I'll post it on your Fb inbox,

Do not try that!!

[quote author=яhymΣ_ ȴunα†!¢]Nawa for Mikuz and onebook oh..man dey hungry na[/quote]No me me dey dull. I no know if Book dey blank like new notes.

EvilChapterz: Dj 5Naira how far nah?





Pls don't allow Xmass meet to delay Our Battle Jhoor

Send ya verse na. Nlking@hushmail.com

Opener : Airmark

Dj I didn't grab what you said in your first line. Totally did not make sense to me. That said, I dont understand why you flexed with your opener. You're supposed to punch with it and not use it to hype yaself bro. Not good enough.
Airmark you did something better. Ya concept was good sha, but I aint impressed with the way you framed the punch.

Rhymes : Tie

Dj ya choice of words eh. What's 'the same poorly diction'?, 'The hater spits dry plus jargons/ we know his 'truth says' are still farce cum random/' - WTF! 'Held on firmly/ never left off pennies/' - meaning?
IMO . . Ya rhymes hardly connected.
Airmark you rhymed '5naira with dilemma and Liberia? Smh. Very annoying! 'This aint JOSHUA base, why will your T B fans expect you cripple running?/' - whats this supposed to mean? 'Not on this earth will an amateur own vet/' - Na wa o. Mtcheew. 'Take fight from ma home to their zone/' - their zone? Poor diction, how many people are you battling?
I can't call this. Both glads had nothing going so far this criterium is concerned!

Similes/ Metaphor - Airmark

Dj ya Shu line was nice. But this is a battle thread and not flow for rank bro. You're expected to drop upper cuts and breath taking jabs and not hype ya self.
'his cry was heard far off Jerusalem the way my guards bent 'air rod' . . . till the Roman client king of Judea begged for mercy/' - What concerns 'the Roman client king of Judea' with Airmark? Poor comparison. Useless metaphor. The framing and imagery was terrible too. Haba!
With due respect, your Look out for line is a total letdown. Another worthless comparison. Trash!
Airmark erm . . You tried with ya opener sha.
Don't try that ish you did with microsoft again please. WTF!!
You tried with the Nosa Igiebor line too.
'dumb like arrested stvpid thief in my area/' - this is shocking! Are you serious?
Is there anything like 'cocaine chalks'? Or are my missing something?
Both of them tried but I give this to Airmark, his comparisons were a little bit better.

Punchlines : Airmark

'observe e'ery letter in ''N.B.T contest'' . . . . no A.I.R.M.A.R.K, worst of all, no U innit!!!!!!/'
Lol . . Dj5naira you did not participated in the N.B.T. contest sef and you are yabbing one of the finalist claiming he didnt participate in it? Smh. 'i'll ask my hungry neighbour to suck his breastful chest' - WTF!
'You lack the ''Elements of Speech'' b.itch . . . like the ''name of that article'' which you bit from in that same competition!/' - Omo which article? What are you spitting?
'You've never been original mark . . . . even ya identity is siphoned from an Indonesia air transport service/' - which is? Punch did not land, poor framing.
Airmark most of ya punches too barely landed. That famous mate punch made no sense to me.
The Doe line is trash.
Which one is mikuz tourney bikonu? So I get tourney? Na from ya mouth I dey here am o. Your diction eh. . .
So Dj went to Delta to capture rodents? Ok.
Airmark got this one too. He made a lil better attempts in landing his punches.

Personals : Airmark

Clean sweep. Nothing worthy of note from Dj. I chuckled after reading the long neck line. Kinda true sha. Airmark got this one as well although some of his personals were invalid since they came without links or proofs.

Flow : Dj5naira

I went with more ease with his verse.

Wordplay : Tie

Dj ya own version of the Techno pun na wa. Please dont tell me you played 'Herod' with 'air rod' please. Always coming with useless puns is Dj's greatest undoing. WTF with the Ah reek pun? Smh.
Airmark ya Turf More pun is senseless. You are tough more? How do you do that? I didnt feel ya own version of the Techno flip too.

Closer : Dj5naira

Airmark I don't get what you were saying. You must be kidding.
Dj5naira so thats why wrote ya verse in red? Nice concept. That was your best effort so far this battle is concerned.

Overall I am far from impressed, the fight did not live up to the billing considering the fact that both netcees have been in the game long enough to spit better than these. Dj if na another battler you for don run come quote punches and drop pics abi? A lil taste of your own medicine. No? I was expecting you to beat Mark really but what can I say?

MVGT : Airmark

Book, which Ibime did you send ya verse to?

I have sent my verse.

@Book

Please lets post today. Tired of holding ya verse bro.

20 lines it is. Evil and DJ send in ya bars make I pop thread.

demsid: I'm sorry .how are we sure all d personal info of dj5naira stated by airmark is real. did he get them from fb or they knew each other.

How does it concern you? Please your views are irrelevant here.

demsid: nawa o. airmark kill DJ 5naira with personals o

Please quit this nonsense. I dont expect this from you.

Voting Criteria :

Opener
Rhymes
Similes/ Metaphor
Punchlines
Personals
Flow
Wordplay
Closer

Rules

- 32 lines.

- Deadline is 9pm.

- Verses should be sent to nlking@gmail.com

- No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or recycling.

- A no show attracts a ban.

- No unnecessary comments

Goodluck!!!

We posting today . . 32 lines. Lemme get the thread . . .

Open for votes!!

Airmark's Verse


<DJ 5naira’s real name is Efe, he has a bro Ochuko and plumpy sister Ufuoma. He studied at Hope Bay college, okokomaiko Lagos before moving to delta in search of oil money. He has a picture on facebook munching chicken bones. Do you wonder why king tourney did nt feature Dj 5naira? Do you know why his Signature: ''I'm looking at my own eyes without the mirror'' on his nairaland profile?>



Missiles @ DJ 5naira


Party is over, never knew this disable still exist/can this scavenger under the table please exit?/ DJ’s wack with tattered costume / his ’ indomie/ bars, in ‘2 minutes’ will be scattered, consumed!!!/

AIRMARK!!! - thatz my name, 20 shots at DJ remixin wrongly/

He’s not gittin it right coz i ‘tough more’, ballin in burnley!!!/ < Turf
Moor, home ground of burnley fc>

Mofo on outdated ‘soft wear’ thinking he may ‘win me’/

See I open ‘Windows’ at ‘8’, ya sis ufuoma at ‘gate’, her ‘bill’ i pay...,... her ‘micro soft security essential’ bo,.obs ‘up dating’ me!!!/

Efe’s future unassailably is getting dim / begged ‘Igiebor’ to pitiably invest in him/ dude said ‘No sir’, he knows what a wasteful, ‘real bet is’ /am not in his league....’DJ’ wont still top me if allowed to ‘turn table’, with techniques/

‘‘I’m looking at my own eyes without a mirror’’, thatz what his status states/

He studied on ‘trees’, dropped out in okokomaiko slum in lagos state/

Now armed with king kong pics in various rates/cant be wrong when he looks into the eyes of his famous mate!!!/

Y’all know Dj’s booking fee is ‘5NAIRA’/he’s rueing in dilemma/dumb like arrested stvpid thief in my area/gave him ‘DOE treatment’ in Liberia!!!/ <Samuel Doe>

Y’all check ma profile, he did nt know i recorded him/

he ‘plays his card’ but neva go through, even in ‘tech? no!’, unsupported ‘sim’/

with long neck Efe looks annoying, unwanted meal/ even his bro, Ochuko, looked on as i broke his ribs on threadmill!!!/

You said you were goin in, no vet could see you coming / with our zoom lenses, only saw an hindu crawling/

This aint JOSHUA base, why will your T B fans expect you cripple running?/ you so epileptic, thatz why they exempted you from mikuz tourney !!!/

Not on this earth will an amateur own vet /you underaged mc, failed matured bone test /Gay even catwalks...grow breast/in search of greener pastures in Delta you dumbazz captured rodents!!!/

My domain rocks/ your own lane sucks/the only time you appear dope is when i write ur name with cocaine...chalks!!!/

Take fight from ma home to their zone/what i throw...are drones/take over coasts and thrones/shattered dj’s hope...in blaq bonez/ on ‘hope bay’’
burn efe’s soul and bonez!!!/ <Mount hope bay>

Dj5naira's Verse



[b]Phock the enviness and his war talks here/ behind the scene when his pops not there/
um what he worships & adores . . . im Shu, the god of air/

The fact he ne'er won that tournaments' so cool with me/ he'll get the message so soon quickly/if ''fate'' and ''nature'' both rudely speaks/
observe e'ery letter in ''N.B.T contest'' . . . . no A.I.R.M.A.R.K, worst of all, no U innit!!!!!!/

so the truth is, there was no official winner u just hopin' really/ im not smilin' with the mopin' gimmick/
i'll ask my hungry neighbour to suck his breastful chest . . . . when next he opens his 'teeth!'/

Nothin' new bout the stammerer, its tha same poorly diction/ I bind outta him, the spirit of stutterin' in tha name of his Jesus/
You lack the ''Elements of Speech'' b.itch . . . like the ''name of that article'' which you bit from in that same competition!/

Was astounded, prolly dumbstruck/ ''Babatunde'' would bear me witness how fear swallowed him, when D branded just Revolver/
'fore I even point @ the ''mod 9'' . . . he had already started perspirin' tears, excretin' saliva, after his 'heart' musta 'left its position' and landed on his stomach!/

The hater spits dry plus jargons/ we know his 'truth says' are still farce cum random/
shouldnt pop outta the Blues and lie 'bout Arsenals ...'cos if its Tech~NO'thin like that, ransack his room, I'll stake my P5 on that one/

Held on firmly/ never left off pennies/
his cry was heard far off Jerusalem the way my guards bent 'air rod' . . . till the Roman client king of Judea begged for mercy/

Always spray the atmosphere with my thick perf/ Matthew, John took flight, couldnt stand the way that geek smells/
Mark bodily odour isnt something to Luke out for . . . . any where I go, Ah~reek Air/

im lyrical spitzophreniac, better off at diss/ he suffers schizophrenia, mental thoughts lacking/
You've never been original mark . . . . even ya identity is siphoned from an Indonesia air transport service/

Bet his niece ghostwrote THAT with his bros/ just to prove long ago, I already killed this corpse/
this is not a 'battle verse' . . . but an 'oath written' splashed on your screen with his blood/[/b]

Erm . . . Airmark its actually nlking@hushmail.com please.

I have Airmack's verse. Dj send yours as soon as you're done.

tr3y: Ibime kil'd the rest!!! #justsaying.

Which rest? What are you smoking?

Lol . . Is Mik better than Prekky and Ema this year?

I mean what I said. FFR is like an academy.

Ibi oya drop another free.

Ffr don become academy o. Waiting to see what next year's products will look like.

Ema Prince I rate battles high. Not having at least one battle thread to his name was his biggest undoing. This battles zone and not a freestlyle arena. As for Da Phantom, its obvious.

@Krizz
Why is Joshua not on ya list?

airmark: Thanks pls can we make it 32 lines?

Nah. Lets leave it at 20 so judges won't shy away.

Done!

https://www.nairaland.com/1565138/brutal-combat-dj5naira-vs-airmark

Voting Criteria :

Opener
Rhymes
Similes/ Metaphor
Punchlines
Personals
Flow
Wordplay
Closer

Rules

- 20 lines.

- Deadline is 9pm.

- Verses should be sent to nlking@gmail.com

- No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or recycling.

- A no show attracts a ban.

- No unnecessary comments

Goodluck!!!

Ok Ill pop the thread right away. Send ya verses to me as soon as you guys are done.

True that, but he wasn't involved in any fight this year. This is rap battles section.

Here's is the list of the top 5 new netcees who took Nairaland by surprise this year.

Here we go . . . In ascending order:


5. Deli Dimes

4. Rhyme Lunatic

3. Da Phantom

2. Glacierz

1. Joshua Base

As the year grinds to an end, we've successfully compiled the list of the best ten most - who kept this place shaking.

Here we go :

10. Rhyme Lunatic

9. Khimwhyte

8. Glacierz

7. Joshua Base

6. Mikuz

5. Blaqbonez

4. ThunderStorm

3. Ema Prince

2. ThePrekky

1. Ibime