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[color=olive]Javaprince,

It was first come, first serve[/color]

[color=olive]Javaprince[/color]

@crude -- the winds blown, your yash as shown

crude dude/ your just another hoe on naira land,
never breakin ground, yet u claim to be on D 12's band,
[color=olive]Lies spoil bars. . And this aint an opener. . juss a filler[/color]

with lines so bland i don't think u'll make it to jand?
u'll never cross that kine, because your a shame to my home land.
[color=olive]Didnt' feel nothin[/color]

your so fruitless, even when u work on fertile sand,
u bring no milk, even if your fixed with breast glands,
[color=olive]Nice punches, they just need re-wordin[/color]

am not your average type, UR A HYPE, so don't xpect me to shake hands,
i don't make friends just foes thatz why am satan's Dad.
[color=olive]Baby punches[/color]

same nigga askin 4 collabo,
crazy nigga thinkin am Donell Jones,
[color=olive]Filler[/color]

forgettin am d custom of rap, u don't even make d borders,
i fly first class/ while u still suckin on your momma's chest,
[color=olive]Duh![/color]

pest coackroach, baygon(be gone) before u get Raid.
[color=olive]Shit![/color]

even if u take a rap test with dumb(p)s/ u won't still pass son,
on your wedding album/ u still not be in d picture ,
[color=olive]Re-word[/color]

am the judge of this case/ your just a witness on the stands,
like an iroko tree, roots so deep, i don't shake on my stance,
[color=olive]Filler[/color]

quit rapping and maybe go in to dance,
maybe then u just might appear on TV by chance,
[color=olive]Re-word[/color]

in one of them kola olawuyi series, lookin like a farse.
[color=olive]Nada[/color]

[color=olive]J- UNIT[/color]

your lucky im not your kid
dam right god forbid
[color=olive]Nah![/color]

ok kid ill tell u now
Just leave your computer and
walk away from your seat
because my rhymes are to complicated
they'll make your brain over heat
make your brain get easily snapped
eaisy hacked
passwords easily cracked
my location never tracked in s.a but
my lyrics continue to make u feel attacked
can’t even sleep
because your brain is being lyrically slapped all over the place
to be honest that is the end of the case
because its hands down who one this lyrical race
its me and I easily
stormed 1st place

[color=olive]I can't be bothered to decipher the strucutre cuz it's messed as hell. . Elementary diss. . 1/30[/color]

[color=olive][b]Nosa 101, before I read your verse - it's easy to tel that ur structure ain't right and you're using elementary rhymes. . I'll give u a link later.[/color]

I’m in the building tonight
Oh what a feeling, I’m feeling nice
[color=olive]Filler[/color]

You aint even gotta bring your boyfriend out
We could turn the lights off and play “who’s in your mouth?”
[color=olive]Re-word! It's a good bars but needs words[/color]

Spit game, I’m filthy
Need shower? Bruh I’m grimey
[color=olive]Duh![/color]

Slimey?
Flubber like, I’m ashy
crack elbows,dry skin see me
[color=olive]Nah![/color]

Need mana? Eat rappers
No silverware, lack manners
[color=olive]??[/color]

2 girls 1 cup sick
dirty like Kirk Hirnrich
[color=olive]Boy. . you're dullin this thing[/color]

Plague sick, yersinia pestis
lyrical assault charge?
don't press this
Like Kim Jong-iL, not humane
in your girl's face, guess who came?
I'm retarded bruh, staright insane
Rap detox, y'all cranked that cocaine
yea boyyeee!!!
I'm building tonight
Ooh, I'm flav feeling nice
love rap like chinaman love rice
[color=olive]In all nice vocab, but pretty elementary[/color]

___________Alexpissu_________________
Forbiden sins am clenching fist to weaken this midget
He his back to his usuals spitting flawless like pregnant Bridget
[color=olive]Nice multis, and nice opoener[/color]

I hear his silent screams cause he be soaked in his dream
This newbie aint getting d picture like smoked screen
[color=olive]I felt that punch - lexy, get ur butt to the TTT. . nice metas too [/color]

Am ever current like electricity am sending shocks 2 his feets
This gay on Rap section trying to turn pro raping cripples in streets
[color=olive]Nice flow[/color]

You voicing da rock-band chorus won't entitle a record deal
I got lotta cats wanting to murder u have to tell them 2 chill
[color=olive]Send em baq to the papaz[/color]

Son i drop science like a kid who was born in the Lab
You aint worth my bar i'mma get u evicted with my shift Tab
[color=olive]Nice punches [/color]

Wave your shadow goodbye cause am operating your brains wit slug
Ask Nairaland am more dreaded than a Jamaican thug
[color=olive]Nice punches, again[/color]

My words are too vivid for this punk 2 capture
This rap is my creation I'mma have him ready 4 rapture
[color=olive]Didn't really feel the closer but the verse was cool in totality - 8/10[/color]


Against this. . . . . . . . .


______________Crude_________________________
Dawg u're making me feel like a heavy weight champion
But a cat and his back-ups can never murder this Lion
[color=olive]Filler bar. . nothing special[/color]

I'm a newbie, soaked in my dream to put u off d throne
You don't belong there, u gotta get your ass on the phone
[color=olive]Nada![/color]

And call em, kingmakers tell 'em the rightful king is in the zone
Go ask 'em in Jamaica, i kill 'em thugs for game
[color=olive]You don't kill no jamaicans, lying makes your bars weak[/color]

your ma let u out, but she dint say, "Cross crude's lane"
your fist is hard, for my 2yrs old baby not to feel the pain
[color=olive]the Punch was in the last line but you need to restructure it[/color]

From your punch, now u Sucker aint that a dissappointment?
D only bar i see u got is located in the local pub
[color=olive]Needs some re-wording[/color]

I'm cleanin up my kits ready to slash your filthy ass up
Watcha got to say, Hey u got to say it quick Dawg
[color=olive]Shit line[/color]

I'm tired of watchin u dumbin n mumblin out faint words
Ok, i'ma close my eyes i'm not lookin, 1, 2, go, burst
[color=olive]You tried with multis but they were forced. . tryin makin them flow properly, G[/color]

My flow is petrifying and scary enough to seal up your lips
This guy's libido's high, he come when Shakira shakes her hips
[color=olive]Re-word![/color]

He's not a rapper, he's a bugger tryin to feel among the streets
I can step on u bare-footed, attack u without my fleet
[color=olive]Just a filler[/color]

your homies'll dedicate a track for u titled, "Crude aint good"
Sorry, it aint my fault, in my hood it aint good to be good
[color=olive]Nice closer . . I'd say a 5.5/10[/color]

[color=olive]Sorry I aint given feed on ya stuff. . I'ma do it now that I'm less busy


Crude:[/color]


Yo! I've seen wars that chokes and ones that killed dreams
Ones that murders ambition like it's some war films

[color=olive]Cool[/color]

And now d war is over maybe it's taking a break, Dude
Go get yourself spruced up put on your stepping shoes

[color=olive]Hmmn. . okay[/color]

It's gon be party party party, if u're down for d groove
If u can't move, i'll suggest u tap your foot

[color=olive]Normal, nothing 'WOW'[/color]

Party poopers are not welcomed, No! It's out of bound
Get crazy when u hear em beat, and rap sound

[color=olive]Awful, i'm being honest, G [/color]

It's getting hot right on here, d.j's puttin it on d ground
You can bounce all u want, u can step all u want

[color=olive]'Ground' and 'Want' don't rhyme - this is just like a freestyle verse, it ain't got no elements of rap[/color]

You can move & groove all u want, but don't carry no guns
Under this roof u may find 'em LI0NS 'n' em pest

[color=olive]Still no rhymes and no elements[/color]

No bulshittin, no killin and no bloodshed
I'm flaggin d white banner, i got peace on my chest

[color=olive]Normal filler [/color]

Drop d hatchets, drop your mallets for your best interest
I've been a soulja all my life now i'm taking a short rest
[color=olive]Not a good closer at all, step up brah[/color]

[color=olive]@Rhaps,

Thanks[/color]

[color=olive]@Flow, drop it, iite? There's time to be serious. . lol

@Pheesayor,
Erm. . On leave? Yeah. Permanent? ERm. . Idk.

Lol. . If y'all want it, it'll be baq. Probably as a real station. .whichever ways[/color]

[color=olive]Thatz cool. Rhaps. . much props.[/color]

[color=olive] Just another verse

[center]

The guy's life is like a desert, there's not a soul to be found
Nothing's grown in there for a while, there's an echo but no sound
On the outside, ma lil' guy is broken like old OK plastics
The mind is working on the next tactic, planning to get his heart back from the attic
And while he's at it, flashbacks hit the times he tot were fantastic
But now his life is static, a pain in the flesh like government taxes
Put the memories behind him cuz he says he's way past it
Life ain't bout the dough you make, but the number of practice
That keeps you way above the waters like Jesus walked
The effort you put to something can't leave, a good name cannot be socks(spoilt)
So this guy woke up from the trance that he was in
Gotta get the life goin and get it goin in the morning[/color][/center]

[color=olive]HEY, hey. . Those lines ain't shit, maka. . I didn't feel nothin. . Thatz got me thinkin, tis lyk battlin on ere is different from other worlds cuz if you spat those lines on say IL or RR or anywhere else, u'd be kicked to the side. . Buckle up, u ain't on the Richter scale[/color]

[color=olive]HEY, hey. . Those lines ain't shit, maka. . I didn't feel nothin. . Thatz got me thinkin, tis lyk battlin on ere is different from other worlds cuz if you spat those lines on say IL or RR or anywhere else, u'd be kicked to the side. . Buckle up, u ain't on the Richter scale[/color]

[color=olive]Lol. . Cool. It'z tourny madniz now[/color]

[color=olive]I don't know why I always key long-assed isht but here it goes

[center]The Road Thatz Narrow

I'm just trying key the pieces to the puzzle like a nut to the bolt
Like the thunderbolt, you 'can't climb' even if you were a ladder because you hit the wrong note
Fixing my eyez ahead like a groom at the altar expectin the bride
The bride is coming late, the groom's still smilin' tho he got a different thing on the mind
The whole congregation's waitin', some are at the reception already
The Road is Narrow, Steep and Sharp like an Arrow but I still gotz go steady
Holding on to the creeks as I creep around the steep edges of the motorway
It's like walkin in the rain, you lose your steps and slide back all the way, there's more to tha pain
You finally get back but there's too many people trying to squeeze past
The air is tough, the breathing is rough, the brain can't register when to and when not to breathe fast
You're being stared at like you're naked or you're clothed and everyone else is naked
It's like a fat cow at the abbatoirs, all eyes on you, you're next to death, your endtime is stated
Well, that's how it feels when you're climbing that road to success - no one's supportin'
That's how it is when you're following your doctrine - everyone's not supportin'
Thatz The Road Thatz Narrow
[/center][/color]

[color=olive]@J Unit

Whack?? Then drop your verse. No hatin here, remember?

[/color]

[color=olive]What it do, y'all? Just checkin' in[/color]

[color=olive]Bless this thread. . Lol. .

Incase y'all've been wonderin where tha Shaz has gone, i ain't gone nowhere. . Just takin it EZ as the 'phet has said. . Lol. . Okay, seriously, i'm just a lil occupied with stuff. . I'm on nairaland every 6 - 8 hours . . I just don't post cuz i'm busy moddin. . Will be back soon[/color]

[color=olive]If I don't make it as a rapper, I'll most def still make it
makin myself the fortune already. . I don't need no stages
steady on the sore like lozenges. . Now i've run out of words
i keep my charm enclosed like capsules cuz i'm worn out on wrongs[/color]

[color=olive]@ abdu, Welcome on here. . Read the rules thread on how to vote. .

@tcube,
get started. . Call out anyone (you'd have to create a separate thread for the thing tho) [/color]

[color=olive]@Tcube,

Thanks a lot. That's a valid point. . It's been noted to be discussed with the admin. [/color]

[color=olive]So this topic still dey? Even after Sharn06 turned Shaz . . I wish people stop wasting valuable time in startin useless threads[/color]

[color=olive]@Lazybones, lol. . Of course, after makin a stupid thread like this, he'd just have to run[/color]

[color=olive]NO!! You got my post all wrong. . I was only negating Davidif's points, read again . . I'm for Rap - the HRLH on Nairaland - we battled all the Star Warriors and succeeded. . lol. . . Rap is just a genre of music - The best , by the way[/color]

[quote="Davidif"]Can someone tell me this, why are rappers always rapping about ho's, bitches, niggas? then this are the same people who cry foul when oyinbo man go call them niggas. Truth of the matter is that hip-hop is a very bad influence to young African-American men, in fact, black men in general. The genre degrades women (as seen in the Nelly video where he swiped a credit card through a woman's butt crack) Angry Even in naija, people have started calling themselves the N-word or sagging there pants or[b] stealing from there parents (including school fees)[/b] or robbing people (including "obtaining" juniors in sec. school) to buy jewelry's, jerseys, rocawear's, sean john's or snickers. In the 90's a lot Naija girls were getting their fashion sense from the rap or R&B videos and dressing like people of ill repute (don't let me say what was on my mind ). The most annoying part of it is when my siblings or my friends back home tell me to buy them baggy jeans or jordan snickers which usually cost over $200!!!!! (snickers ko, sandals ni). In urban america, its worse because a lot of families there are in shambles (75% of African-Americans are born out of wedlock), the kids learn a lot of corrupting influences from rap music, they don't want to go to school any longer because when they watch Fiddy, Ludacris or Weezy in the videos glorifying the gangsta lifestyle rapping about ho's and pimps (the worst creatures on earth), they too want to be like that because there is no glory in staying up all night typing a project.
[/quote][color=olive]Holla to all ma Rapheadz keepin it real. . If they don't like it and cannot stop listenin to it, make they go hang themselves. . O-K, to make some few points clear, I'll have to start with what DAVIDIF has said.

1. The most annoying part of it is when my siblings or my friends back home tell me to buy them baggy jeans or jordan snickers which usually cost over $200!!!!! (snickers ko, sandals ni).

Just because your friends and siblings think you live in the North pole and have wide mouth (elenu fife) does not mean that Rap has to be banished. . if they asked for one Aso-oke or French lace material that they saw in one Asa video, I'm sure you'd be up against Nigerian songs too.

2. Can someone tell me this, why are rappers always rapping about ho's, bitches, niggas?

Yes! I can tell you. It's because that's what they are used to. You too can rap about the numbers of 'guguru and epa's that you have bought in your life time, or about how tough your teachers were in school, or even about how your father used to chase you with kpankere for playing football when you were meant to be 'reading your book'. . It's freedom of speech about how you think. . You cannot change the way NY rappers think, neither can they change the way you think about their rap.

3. stealing from there parents (including school fees)

Come, I was not bothered to check your gender but can I ask one personal question - is this a personal experience like the 'baggy jeans' one. . because i think it hurts you a lot. . By the way, bad pikin don dey before MC Hammer started scratching. . Cain killed Abel, was it RAP that influenced him? David murdered a man and slept with his wife. . na RAP do that one too? Jonah refused to work according to instructions because he wanted to chill. . him dey carry RAP jamm for his 'MP3'? What of the unruly sons of Eli the Prophet, they were rapstars abi? Please get realistic. If you know anyone who stole, rehab / juvenile centre dey there. . don't blame RAP for what it didn't do.

4. African-Americans are born out of wedlock

I never knew it was just African-Americans. . what of the Britishers, What of the Caribbeans? . . Is it only in NY this happens? What of those that don't listen to rap? What of the goths? What of Mel B - the R'N'B singer who got pregnant out of wedlock? what of . . . . don't make me have to start the endless list . . because as far back as hundreds of years ago, there has always been bastards, Rap did not invent that neither.

5. no glory in staying up all night typing a project.

Maybe we've finally come to the bone of contention - project. . So because you have been/are/ will be forced by education to do your project, others must not rest? You've forgotten that each person to his own. . RAP has not told anybody not to do project oh. . face your work and leave RAP alone. [/color]

[color=olive]Sorry, the poll has been locked til the verses have been dropped to avoid d*ck ridin votes . . And it was made clear in the rules thread that voting categories should be stated before battlin. . Plus if your opponent was not aware of the battle, do not start the battle thread. . Please make relative adjustments. . Thanks 8-) [/color]

[color=olive]Welcome baq, Smith. .

@Lzbones,
I could almost say the same to you. . Lol. . Wait, you ever noticed that durin shout outs we're usually called together? . . Lol. . Just observant [/color]

[color=olive]Welcome baq, Smith. .

@Lzbones,
I could almost say the same to you. . Lol. . Wait, you ever noticed that durin shout outs we're usually called together? . . Lol. . Just observant [/color]

[color=olive]Okey dokey, let the votes start to roll in. . All voters must explain their votes in full using appropriate categories . . [/color]

[color=olive]Well well well, what have we here? Welcome baq Bolaji - u shoulda announced ya presence in the Rapheadz check-in thread. . just please let the serene atmosphere remain undisturbed. . u know what I mean. . Thanks in anticipation[/color]

[color=olive]Why don't y'all make this battle a conclusive one - just two/three rounds so we all can vote? [/color]

[color=olive]Hey OLDSYNC, nice to have you baq on here. Stay ACTIVE, plz . . we former peepz need to bless this place and make it gracious like earlier this year.

@Brid,
Thanks 4 the kissy . . I'm really gettin appreciated, lol[/color]

[color=olive]Hey Rhaps, tx for the mention

Chas'l, you're noticed, ok? U HAVE BEEN NOTICED! seems everyone is ''immatured'' to ya. G'luck [/color]

[color=olive]Brid, cool down. . you can't rush perfection. . lol. Okay, on a serious note, read the beginning of the thread. . I said it was just a roll call, iite? It's just for assessment/records procedures. F.I. ya tourney, if you need everyone to participate, you can make ya list from here. . . . Y'dig??

Bout the thread thing, which one haven't I completed?? And you told me to B EZ with thread makin' and I ain't done nah-un since. . now, U B EZ![/color]