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The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 12:55am On Sep 16, 2014 |
Hi everyone,i salute you all.I am still very new here.I don't want to start mentioning names but i am welcoming you all to read this story of mine.I completed it a month ago and posted it on My facebook page.Now,i want to drop it here. The story is titled"THE MOST WANTED MAID" This is not my first thread on nairaland.My life,my entertainment is still uncompleted.Pls i beg you not to judge this new thread with the old one.I will get back to it as soon as i finish this. I hope you guys find the story interesting. Please i need your comments,corrections and criticisms.Thank you 4 Likes |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by tshegs19: 1:34am On Sep 16, 2014 |
*grabs 3D glasses* 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 9:15am On Sep 16, 2014 |
Welcome tshegs19. I'm dropping episode 1 right away.I regret ever posting it on my facebook page before.Most of facebook page fans are experts in copy and paste,but i am going to make a lot of changes in the story to make it even better,wider and longer for your entertainment. 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 9:20am On Sep 16, 2014 |
Source>http://stmuvi.xx.tn Do not copy *THE MOST WANTED MAID* Episode 1 Angela wiped the sweats off her face as she moped the floor of the kitchen. It was saturday, so she has decided to keep everywhere clean and tidy. She did the cleaning in a hurry and started preparing dinner. She didn't go to her boutique that very day. She just felt like resting at home. David, her dear husband would soon be returning from work.She wanted him to eat as soon as he returns and take some rest. She heaved as she ran about the kitchen. "I am tired. I'm just stressed up. I think i need a maid" She sighed, nodding to her thoughts. Angela was in her late twenties. She got married to David three years ago, but they are yet to have an issue. Angela and david had been friends right from their university days. They fell in love with each other and were always found together. After David's graduation, securing a job became a problem. Angela also tried all she could to help David get a job.She lied to her father on several ocassions inorder to estort money from him to help David's job seeking process. However,David later got a job in a very rich company. It happened that when Angela eventually graduated from the university,she found it very hard to get a job.Despite everything her father did.David was not left out in helping her seek for job but all to no avail. David,later convinced her to worry about nothing since he had the money to cater for them. After their wedding,David opened a cosmetic shop for her,according to her wish. David became more and more successful as if their marriage had a hand in it.They enjoyed a sweet and romantic union without troubles,but the only worry that was lurking in the corner was their inability to have a child yet. They had gone to different hospitals to find out the cause of the problem.However,all the doctors kept saying the same thing.That there's nothing wrong with any of them,While urging them to wait for God's time.This didn't bother David at all.He believed God's time is the best.He remembered a couple who spent up to 10yrs together before the wife concieved.Hence,the situation at hand didn't affect his undying love for her :::::****:::::: Angela heard a car hunk within the compound.she knew it was no other person than her beloved husband. "Helo honey.i'm hooooome"he soon emerged from the door.Angela came out from the room and kissed him welcome. "How was work today?"She asked as she collected the briefcase from him. "Good,my dear.Just that i am tired,weak and hungry"He replied. "Then,its not a problem.I will take care of that"Angela said as she took him by the hand and led him in. It was actually late in the night when Angela brought up the topic of bringing in a maid.David objected to this idea.He wondered why she would want to bring in a maid.Angela never did any laundry.The washing was always done by the dry cleaner.They were only living in a flat and not two storey.What could make her want to bring in a maid? He totally rejected the idea.Angela only cooked in the evenings when she gets back from her cosmetics shop.They normally take beverages with bread in the morning,though Angela sometimes prepare something different. Angela became sad and moody at her husbands disaproval. But little did she know she was asking for her downfall. 3 Likes 1 Share |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by jaymomma(f): 10:30am On Sep 16, 2014 |
Follow follow 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Aipete2(f): 3:26pm On Sep 16, 2014 |
Common sense is not common nw 2 Likes |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by PrinceAdepoju(m): 3:48pm On Sep 16, 2014 |
Okay. Continue. 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 6:18pm On Sep 16, 2014 |
I am dropping episode 2 by 8pm tonight.I thank you all for following |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 8:05pm On Sep 16, 2014 |
EPISODE 2 "Honey, do you think this idea of bringing in a maid is right?" David asked Angela who was already sad that her husband refused to grant her request. "Yes,i don't see anything wrong with that. let's just bring a maid. "What do we need a maid for?" David asked. He too was not happy. "So i can fully concentrate on my business. The new maid will be doing the cooking and keeping the home clean. please my dear" Angela pleaded. BecauseDavid never wanted to see her sad, he gave her the go ahead. Angela became happy again but she never knew she was calling for trouble. ::::****:::: "Angela my daughter. You are looking so beautiful" It was Mrs. Uwa, her mother. Angela smiled as she sat on the sofa. "Mum, everyone knows to well that i am not more beautiful than you are. I am only but your photocopy and Dad's carbon copy. So the both of you are the real beauty" She gesticulated. Her mother need no soothsayer to tell her that her beloved daughter was living in harmony with david, her husband. Angela had actually visited her parents inorder to tell them about her plan of getting a maid, so her mother could help her look for one. "My daughter.i don't support this" her mother cuts in. "Why mum?"Angela just couldnt see any reason why her mother should stand against this. "David your husband,i believe loves you so much and will do almost anything for you.If you are finding the house chores hard,discuss it with him and see if he will profer a better solution.The greatest mistake you will make in your marriage is giving another women the opportunity to take care of your husband for you....." "Mum but i am not bringing in a maid to take care of my husband for me"Angela interrupted her mother. "Your mother is right Angela.Bringingin a maid in your matrimonial home to do the cookings and wash your husbands clothes almost means the same thing as leaving your husband under her care"Her father spoke this time. Angela became confused.There may be sense in what her parents were saying but her instints told her that her husband can never prefer a maid over her.Not when their love for each other is still there. COULD ANGELA BE RIGHT? 3 Likes 1 Share |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 12:40pm On Sep 17, 2014 |
EPISODE 3 Angela was a lady that gets almost whatever she wanted without heeding to advice.Despite her parents advice to shun the idead of bringing in a maid,she paid deaf ears. "We are not trying to force you my dear.If you feel like getting a maid,if your husband approves of it,then go ahead.We only want what is best for you.You are our daughter.But my advice to you when you finally bring this maid is to watch her closely"Her father concluded. ::::****:::: "shine bright like a diamond" "shine bright like a diamond" That's Angela's mobile phone ringing.She looked at the screen.It was Ebere,her friend,calling. "Helo b.b"She answered the phone. "Angel,are you at home? I got the maid and she is right here with me"Ebere spoke from the other end. "Really? I just got back now.i'm home"Angela was excited. "We are coming over.Keep something for me o"Ebere cooed and hung up. Angela nodded.She was happy.Now,she can fully concentrate on her business like other women. The knock on the door an hour later,made Angela come out from the kitchen leaving the rice she was preparing.She knew it was Ebere and the most anticipated maid.When she opened the door,Ebere entered,leaving a beautiful young girl carrying a bag by the door for Angela to have a better view before she came in. "Good Evening ma"She greeted. Angela beheld her.She was indeed beautiful with her open teeth.Fair in complexion. Angela let her in with her bag. "What is your name?"She asked. "My name is sonia ma"She replied. "How old are you?" "I am 22 years ma"She replied again with a smile. Angela introduced herself and showed her a room to move in. THIS IS JUST THE BEGINNING 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Bevy12(f): 1:49pm On Sep 17, 2014 |
And she dey happy. Mumu girl. It's nice but a little repetive and add a little surprise now because right now, i already know what to expect. |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 1:51pm On Sep 17, 2014 |
Bevy12: And she dey happy. Mumu girl. It's nice but a little repetive and add a little surprise now because right now, i already know what to expect. Thanks ma.I will try my best |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Frankenstein: 2:08pm On Sep 17, 2014 |
I've arrived. So keep the updates coming or else..... |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 5:51pm On Sep 17, 2014 |
Frankenstein: I've arrived. So keep the updates coming or else..... My oga you are highly welcome |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by MuniratAbolanl(f): 8:15pm On Sep 17, 2014 |
9ce one 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Aipete2(f): 10:00pm On Sep 17, 2014 |
Omo to pupa toleji to ni barca to tun ni chelsea. Thats so nice na 2 Likes |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 10:14pm On Sep 17, 2014 |
Oh i dey vex.i blame mourinho for the draw.Its like a lost game to me. Guys pls i wil drop the next episode 2moro morning |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 10:16pm On Sep 17, 2014 |
Aipete2: Omo to pupa toleji to ni barca to tun ni chelsea. Thats so nice na pls can u translate it for me.i dont understand yoruba |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by tshegs19: 1:48am On Sep 18, 2014 |
Bevy12: And she dey happy. Mumu girl. It's nice but a little repetive and add a little surprise now because right now, i already know what to expect.you've watched too much afmag movies |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 9:10am On Sep 18, 2014 |
EPISODE 4 The arrival of Sonia gladdened Angela heart. She was delighted. Sonia on her own part played not only the role of a maid. She felt much comfortable around her madam; she just took Angela as her elder sister. Sonia took charge of the household chores. She took charge of preparing the meals. She even offered to wash the clothes instead of taking them to the dry cleaner. She was in desperate need for money to support her mother's failing health. She was able to finish her secondary school but couldn't go further to higher institutions because of lack of finance. So, since then, she has been looking for money through any possible means inorder to keep living and support her mother who was always sick. :::::..****.:::: David bumped into Sonia as he hurried out of his room with his briefcase. He was getting late for work.She fell down as his body brushed her. "Oh.i am sorry. get up, give me your hand" David reached for her hand to help get her up from the ground. "Good morning sir.I was actually coming to tell you that your breakfast is ready" She announced as she got up from the ground. "I don't think i can still have breakfast. I have to attend an important meeting this morning and i am running out of time. Where is your madam?" David was in a hurry. "She is still sleeping" Sonia replied. She had a way of talking that made her outstanding. Talking slowly and pronouncing every word to the end. David made to Angela's room to notice her of his early leaving because of an important meeting. As David drove,he thought within himself how Sonia handles the house duties as if she was actually a member of the family. She was in good terms with both husband and wife. Angela had been right about bringing her in,he thought. 2 Likes |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Aipete2(f): 9:22am On Sep 18, 2014 |
Calismart:She's light, as gap in btw her upper teeth and she get barca n chelsea n dats figure 8 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by D9ty7(m): 9:56am On Sep 18, 2014 |
You are doing a good job here but just like someone already pointed out, I can predict what will eventually happen. But you as a writer, am sure you can manouver your writing, maybe bringing in another character(another family) change the plot a little bit but the predicted end will still remain the end but let your readers experience a different plot maybe they'll forget about what they've already predicted. I believe you understand me, you are no novice in story writing. Just my thoughts tho! |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Bevy12(f): 10:42am On Sep 18, 2014 |
tshegs19: you've watched too much afmag moviesI don't watch nigerian movie not to talk of old ones. I watch korean or american. 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 12:32pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
I'm dropping the next episode tonight |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 12:40pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
D9ty7: You are doing a good job here but just like someone already pointed out, I can predict what will eventually happen. But you as a writer, am sure you can manouver your writing, maybe bringing in another character(another family) change the plot a little bit but the predicted end will still remain the end but let your readers experience a different plot maybe they'll forget about what they've already predicted. I believe you understand me, you are no novice in story writing. Thanks bro.i'm working on it |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by tshegs19: 4:31pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
Bevy12: I don't watch nigerian movie not to talk of old ones. I watch korean or american.Ooh. |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Bevy12(f): 4:32pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
tshegs19: Ooh.Yep |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 8:15pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
EPISODE 5 1pm The door bell rang.Sonia was the only one at home. Angela has gone to her shop. David was away in his office. She wondered who might be at the door. "Who is there?"she asked standing close to the door. "It's me o"A voice said from outside. "who?"Sonia asked again. "Soni you can't recognise my voice ni? Sonia smiled and opened the door.She knew it was Bisi, due to the way she asked her the last question. She had told Bisi where she now lives. Bisi her dear friend had no choice than to come and visit her there since she knew Sonia was always home alone when her employers leave for work. "Soni you are enjoying here o. you are really enjoying here" Bisi said. "That's what you think. but you are wrong my dear"Sonia defended herself. "hmmmm,soni,if i were in your shoes,i would be very very happy o"Bisi said as she glanced around the compound. "Why do you say so?"Sonia asked. Bisi smile and held her friend. "You are my friend and i won't hide anything from you. If i were you, i would get close to your madam's husband. you know what i mean" Bisi rolled her eyeballs. "Do you know what you are saying?"Sonia was calm though. "You are very pretty my dear,and that is a great asset.your mother needs money for her drugs and we know too well that you are a young woman who wishes to make money like others. this is your chance"Bisi said as if she knew exactly what she was saying. Sonia was quiet. she was actually thinking about it. "But be careful to avoid your madam's suspicions. She is a woman and will understand every step you take. I have to go before they meet me here"Bisi said and left. Sonia pondered this in her heart.Bisi has been a friend for long.They had suffered together and so share so many things in common,despite the fact that they both hailed from different places. She remembered Ebere who had called her up to take the job as a maid.Ebere had told her that she will have a discussion with her in four days time and nobody should know about it.She wondered what the kind lady might have for her. "Bisi my dear friend.you may be right but i haven't got that kind of heart"she soliloquied as she watched Bisi walk lazily out of the compound 2 Likes |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by DVMtuppence(m): 9:40pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
bros I don port hmm nice write-up buh try Nd put suspense |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Aipete2(f): 7:06am On Sep 19, 2014 |
Idiet bisi, stewpid gal. Wen u marry, ur wish 4 dat family shall be urz in Jesus name. Amen 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 9:15am On Sep 19, 2014 |
DVMtuppence: bros I don port welcome sir |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by DVMtuppence(m): 10:24pm On Sep 19, 2014 |
Calismart:thanks. just gimme popcorn +alomo |
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