₦airaland Forum

Feza- Elikem and Cleo

Angelo- Elikem and Feza

Melvin- Bimp and Oneal

pinky lips: Sulu nominates Annabel cos she sleeps a lot as well as dillish,reason cos its time to start calling up people wo are competition......sulu seems hell bent on sending d females out

You are right...his vendetta against d females is quite annoying. ..he may stil be up for eviction.

Sulu- Annabel and Dillish.

Annabel- Beverly and Cleo

Bimp- Elikem and Annabel

pinky lips: Dillion nominates Nando n bimp.....dis girl is clueless,every week,she keeps nominating same people,she can't even check the dynamics of the game as it goes very week.......ode

You will be shocked but she knows what shez doing. Or is it until she nominates Melvin and you start shouting backstabbing that shez playing the game?

She gave gud reasons. She is not a WA and so don't expect her to be engrossed in going against conspirators.

Dillish- Bimp and Nando

Nando- Elikem and Sulu.

I have gone through the first 5 pages and I liked the dialogue. I had issues with:

*When Stanley was speaking with someone on phone...it was written like a one-sided conversation and not even a pause that could depict him 'listening to the other person'. Pls, rectify that.

*I also found Stanley and his wife (Dora) to be unnecessarily covering a wide range of topics in their dialogue. I don't know if that's how dialogue ensues in your place (since you said the script is an American stuff which I assume you stay overseas) but I just didn't enjoy them shifting the topic of discussion without going kinda deep, from the client/defendant saga to seeing Doctor Martin (fertility doctor) to what the newspaper says about a man killing a python etc. Though, I may be wrong sha and btw, the change of topic of discussion is no biggie IMO for stage dramas.

You can always do better.

@OP....VillageBoi and Prof have said the most basic but important things. Nevertheless, I would read and give you a feedback later.

Btw, I am a fellow up-and-coming script writer lyk you bro. I had been writing since primary school dayz..in drama-like form but my dream had always been for it to be made into movies...not published as dramatic novels. I later got to know about movie scripts and screenplay and how it differs from writing stage drama. I am still getting to know sha oh. But these ppl here on NL (VillageBoi, prof, speedyboi, anonimus et al.) have been of great help. I'm sure you wud benefit from them...especially if u re for movies, not stage. Nevertheless, find your niche.

geez prince: @ the moment angelo is mel's main competition cos if u ask me Angola is key and rest of africa too.angelo got these two countries when he was up,mel got the two countries too. I'm just trying to point out d importance of these two countries cos they wl determine the winner.the odds favor angelo though cos he's been saved twice by these countries,of course anything can happen before the finale#just saying#

SOM is right. Remember about five oda housemates would leave before finals...leaving their countries vacant (if possible) for voting. The winner of the finals is not all about Angola and ROA even though it counts. Dillish also won Angola and ROA the last tym she was up. Votes change bro. I won't be surprised if at the finals, Dillish edges out Angelo with maybe Kenya (shezz a gud friend to Annabel) and ROA (because ppl changed their minds over the weeks). Melvin who has been the WA faithful too may be forced to compete with a West African at the finals which may reduce his chances...in short, the game is not exactly predictable. Angelo is a strong competitor for now, also Dillish and Melvin..but things can change with respect to voting.

Pokello was once a "champion" who clinched 8 votes in her first tym at the chopping board, and got saved about three other tyms!! Nw, shez history.

Over the next few weeks, alliances would be formed, broken and maybe reformed...and even rebroken . Bigbrother is not Ludo...the eventual winner may still be Melvin...or we just didn't see another shocker coming.

Kslib: My predictions....
Feza ........beverly/melvin/elikem
Oneal........ bevery/elikem/melvin
Annabel...... Beverly/melvin
Angelo..... Sulu/annabel
Nando....... Sulu/melvin
Bimp....... Elikem/angelo/oneal
Melvin..... Bimp/Annabel/oneal
Beverly.... Annabel/oneal/sulu
Sulu..... Beverly/annabel/feza
Dillish...... Oneal/feza/cleo
Cleo.... Feza/annabel/oneal
Elikem... Oneal/feza

The ones with three names means two of three will be up!!!

This is what I think:
Dillish- Oneal/Nando/Cleo
Elikem- Oneal/Sulu...he still kinda trusts Feza...I think.

ItsModella: The same Bimp who nominated Dillish? I laugh in Swahili

Sis...dnt fall my hand. Ethiopia has always voted for Dillish so far Bimp isn't up. Dear, they wud pick him over Melvin. It's nt all about housemates interpersonal relationships...there is also 'vote me, I vote u' thingy going on...Maria is not enof to convince Namibia. though that doesn't mean Melvin won't win.

spade: Uh-oh! The voting didn't go as planned

But what the heck, we voted her twice already, right?

Abeg shift jare! Are you now happy? I think the Bevangelo thing also helped Angelo to secure some votes. Let's stay tuned to the game sha.

Btw, are we sure this rigging of a thing is working?

noname: So Nigeria voted for Bassey?!!! Wayo. I really tried hitting ROA for Bassey but I guess my votes weren't enough. Oh well. I wonder if we still have Namibia, I know our in-law Maria will still campaign for Melvin but Namibia might hate us now.

Maria is not enough to guarantee Nigeria her country's vote...but dnt worry...Sierra Leone has our back now...Tnx to those that voted Dillish. ..God bless.

practikal: yesoo my vote for bassey made an impact

Oh...an impact that saw him on his way to Sierra Leone I see...congrats on ur impact

Shame on Dillish haters! !! Shame!!!

So, Nigeria even voted Bassey....mschew!!! And some peeps are shouting here...nonsense!

This same bassey declared his love for Sulu and forgot who is called Melvin and Beverly. He was just playing the game!

Dillish, congrats! I wonder how Angelo garnered all those votes sha.

Afam4eva: You can't eat your cake and still have it.

To know how weird English is...d correct form is: "You can't have your cake and eat it".

Zimbomatic:

Pele....aww

Pokello is out!!!!! Dillish stays!!!!! Thank you guys.

dmalam: DILLISH, UR CHASE ENDS HERE!

What's wrong with this one? You don't even know if d 2nd housemate to be evicted is a fake housemate...and Dillish may have evn escaped eviction with enof votes.

Handy Manny: Sholay you copy?

You are high. You will be shocked when Dillish is saved once again

Do you copy ko, do you paste ni...mschew!

Agbgift: I won't watch eviction 2nyt, I dnt want to cry.

Lol...what would make u cry? I guess you are a Bassey fan. I am a Dillish fan but I'm still very optimistic that she wud survive. I'm expecting the best but prepared for the worst.

Belovedd: Am soo gonna miss bassey. I just pray dillish isn't leaving with him cos Melvin would be soo devastated. But I have a feeling that they r both leaving today. Melvin's game will really become dull if dillish is evicted, what else would we argue about wrt to melvin

Dillish may escape eviction. ..lets be optimistic...tho I doubt same for Bassey. Incase she leaves, the anti-WA thingy and the conspiracy against Melvin wud still keep our boy's game up and would make him win more hearts. It indirectly favours him so far he maintains his cool headed nature. All is well.

I doubt if Bev would ever nominate Melvin at this stage of the game...but she may ensure (stylishly) that others nominate him ...that's what is called 'playing the game in obscurity'.

Brimmie: Because he doesnt like Christian songs, he shld go for deliverance? No.. You need deliverance here! It cuts me how long you've been living with no brain! Ewu!

Who is the daf.t pesin? Did u read my post wiv ur eyes closed? My issue is he saying Christian songs IRRITATE him! Pls, learn to switch on your cerebrum when reading comments. Thank you. Happy Sunday

And Jesus is Lord

I don't think Dillish wud go home today cos she shudnt be up for eviction in the first place...it will be too obvious that Biggie has a personal agenda (IMO) if she leaves.

But isn't it obvious already? No WA among d emeralds nonsense....no strike issued when conspiracy is the order of the day...etc.

If Dillish goes, the game wud sure continue but I will missssssss her...

Usman212s: I never listened to any... Their songs irritate me

Are you even a Christian? "irritate" is a strong word to use...you may nt be a fan but they irritate you? Abeg go for deliverance.

Felicitations to him! At least, it's good news this time where Nigeria is mentioned in the same sentence as UK again. Nice one...