abeg mk una no vex.abi dy road,traveling tinz.i'm back to cont

Op 30 mins no nak fr you clock ne? Come finish yr job joo.

as she lean downed to check my temperature her bosoms pressed my chest.my anaconda quickly stood at attention.i gently grabbed her waist out of involuntary impulse.she tried to pull away but her drew her nearer.i kissed her,she kissed back.i attacked one of the giant mangoes.she forcefully pulled away.'what?.i asked.'later.let the doctor leave'. 'ok fine by me'

dis story is too childish + it doesn't make sense, go Nd read 4rm oda writers on NL and learn

I can't imagine some1 in hospital having 100k BTW he was just coming 4rm a fake Church

DVM_tuppence: dis story is too childish + it doesn't make sense, go Nd read 4rm oda writers on NL and learn

if u no lyk am go write ur own.there r more matured ways to criticize ma wrk.

DVM_tuppence: dis story is too childish + it doesn't make sense, go Nd read 4rm oda writers on NL and learn

Y are u still here then......u dis stupid ingrate.....y is it dat u pple don't appreciate pples effort....louis3 am here 4 u....Go ahead jooor

nice one OP. To all those English students, am sure OP isnt publishing it and so we can deal with the errors. Make una free am.

DVM_tuppence: dis story is too childish + it doesn't make sense, go Nd read 4rm oda writers on NL and learn

abeg nobody force u to read nah. Why u no fit keep ur opinion and vanish commot from the thread nah.

Enough of the derailing. Offer mature advice and critism to the writer not using insultive words. The next person i caught derailing will get a ban.

She later came back after the doctors had left.she was ready to collect and i was ready to give.i kissed her neck down to her bosoms.i started sucking her left mangoe.i licked the right like ice cream.i removed my bursars.she grabbed my erect anaconda and started sucking.i was in heaven.as i tried to insert my anaconda she held it mid-air.what? "what is this". She had a devilish smile in her face.the wind started blowing.her changed to white.complete white.o No.she squeezed my blockos hard i winced.she wanted to kill me.

hahahahahhahahahaha

emsheddy: nice one OP. To all those English students, am sure OP isnt publishing it and so we can deal with the errors. Make una free am.

u dy feel me.

Now the story is more like a fantasy.

lol

"Started from the botom now am here" , IYE IKAN In reminisce's Voice, i don settle d bouncer, I want a sit at d high table OP

I used to wish for the marine experience 4 quick wealth but with wat am reading here i don't need her again ooooo

and with a snap of the finger(kpam kpam).. .. .. .. she changed to Mami-wata. other patients took to their heels

I wanted to shout for help but some kind of force was suppresing me."leave my thing na". I begged. "you will die today". she said. "wetin i do you?". She squeezed harder.i tried to pry her hand but they where to strong. "you have offended my master". "how,who is your master i asked innocently."the womam you ran away from 2weeks ago". So she had finally come back.this mami-wata just mean me.

LoL this story get as e be sha .

louie3: u dy feel me.

bros i feel u pass harmattan cold ohhh...

Not captivating.

I dey enjoy dey story

Hahahahaha.., guy I dey feel dis ur story,., e jst b lyk straffing story in anoda form..,

Louie3 becos of this story I don join nairaland. Before na read and go I dey. Oya finish this story now or else.......

Nice Story

Continue oooo my guy. Love your story line

Guy u dey mad? I dey check Nairaland every 30minutes because of u. Come finish dis tin jare.