Remove a quatrain from your verse pls

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Raplinx should stay away. . .no beef

darkenedrebel:

I was the waiting for you naa... you go first..I'll follow suit ASAP

nah. . .you're dropping first. . .edit your second post and drop .
I'm typing, give me 15 minutes

darkenedrebel:


we agreed 12 bars.... that's what we dropping...just try add two more bars to your verse...I can't start dismantling my scripts again..
I'm ready to post...get your material together..we should be posting in 30mins time

ok post

Darkenedrebel, i'm too lazy to come up with 12 bars. . . We're dropping 10 bars abeg

SmokingGunZ:


Nothing else in this except vocabulary also called big gramar and rhymes.

What happened to penmanship and deep lyricism?

Taking nothing away from this verse, but using words like "Mephiboshet" et al is distracting to the readers.

Peace.

I still chew bullets.

Lol

darkenedrebel:


I thought you scrapped it off.
I will correct it.. .007bruce take note

yes correct it. . . .and whats the problem? You already got 8 likes without even posting your verse.

Darkrebel: I be going ape in spars, before the days of tars

¤Darkrebel is a sick emcee?. . . We know he's weak and slow/ we also know his dad's a notorious thief. . . It no more a secret though/ so dont feel you're döpe/ cos taking your father's steps. . . is the only time you give niggas a run for their money and steal the show/

¤The weed i smoke. . .got me high on this/ his 'ghost must be back to hunt me'. .cos i already killed him once with brightest script /. . .and i came with pastor. . .so dont try to diss/ cos i dont need the nine or fifth/ to defeat the 'spirit of the dark'. . . I brought the bible, bìtch!/


¤I dönt care if the judges say i'm wack or call me döpe/ but we surely know/ he wants to be the best. . .and he would go 50,000 miles. . .so voters can love his notes/ its funny tho. . . I bet he brought policemen to this to brawl. . . So he can secure the votes/


¤i murder in bouts/ decapitate niggas for calling me out/ then cut em to pieces. . . when i put my sword in their mouth/. . . But y'all know the only thing Omoleran slaughter is cow/


¤When we talking money. . . This fella is not a contest/ i'm a rich nigga and i've got the cheddars in my pocket/ but Omoleran is a broke loafer. . . He's only getting green . . .cos he's jealous of my success/


¤This nigga is pathetic, why beg cash from bis?/ . . .you broke, nigga!. , I'll write you a cheque only when i have your sis/. . .i do the guns talk too much. . .i pop the macs & blast the fifth/ cos i have em guns in store/ plus the fireworks too. . .name it; the macs, shot guns, grenades and fours. . ./ and this Hungry nigga only go ape in spars/ . . .cos hd heard i even have em banana clips/


He has nothing to eat. .but if he's got some fries to eat

¤I'll take D's pies . . .cos i hate his gut/ I'll even visit his family. . . Beat his dad to death & räpe his mum/ whip D's cousin in the shower. . . Like we talking things out/ I heard that kid is troublesome. . . So if i drown him in D's tub its cos he's bugging me out/


¤I'm a bone crusher. . . I wreck the skull/ of vets in brawl/ and its no news i'm a threat to all/ but this little bìtch is a joke. . . he wouldnt crack your ribs if he was Hellen Paul/


¤I told y'all. . . I'm a man with the schemes/ what i pen is sick and capable of outclassing the kin/ and he should leave here with his garbage writtens/ cos if i hear D's pen's able. . . The useless thing will be trashed in the bin!/


¤I'm putting an end to his suffering. . .I'll announce the closure/ he says he a big guy. . .But i listened to his audio rap & he sounds like a toddler/. . . I should drown the imposter/ for claiming to be a man. . .cos D doesn't sound like a G. . . . unless we pronouncing soldier!/


¤My plan is to put him in a box tonight/ with the help of the locs and nines/ But its glaring. . . I dont need the guns to fight/ . . .cos these witty lines already got D laid like i didnt drop on time!!/

mikuz:

Ma nigga this is d0pe!

Quick Freestyle

I'm earning the win, murking your king
Burning your skin with hot verses i pen
Bruce is Wolverine and a lord with the schemes
And none is fùcking with him
'Cept the whores in his inn, your mom & your queen
I'm hurting your twin
For tryna bring Double pain, and
I'll have a pair of my metallic claws stucked in his chin
Like David Draiman

I'm a shady mister, a crazy spitter
I bore the crowd to death when i spit eighty fillers
I'll spray the nina if i hate a nigga. . .
Like B magic. . i've got a rächet on me. . .but it aint working like a lazy stripper
so i bought a Nina. . . And its made to put kids to sleep that's a babysitter

Jigs an ugly mohfücker. . .a fücking baboon
Be a man, step up to me. . .& get crushed in your hood
Tell us. . .why you faking a thug with glock?. . .you must be a fool
You should come to my place & see the fours that we shoot
So when i say i pop cans for real you know that shìts nothing but the truth
But this bítch a fûcking liar, he never popping the tools
So next time jigs spewing shìt like he draw on niggas, just know he talking tatoos

I'm döpe & stunning i flow like nothing
Your skull? I'm cracking. . .Your bones? I'm crushing
The ghosts are mourning & you're scared to death. . . cos you know the chrome is coming
Did i say an empty barrel??. . .I'll reload and pop it
why the hommie fronting?. . . . He jacks someone elses shìt & hope we applaud him?
That tells you're an inexperienced vet, a rookie prolly. . . .it shows & its appauling
And now we know why you don't spice up brawls. . . Its cos you dont know your onions!

darkenedrebel:
007bruce? we dropping today?

nah. . .no time, sorry. . .maybe Friday. . . .if not friday. .then saturday. I promise

Classsyalabolas:



okay..just try and get 12 bars ready on Wednesday. .I would be ready .

no uploading of my pic this time

Classsyalabolas:


you developing cold feet or what? ..accept and let's sludge it out once & for all. ..as far everyone is concerned, I won our last battle.... afterall you said we would rematch. .. or you need 2 weeks to come up with lines?



meanwhile. ..007bruce ..can we have our rematch on Tuesday? 12 bars

i dont know. . .i no get time these days. . .you can write your verse. . .i'll hit you up when i'm free

Raplinx999:
Pls Bruce set my thread with Obesemf

after obesemf confirms he's ready. . .

mikuz:

My bad, I thought that post was from Icekidd. I ain't battling Dark!

smh

. .

Classsyalabolas:


just create the thread so that I can check in.. .If he doesn't accept to drop tomorrow by 5pm,then we drop on Sunday by 12pm latest. ..I just need the thread up to get me gingered

Alright. . .

Classsyalabolas:


Alright..giyaz Jason and sosiq are debarred as usual[mikuz-take note- if they post on the battle thread, they should get a ban].. and voting should last for 24 hours max to avoid any form of scuffle like the last time.

and mikuz. ...we should drop tomorrow by 6pm or on Sunday by 10am.. .Sunday 8pm is too far & late as the next day's a working day..afterall you said you only need a day to write for battles some time ago.. ... ..so hasten up so we can post tomorrow.. ... I already wrote my verse this morning..so it's up to you now

Cc: Mikuz

you agree?

Classsyalabolas:


007bruce please take note.. . Sunday 8pm [12 bars]

ok

obesemf:
007Bruce , this place is dying. Let's have the title match already

nextweek. . .maybe

RhythmTwister:


Okay now I'm serious....... No more King tourney,accepted what's next?

go read your books

NinaNigeria:


heheheh den she asks, so wat is it dat m thinking, and wat is it dat u doing? Plz explain, m now giving u a chance to explain

*scratches head*. . .baby i dont know what came over me. . .i really dont know. . .its the devil's work

Adasun:
baby please it's not my fault, baby it's da devil as if devil da their when u da shake ur waste

so na bad thing to shake my waste?

Classsyalabolas:
DISTORTED MIND



rough freestyle... ...

and the supreme eponymous emcee, in the geocentric ptolemaic system/

6 mins of

DIABOLICAL RHYMES

you faggits listen/ to classic rhythm/ when the classy's spitting/
& stop murmuring like market women/ he's a beast. . .dont be quick fast to diss him/
cos punchlines from this super soldier, crack civillians/ frankly speaking/ he's blasted millions/ of spastic chickens/ with this tragic writtens/
i have a feeling/ a bad one! beware!!. . .he's always masked like a villain//
rebel is zeus/ he's gentle & good/ but i'm cruel as shao kahn. . .i kick ässes with my metallic boots/ put yourself in my shoes/ and get stucked finding your feet/. . .we're kind as a thief/ so we settle disputes/ by helping the jews/ throw pebbles and hooves/ to rebels & crooks//
i'm freddy krueger/ he's my twin brother. . . .we bring murder when we stretch the ruger/
we're scary rulers/
you should fear these shooters/
cos we're the greatest villains/ in this raging region/. . &.you're barely super/ hail this crazy heathen/ shout my name. . .shout Bruce is the guy!/
i cant hear you losers!/ shout Bruce is truly divine!/ before i behead you losers!/
shout Bruce is good with em rhymes!/ and this is an unsual freestyle/
so dont expect the usual punchlines/
but if you feel i'm spewing weak lines/ i can 'start from the scratch' . . .by 'going back to the drawing board'. . .and literarilly be 'schooling' you guys!/

What the fùck is dontai?/. . . an ugly lucky dumb swine?/. . . a duck that ducks when it comes to punchlines?/. . .
fùcking hundred blonde wives/. . . ordering shots in the club, pub like/ . . . a drunk stuck who is lost in time?/
. . . tell me what the fùck is wrong with these hot rhymes/

. . .She's a tool to the guys/ and Bruce is not surprised/ a bìtch who gives textcees something to wänk on. . .i'm bringing the truth to your eyes/. . .
she even put on a smile/. . . when a nigga tells her: i'm cümmin on your pics/. . . Hurting with the script/ . . .aint tryna be rude with these lines/ . . . but i pray it wont be too late before the fool realise. . ./
. . .that she's losing her pride. . .

Baby i can explain. . .baby please i can explain. . .its not what you think. . .baby please

favoured234:
2 horses and many horse legs

colour blindness

vsaintchigs:
ode

Lol! Ode indeed

This topic is pointless

emmalexabl:
Shame on yourobber landlords and landladies !!

dont be stûpid