Come and update, so we could give a better comment on the characters... Oloye Oyelekan is claim tough and decisive on the surface but deep within he is broken, his first's wife demise is still taken a toll on him. Akinlabi, is just playing weak for now due to his circumstance. Op, update us to get a complete emotional analysis of the characters....

Slimdreywhizz1:
nice one....but the update is very slow almost fortten about the story...

Yeah me too. It too sometime for me to recall character like jess when i read the update.

Nice update...

Nice twist op, thanks for the update...

Nice update...

Following... Great piece u have here Op.

Thanks for the update... Its really sad what happened to dede, atleast, she will rest now. For a first timer, i would say u are beyond average, & ur knowledge of tradition & custom is really commendable. Keep it up.....

Welcome back op, and happy new year

Thanks for the update.

Thanks for the update....

Thanks for the update... Keep it up.

Nice one. Following...

This is becoming more interesting... Fire on Sir!

Op, u are good, though there is mistake like when u use oyeku instead of legun when arore disappeared with maku at the river otherwise u are good, u are truely talented. Thanks for the update..

Thanks for the update and happy new year too

Ann2012:


Pass me Hennessy

Thanks for the invite

Aunty, i dont drink hennessy, manage malt ok. U are welcome

More!!!

Though maku is promiscuous, i hope he survives this. Thanks for the update, more inspiration op...

Moura7:
New update this evening.... Honestly, the comments I'm getting here are not encouraging.

Still following, still making comment. its been more than a year or so of following this story. Now that its coming to and end, dont give-up on us, cos we never give-up on u, no matter the delay(s) updating...

Great start...

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Sweetheart, u dont have to quote the whole text just to comment ok... Ann2012, come and grace us here with ur presence.

Zion is a master strategist i must say. Hope the girl in black survives the blast... Thanks for the update.

Maku can rest now, but ogbo is truely wicked indeed. But why didn't legun dealt with him as he vowed too? This gods/goddesses do not forgive what so ever if u fall from their grace... More inspiration Op

Great piece u have here, following jeje....

Ideadoctor:
awww! thank you, that was encouraging, but my work is not worthy of been published for now, you know a lot of grammatical errors,lack of organisation and coherence, this is my first experience of writing a story,I believe I would have improved when I will write the second

That is good, with time and practise, u will achieve perfection. Hope to see more of ur works here on NL and publish books in the nearest future....

Nice update Vic...

Op, ur work is really good... Hope u will publish this...

Ideadoctor:
na so,wish my own love life is as interesting as theirs

Hahaha! modern love is hard oo, especially in this hard economy...
The mods should do something pls _Divepen,Obinnau

Awww! This young lovers are so cute... Thanks for the update....

Hope the goddess didn't take the form of Arore to punish Maku. Thanks for the update...

Wow! Nice update...

Great update, awaiting the next....