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Mondisweets:
Happy birthday ochon. Have a blessed one

softsparkyy:
Haaaaa which kind half kiss be this, why not give me full lips Ochon.

UjSizzle:
Happy birthday honey. Wish you long life and happiness

softsparkyy:
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Happy birthday my darling.
Cdamsel the event planner, how much did he pay you?

obayaya:
Ochon Agbalagba

nwoke ike

Happy Birthday bro

Long life and prosperity

Jbluv55:
Happy Birthday Ochon. I wish you long life and prosperity in good health and I pray God will grant all your heart's desires. Amen.

Cdamsel, how come you October babies dey try intimidate us?

cdamsel:
I get to see his kondo and touch it

MizMyColi:

Happy Birthday Ochon.

cdamsel:
Don't just mind all this pikins them way won scatter this fine thread I open for you, na them dey complain say I no dey open thread o,i open thread now na wahala

Dolcilicious:
Happy bufday,wullnp..amen

cdamsel:
Happy birthday dimkpa Ochon.

Wishing you long life and prosperity,may you grow in wisdom and understanding don't forget to say a prayer for yourself today.
God has really been faithful.

I just love my co-libra's don't know why , If I hear say I no plan my children's birth to fall in October

Forwetinnah:
Big Brother wasting his time to bring in a music mentor when JJ a 23year old man with 30years music experience who started acting singing and writing long before he was even conceived is right there in the house. Haba mana. .Bigs you no try at all o.

kr0ne:
Ochon

Your bars ain't REALLY THAT NICE/ coz I've seen SIMILAR LINES/ from whack rappers with SIMILAR MINDS/
I'm SPILLING YA SPINES/ cuz you'd have to spit with throat cancer for ya shiit to sound ILLER THAN MINE!

^ ^ ^ That was a bar made of 5 lines with 4-syllabic rhyme scheme (the ones in caps). Always note that ur punch must come last, while the rest are referred to as build-ups. Unless wanna make it complex like Coogar and the rest. . so u can start with a punch and u MUST end it with a punch.
See what I mean by 4 syllables. .taking the last line: ill-er-than-mine.

cdamsel:
A choro m' li Ofe onugbo,a cho mu Ofe egusi mo bu Ofe akukwo ni ya na ezigbo nni ji

Testerfuze:
Ochon you stretch Lines alot which is NT really a gud thing and then ur rhymes are also what you should pay Proper attentions to....do this and lets begin 4rm there
Meanwhile mvgt:olubukato

softsparkyy:
Don't worry I believe you will bounce back with time.

cdamsel:
chei,definitely opening a thread for you
Gini ki g' esi anyi bu umu nwanne gi?

Tiyazman:
Yeah bro. But you don't have to go mute already. I'd advise you to start scripting and dropping FFR. Just loose yourself and rhyme words together, Multi-syllabically.

You have got skills, you just need someone or something to spark it up! Diss a vet and see, I did mine with Dj5naira, and see?

Keep scripting bro! Don't give up!!

softsparkyy:
Console a brother naaa. Ochon you really tried.

obayaya:
Dede!!! Ochu nwanyi nke mbu na Awkuzu...

Daalu.. Chukwu gozie gi

cdamsel:
ndi libra otu mu
Kedu mgbe a mu gi?

cdamsel:
ok forgive my ignorance on rap battles, I am clueless
Well noted now,kinda felt bad for the yung man

cdamsel:
sorry to quote the whole post but Please ochon is this Rap or a yabbing contest

thandii1:
she said she can make the 300k grand prize if she dates\sleeps with 4ministers in naija. I for one just chuckled and didn't take her serious. I don't know why lilian doesn't get spared on that twitter though. She wasn't the only one talking shyte out of the 4 noisemakers last night. But her own statements get screened and blown out of proportion.

Akshow:
So ata wewe don marry before. Oga gan ni o. Tayo gal get belle. Alusa get three pikin, trezeget is married. Frankie too, e don marry, butterfly get two children, samantha was once married with two kids. I'm sure ma bea sef go don born pikin. Young single peeps don finish to use ni abi na wetin?

Tiyazman:
Ochon, I'm not dissing you o, you know me na, I was only playing around. Please y'all should loosen up and let's have fun. Cheers!

tunbebes:
ha! This is not the Ochon I use to know o. Chai! Ochon biko ignore some peepz o. Pls,don't let anyone piss u off my friend. We had a great time last year.

kr0ne:
Absurd! If dem no teach u, u for learn?

Ochon, u have the potentials!! U would be brawling the likes of Coogar and Bis once u fully understand the rules. I was really impressed with that 8 - 2 wordplay, it wasn't forced at all! And u had some personals too
First thing I'll tell u is to work on rhymes. U were doing mostly one-syllabic rhyme. For instance, "for skirt" doesn't rhyme with "bucket". Skirt would rhyme with 'first, thirst, bird, church, nerd, etc. While bucket would work with "locket, socket, pocket" . . .
Second is ur flow. I understand ur very good with words, but before u deliver a punch ur build-up should harmonise with it. Don't stretch the lines too much! When the next rhyme after the last comes late it becomes a stretch, and it kills ur flow too. Just try using 4 lines for each bar, and let each line have at least 3-syllabic rhyme

olubukato:
If to sey na kr0ne write for me, u go don die even before i drop the verse..
You can do it if you want to.. you be good writer na..

Tiyazman:
Hey bro, no hard feelings, but I don't have time to start pointing out mistakes, I'm in the lab now.

But if you wanna learn, ELYMAXiimus, show him that your thread real quick!

olubukato:
Na me be yerima.. ur left yansh dia..

Welcome to rap section, I know u can do this if u really want to..