ChriGo: ...okay...

dulux07: 
i got denied student visit..reasons r
Travel history
Personal assets n financial status
Purpose of visit
Length of proposed stay
Current employment situation..


i wana reapply,sum1 shud pls help Me out

Jijola: Since you claim you're working, why didn't you include documents proving that such as promotion letter, pay slips, tax clearance, account etc? This is more important where U sponsor yourself, but it's also important where U claim to be working.A work I'd and Employment letter aren't sufficient to show that.Since you're working, they expect you to have a substantial amount in your account. Moreover, was there a study-leave letter?
On your proposed employer, did you show proof that it's a genuine venture e.g. C of I, Tax clearance and so on? Is the proposed letter of employment or invitation to treat detailed enough.
Then, why did you state that your sister would house you? That sounds like you're absconding more than that you're going to study. Even if you have to mention that, you must give very strong reasons such as special health conditions or needs, which may need proof.
It may not be sufficient to show that your parent's have properties.Properties can prove both finance and home tie.Just showing they have them proves their financial capacity, but not home tie for you. As a woman who may get married or already married, why would your parents' properties make you come back to Nigeria?
How well did you articulate issues in your Letter of Intent?
Keep in mind it's always better to 'overprove' than 'underprove'! Brighter minds will add to these.

Jijola: Since you claim you're working, why didn't you include documents proving that such as promotion letter, pay slips, tax clearance, account etc? This is more important where U sponsor yourself, but it's also important where U claim to be working.A work I'd and Employment letter aren't sufficient to show that.Since you're working, they expect you to have a substantial amount in your account. Moreover, was there a study-leave letter? Without it,then it means you're absconding from work.
On your proposed employer, did you show proof that it's a genuine venture e.g. C of I, Tax clearance and so on? Is the proposed letter of employment or invitation to treat detailed enough.
Then, why did you state that your sister would house you? That sounds like you're absconding more than that you're going to study. Even if you have to mention that, you must give very strong reasons such as special health conditions or needs, which may need proof.
It may not be sufficient to show that your parent's have properties.Properties can prove both finance and home tie.Just showing they have them proves their financial capacity, but not home tie for you. As a woman who may get married or already married, why would your parents' properties make you come back to Nigeria?
How well did you articulate issues in your Letter of Intent?
Keep in mind it's always better to 'overprove' than 'underprove'! Brighter minds will add to these.

ChriGo: ....going for another Bsc?....not a good move.....why not Post graduate diploma or masters?....

ChriGo: .....Letter from your sister in Canada?.....Not a good move....is ur sister a permanent resident holder or a citizen?.....how good is ur letter of intent?.....you can't emphasize in ur letter of intent that you'll be coming back after studies while your sister is chopping life here in canny ....you think say VO go believe say you go come back?.......

Cufs:

Thanks, I think I see where the mistakes are from. I don't have much experience with this, and I expected the Agent I used to advice me properly.

If I get you right, ur saying in my next application I should include:

My payslips and tax clearance
My own bank statement and property doc?
I didn't have a study leave letter, so ill include that too
I should not include my sis as a sponsor for accommodation.

I included c of I of my prospect employer sha.

I'm also thinking my letter of intend was not good enough too, maybe I should put it here for u guys to vett.

Cufs:

Thanks, I think I see where the mistakes are from. I don't have much experience with this, and I expected the Agent I used to advice me properly.

If I get you right, ur saying in my next application I should include:

My payslips and tax clearance
My own bank statement and property doc?
I didn't have a study leave letter, so ill include that too
I should not include my sis as a sponsor for accommodation.

I included c of I of my prospect employer sha.

I'm also thinking my letter of intend was not good enough too, maybe I should put it here for u guys to vett.

dulux07: 
i got denied student visit..reasons r
Travel history
Personal assets n financial status
Purpose of visit
Length of proposed stay
Current employment situation..


i wana reapply,sum1 shud pls help Me out

dulux07: 
i got denied student visit..reasons r
Travel history
Personal assets n financial status
Purpose of visit
Length of proposed stay
Current employment situation..


i wana reapply,sum1 shud pls help Me out

Slimdel: Is your sponsor related to you? The documents he or she gave u, how complete were they?

Jijola: Since you claim you're working, why didn't you include documents proving that such as promotion letter, pay slips, tax clearance, account etc? This is more important where U sponsor yourself, but it's also important where U claim to be working.A work I'd and Employment letter aren't sufficient to show that.Since you're working, they expect you to have a substantial amount in your account. Moreover, was there a study-leave letter? Without it,then it means you're absconding from work.
On your proposed employer, did you show proof that it's a genuine venture e.g. C of I, Tax clearance and so on? Is the proposed letter of employment or invitation to treat detailed enough.
Then, why did you state that your sister would house you? That sounds like you're absconding more than that you're going to study. Even if you have to mention that, you must give very strong reasons such as special health conditions or needs, which may need proof.
It may not be sufficient to show that your parent's have properties.Properties can prove both finance and home tie.Just showing they have them proves their financial capacity, but not home tie for you. As a woman who may get married or already married, why would your parents' properties make you come back to Nigeria?
How well did you articulate issues in your Letter of Intent?
Keep in mind it's always better to 'overprove' than 'underprove'! Brighter minds will add to these.

buchi4med:
Chrigo send me your no through my email , I got to talk to you. Get set to welcoming me.

Cufs:

Yea, my sponsor is related to me. The documents were okay, but I guess my personal documents were not enough.

Slimdel: Sorry about this, please list the documents you submitted

Slimdel: @justwise Thanks a lot

justwise: @All

Please avoid quoting dulux07's post, spambot tagged it as spam and those that quoted that post were banned.

Uptosomething: @Slimdel n co, una don port go Canada?

Cufs:

Lol...I just realized it was a silly move. One of my greatest mistakes.

justwise: @All

Please avoid quoting dffdffdf post, spambot tagged it as spam and those that quoted that post were banned.

Slimdel: No soon, trying to arrange myself properly bfr leaving so I can land fully prepared cause I don't want them to be upto something with my study/work permit oooo , how have you been?

Cufs:

Here is my letter of intent

Dear Sir/Madam,

My admission application has been approved and now I wish to apply for a study permit. The offer letter from the institute is attached.

Introduction:

Management has become one of the most fundamental aspects of human life and existence. From my perspective, it has had more influence on the world more than any other discipline. I am also of the belief that management is very important and its overall good condition is necessary for every society to flourish and prosper. My passion for management is predicated upon my zeal for the challenges it offers in abundance. For some people, being a manager is just a substance of money, but for me, it is a matter of passion, desire and drive to understand how an organisation works, learn about leadership roles and launch inventive business strategies.The areas of management that interest me most are operations of business, management of resources, supply chain management, accounting and finance.The way business is controlled and organized motivates me to learn more and more about it.

Purpose:
I had my first degree in Accounting from ************ University of Nigeria from where I bagged a Bachelor of Science (“B.Sc”) Accounting. I worked in *******l as the Assistant Bursar between January 2011- March 2012, as a Marketer in ***** **between July 2012 - November 2013 and I'm currently working in ******** as a sales representative from January 2014 till date.

Even though I currently work in ********* as a permanent staff, I moved to Uyo, Akwa Ibom State in January 2014 also to take on a part time position at ********, which is a prestigious institution, owned by my family in my home country, Nigeria and I currently help in running the Accounts and Logistics Department.

As an organisation with very high standards, the Board of Directors have considered it worthwhile to send me on a training program which is to prepare me to take on the full time role of Senior Manager, Accounts and Logistics. A second degree in General Business Management in Canada will deepen my knowledge in business management. This, in addition to my initial first degree in Accounting and my current work experience, will be the perfect combination of experience, knowledge and exposure needed for me to provide the great financial service and logistic management needed for my new role.

Hence I have decided go to University of Lethbridge in Calgary, Alberta to study. I am convinced that the kind of opportunities, challenges and satisfaction that studing in Canada offers is very reassuring, as it will provide me with the rare combination of accelerated growth and flexibility to get on the challenging career path for which I am being prepared for.

Please find attached, a notarized copy of the institution’s documents, property ownership, as well as an up to date copy of the current bank account statements of the org, as well as that of my father, who is the Chairman of the Board of Governors, *******showing sufficient funds.
Based on the information stated above, I would like to request that you to kindly grant me a student visa so I can achieve my set goals.

Please let me know if you require any additional information. I can be contacted at ************ or *********@gmail.com.

Thank you so much in advance for your kind consideration.

Yours Sincerely,

Uptosomething: Lollzzz;U grab my moniker,U try,A dey,I say make I work o

Slimdel: Nice one remain small dolls for us oooo

Jijola: Naaa. First, your introduction is too general. You should be introducing yourself and why you're going to Canada. A Letter of Intent must show peculiarities. Second, what you wrote in your statement of purpose has nothing to do with purpose...purpose means circustances that drive your interest in your proposed area of study.what are your academic and research interests. You layed too much emphasis on career, when you shoud be stressing academics and research. This is not a work permit application.Third, it's interesting that you said your dad's company wants to sponsor you. On what ground? Is that where you currently work? If not, they don't have a basis. If it is, then you should be using the company's accounts and documents as primary sponsorship proof. Your dad could come in as a co-sponsor.
Many other things are missing. Why did you choose Canada? Why did you choose the school? What do you hope to achieve with your proposed training?

ElCapt: @Cufs

Yello, please work on your supporting documents as advised.
Your SOP seems pretty much good to me.

Please, I'll advise you delete your SOP from your post. It's for your own good, to avoid the possibility of plagiarism.

Lord's Favour with your next application.

Cheers.