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Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by JamesReacher(m): 7:33am On Jul 13, 2017 |
Divepen1:Arrghh. Okay then |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by Divepen1(m): 7:35am On Jul 13, 2017 |
Divepen1:Thanks for understanding.. |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by Divepen1(m): 7:36am On Jul 13, 2017 |
Shalomdee:Yes, the battle itself is in August. This is the selection stage... |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by Gmike2rule(m): 4:02am On Jul 14, 2017 |
This might really ignite into my core... perhaps a challenge will raise the dying morale. good job @ divepen |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by Divepen1(m): 11:00am On Jul 14, 2017 |
Prizes: Prizes: Winner:#10,000 First runner up:# 5000 Second runner up: #3000 Third runner up: A #1000 card recharge card.. All Stories sent would be in Our Review ' In Short Words' FlashFictions( Maiden Edition). 1. GSteve001 2. Missnande 3. OluwabuqqyYOLO 4. Heryordele94 5. Debbietiyan 6. meneski 7. McLove 8. horlahmieh 9. Kusibe77 10. AyarmBoye 11.Jazmiynne 12. expensive2 13. KimberlyWest 14. Chipappii 15. Oyindawealth 16. comelyJummy 17. skarlett 18. Trip4Jozzy 19. devilmaycry 20. Lesky3 21. illicit 22. Frankenstein 23. perrypablo 24. boffinjay 25. piroux 26. Gmike2rule 27. ToluLolu0122 |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by Divepen1(m): 10:41pm On Jul 14, 2017 |
Gmike2rule:Thanks boss . |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by Divepen1(m): 2:53pm On Jul 23, 2017 |
8 days to go.. If you've not sent your entry, please do. 1. GSteve001 2. Missnande 3. OluwabuqqyYOLO 4. Heryordele94 5. Debbietiyan 6. meneski 7. McLove 8. horlahmieh 9. Kusibe77 10. AyarmBoye 11.Jazmiynne 12. expensive2 13. KimberlyWest 14. Chipappii 15. Oyindawealth 16. comelyJummy 17. skarlett 18. Trip4Jozzy 19. devilmaycry 20. Lesky3 21. illicit 22. Frankenstein 23. perrypablo 24. boffinjay 25. piroux 26. Gmike2rule 27. ToluLolu0122 |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by Oyindawealth(f): 5:06pm On Jul 23, 2017 |
Divepen1:I'm sorry but I don't really understand d procedures |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by Divepen1(m): 8:02pm On Jul 23, 2017 |
Oyindawealth:For the first stage send your 250 words story to my mail, akintayoakinjide0@gmail.com |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by Oyindawealth(f): 12:11pm On Jul 25, 2017 |
Divepen1:okay... Alright,I now understand........ |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by Divepen1(m): 7:40am On Jul 26, 2017 |
5 days to go. If you've not sent your entry, please do. 1. GSteve001 2. Missnande 3. OluwabuqqyYOLO 4. Heryordele94 5. Debbietiyan 6. meneski 7. McLove 8. horlahmieh 9. Kusibe77 10. AyarmBoye 11.Jazmiynne 12. expensive2 13. KimberlyWest 14. Chipappii 15. Oyindawealth 16. comelyJummy 17. skarlett 18. Trip4Jozzy 19. devilmaycry 20. Lesky3 21. illicit 22. Frankenstein 23. perrypablo 24. boffinjay 25. piroux 26. Gmike2rule 27. ToluLolu0122 |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by meneski(m): 4:50am On Aug 02, 2017 |
I learnt something yesterday...never post ur story early... I guese thats the welcome i got in my writing career. I pray to write better, there is always another time... Watch out for me. R....... A......... L....... peace. |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by Divepen1(m): 5:26am On Aug 02, 2017 |
meneski:I don't think so. I think those who post their works earlier have higher chances. Meanwhile, there is hope. The judges still need to pick 3 more contestants |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by McLove(m): 5:57am On Aug 02, 2017 |
I pray I'm part if the 3 the judges will pick now |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by Heryordele94(m): 6:16am On Aug 02, 2017 |
please i would be glad if my story could be reviewed so i wont make the same mistake i made before @ Audreytimms, Larrysun and repogirl. pls my entry is 14. |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by meneski(m): 6:24am On Aug 02, 2017 |
Heryordele94: |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by repogirl(f): 8:33am On Aug 02, 2017 |
Heryordele94:It is a really funny story and you did quite well with your grammar but you need to do more work on your style. A good style makes your reader form an attachment with your character. It's not enough to write the story, you have make your readers become part of the story. You have to pick your words carefully, construct it so that anyone reading would genuinely feel your character. Also, in your story, I would have liked to know why the character was being tormented by the soldier. What did he do that landed him in that situation. The ending was the best part of the story, every other part didn't do much for me. Next time, try and create a story with more depth. Let it have a beginning (introduction to the character), a conflict and then an end, which is as a result of the conflict. Hope this helps. Keep writing and you'll find your style. 5 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by Heryordele94(m): 9:18am On Aug 02, 2017 |
repogirl:Thanks for taking your time to go through my work, it really means alot to me, will work on my style of writing.. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by McLove(m): 1:45pm On Aug 02, 2017 |
Please help review the first story I submitted too to avoid mistakes in the second round! Entry 17 |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by Divepen1(m): 5:25pm On Aug 02, 2017 |
The following people have been selected and have been paired. This would be posted on the discussion thread and would be transferred by Divepen1 Date August 2-4 — The judges would have paired contestants before the battle starts and would pick a winner from each group. This mean, the judges would have 3 contestants left. — The judges are allowed to steal any two contestants that lose from other judge. Team Repo Missnande vs ToluLolu0122 piroux vs Jazmiynne illicit vs Meneski Team Elixir ( Audreytimm) Debbietiyan versus Heryordele94 GSteve001 versus Mclove Gmike2rule versus kimberlywest Team LSD Kusibe versus OluwabuqqyYOLO Chipappi versus Frankenstein Skarlett versus Perrypablo cc: Repogirl Audreytimms Larrysun |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by OluwabuqqyYOLO(m): 9:06pm On Aug 02, 2017 |
Divepen1, please, when's the deadline for the drabble? |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by Divepen1(m): 9:21pm On Aug 02, 2017 |
OluwabuqqyYOLO:4th August |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by Nobody: 9:42pm On Aug 02, 2017 |
THE WAGES OF SIN The bullet hit him straight on the forehead. He blinked, staggered and fell backward. It was the longest step he ever took. For one thing, it lasted him the rest of his life. Steve arose in a world of darkness, icy confusion pouring through his mind. But all he could think of at the moment was the hooded figure standing before him. “I never thought it would end this way. I only wanted my due.” He had served me well alive, killing and destroying lives. Everyone would be glad to see him die, except me. CONGRATULATIONS. YOU’VE GOT IT. 100 words excluding the title 12 Likes 11 Shares |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by OluwabuqqyYOLO(m): 10:38pm On Aug 02, 2017 |
Divepen1:Today's 2 oh. Please make it the 5th. |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by Frankenstein: 10:59pm On Aug 02, 2017 |
Divepen1:Are we supposed to post our entries or send them to your email? |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by meneski(m): 11:46pm On Aug 02, 2017 |
FOR ONE OR ALL? Even at the orifice of death, he couldn't believe his fiance will shoot him. The only person he has treated with amorousness. But there she stood defiantly remorseless of what she did, still pointing the Glock at him, ready to finish the deed. Conjuring the last strenght in him, coughing out blood violently he began. "If i should die a million times, i don't mind you killing me all through. I will love you again and agaaaiiin" coughs again. BOOM! And his skull haboured a bullet. She had to kill the president for her safty and of the citizenry. 3 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by meneski(m): 11:48pm On Aug 02, 2017 |
Excluding the title its a hundred word piece. |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by Divepen1(m): 3:58am On Aug 03, 2017 |
OluwabuqqyYOLO:I'm sorry ooo.. All the dates are fixed. You saw them in the instructions before the competition, you would have lodged a complaints and probably corrections would have been made. |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by Divepen1(m): 4:01am On Aug 03, 2017 |
Frankenstein:Post them here. |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by OluwabuqqyYOLO(m): 2:37pm On Aug 03, 2017 |
Divepen1:Okay, bro. |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by Debbietiyan(f): 4:18pm On Aug 03, 2017 |
FIRST KISS She had longed to feel his lips on hers the minute she laid eyes on him, and she knew he wanted the same. They had known virtually, for a year, but the attraction kicked-in first sighting. He would be her first, she was glad she waited. She would be his tenth, she didn't know that, though wouldn't have minded, if she did. They were standing so close, eyes staring intently into each other’s, then she felt the tickle on her lips, just as he stepped back. Confused, she reached for her lips, chasing away the fly that had settled there. 11 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: Seun Osewa Flash Fiction ( Instructions And Discussion Thread by Chipappii(m): 4:48pm On Aug 03, 2017 |
Murder She Wrote She never told him why she went to jail. Jennifer probably thought it never mattered to him, she was wrong and he left her for Mary. She had chatted him up on the night of their honeymoon and told him the reason why. The answer she gave screamed out to him, his eyes bulged when he read the message. Then he heard a sound of gunshot downstairs. He rushed out and from the stairs he saw Mary on the floor, in her pool of blood, Jennifer stood over her. She raised the gun at him. "Murder" was what she wrote. 1 Like |
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