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Travel › Re: Canadian Student Visa Thread Part 16 by SOPWriter: 6:57pm On Jul 29, 2019

olaola17:
Sincerely i think you are right, its the SOP but i stand to be corrected. This exact statement is the how it was written in my Note. And honestly after joining this thread i can say my SOP was wack.

We pray we will get it right this time and get all the help and advice we can.

Amen..

Education › Re: Guide To Foreign Admission Statement Of Purpose by SOPWriter(op): 5:08pm On Jul 29, 2019*

What shouldn’t you include in your statement of purpose?

1. Unnecessary personal details
What do I mean by personal? Don’t share that you’ve been interested in history since you were born and now you want to study Mass Communication. Moreover, you should probably exclude sharing an overwhelming hardship that led you to want to pursue graduate studies in, for example, Chemical Biology. These details would be more appropriate for a personal statement, and are neither professional enough nor necessary for a statement of purpose.

There is, however, one exception: If you have changed careers to pursue your field of interest, you should discuss this. For example, let’s say your first undergraduate degree is in Education, and you discovered your interest in science while working as a teacher. Hence, you went back to school for a second undergraduate degree in Physics. This is a personal detail you’ll want to include because the admissions committee will wonder why you have two undergraduate degrees. You can do so subtly by explaining what you learned from your previous degree and how you’ve applied it to your current work.

Note: some schools will offer an additional section to explain personal circumstances. If you’re given the opportunity to discuss personal details elsewhere, use it, making sure to focus your statement of purpose on why you want to go to graduate school.

Travel › Re: Canadian Student Visa Thread Part 16 by SOPWriter: 4:40pm On Jul 28, 2019

NwanyiOkpa:
Is it possible to go for visa interview after paying 1 year tuition for a 2 year program?

I am looking at MUN

There won't be oral interview if you will be applying for Canadian study permit (except for special cases of which I have not heard of). Secondly, paying for a year tuition is another way of proofing your genuine intention of pursuing a degree in Canada. Pay the tuition, it will be an advantage!

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Education › Re: Guide To Foreign Admission Statement Of Purpose by SOPWriter(op): 3:12pm On Jul 28, 2019*

What should you use from your CV in your statement of purpose?

Simply put, you want to choose experiences and accomplishments that display you are a determined, self-motivated individual with a passion for their field of interest.

Experiences to consider including:

Research assistantships

Jobs

Volunteering

Internships

Note: The earliest experiences should be from when you were an undergraduate and onward to the present day. You can include pivotal experiences from before college on your CV, but unless they have been incredibly influential (high school internship at a university laboratory), save the space for more recent experiences.)

Accomplishments to consider including:

Publications

Presentations

Funding (fellowship, grants, travel grants, scholarships)

Exhibitions

Fundraising

Invited speaker or panelist

Ideally, your listed experiences should be multi-year and within your field of interest. Still, you can boost the importance of shorter experiences like a summer internship by discussing achievements you made during that short period of time, such as particularly strong results, a resulting presentation, or pitching a novel idea that was used by the institution/company.

For each experience you include in your statement of purpose, you’ll have to discuss the following:

A short description of what you did

How long you did it

Why you did it (not always necessary but can be used as a transition in between experiences)

What you learned from it

Any accomplishments that came out of it, such as results, publications, exhibitions, grants, presentations, fundraising, etc.

The accomplishments you present within each experience will not only validate your experience and make it seem more impressive, but can also be used to display your fit for further studies.

Travel › Re: Canadian Student Visa Thread Part 16 by SOPWriter: 2:58pm On Jul 28, 2019

Gamma007:
Alihamdulillah, Approval alert...
Msc chemical engineering university of Alberta

Paper Application
Date of application, May 6
Medical request June 14.
Medical passed June 28
Biometric correspondence mail July 22
Final approval July 26.

Documents submitted.
Transcript
Degree statement of result
Attestation letter from institution,showing certificate hasn't been issued
O'level result
IELTS result
Admission letter
Funding letter
SOA
Police clearance
Certificate of National population commission
SOP
Reference letter

I want to appreciate everyone on this group, for the spirit of togetherness,selflnesses and your invaluable words of guidance and encouragement.
I got everything I needed for my application from this forum.
And for the people that are always optimistic all the time, congratulating me in advance even when I write a post to express my discomfort and frustration in the application waiting time, your words are always very timely.Thank you once again.

Finally I got another letter on my portal yesterday, the correspondence letter to be shown upon landing in Canada with address of Lagos embassy, does it mean that I can go and pick up my passport now? because it was approved on Friday and I was thinking a text message will be sent.

To all the travel hopefuls we shall rejoice very soon my God's.

Congratulations!

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Education › Re: Guide To Foreign Admission Statement Of Purpose by SOPWriter(op): 6:29pm On Jul 27, 2019*

Before Writing
Firstly, I strongly recommend you to update your CV before you begin writing to ensure that the dates and details you discuss in your statement of purpose are sorted out.

Also understand that a little bit of preparation before you write will make the drafting process a lot easier. Recall that the statement of purpose should put a narrative to the accomplishments on your CV that supports your decision to pursue graduate studies.

To best prepare, first jot down dates and details of each activity (research apprenticeship, job) along with associated accomplishments (publication, presentation), and figure out which qualities of the ideal graduate student are exhibited through your various experiences.

Here are some qualities to consider demonstrating:
Dedicated
Perseverant
Collaborative
Good mentor
Independent
Self-motivated
Audacious
Creative
Strong interpersonal skills
Clearly communicates complex material

However, you should understand not all experiences or details will make it into your statement of purpose (more on which experiences to include in a moment), but having it all in one place can really help you get your brain juices flowing.

Travel › Re: Canadian Student Visa Thread Part 16 by SOPWriter: 4:45pm On Jul 27, 2019

omoh1:
APPROVAL ALERT!!!
THANK YOU JESUS!
I've been a silent reader on this forum and I want to say a big THANK YOU to everyone contributing on this forum. This forum really gave me a feel of 'we are in this together' kind of feeling.
Timeline
Paper route
Submitted : 17th May 2019
Medical request : 20th June
Medical done at iom: 2nd July
Medical passed: 5th July
1st correspondence letter/Bvl: 22nd July
2nd Correspondence letter and updated to approval: yesterday or today but I just checked my mail this morning.
Going to pick up my passport on Monday
To all those waiting for approval, this coming week will not pass you by! Amen!

Congratulations. I am so happy for you.

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Travel › Re: Canadian Student Visa Thread Part 16 by SOPWriter: 4:40pm On Jul 27, 2019

Freeworld321:
Yea bro. I am doing great. All Glory to God. I already replied your mail.

I'm glad you're doing great, and yes, he does own all the glory!
I actually didn't send you a mail.

Education › Re: Guide To Foreign Admission Statement Of Purpose by SOPWriter(op): 10:49pm On Jul 26, 2019*

What is the admissions committee looking for in a potential graduate student?

Before we get into our step-by-step approach to writing a standout graduate school statement of purpose, let’s discuss what admissions committees are looking for so that you’ll have an easier time writing a compelling essay.

Graduate schools want to admit students who have exhibited a history of determination, self-motivation and passion for their intended field of study. Sound like you? Good!

The key word here is exhibited. In other words, you’ll want to draw from your experiences and accomplishments to highlight the aforementioned attributes through your essay.

Here’s a quick guild on how to demonstrate the qualities graduate programs are looking for:

History of determination: Experiences in your field that have lasted a year or more.

Self-motivation: Internships, funding, and presentations that you independently and successfully pursued

Passion: could be a discussion of how you decided on your field of interest (in your intro) and the specific area you’d like to study during your graduate career (in the conclusion)

In addition, below is a summary of what you’ll be critiqued for:

How clearly you present your experiences and accomplishments to display your fitness for their program.

Whether your statement of purpose makes a coherent and concise argument that you are the kind of graduate student they are looking for.

Your writing skills (formal and respectful in tone, proper grammar and punctuation, and easy-to-follow argument presented through your experiences on how you arrived at the decision to pursue graduate studies in your field of interest).

Travel › Re: Canadian Student Visa Thread Part 16 by SOPWriter: 4:43pm On Jul 26, 2019

obodooma:
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Great guru’s,
My Note is out, I sincerely need input on how to tackle the reasons for refusal by the VO. I am gainfully employed and have another business which is managed by my spouse. tuition fee is 30kCAD and i have 3times the balance, no bulk payment. I think the major issue here is my SOP(my view) and will need help.

‘’taking applicants plan of studies into account, the applicant does not appear to be sufficiently well established that the proposed studies would be reasonable expense. The applicant’s plan of studies appear vague and poorly documented. According to applicant’s current and future employment prospect, I have accorded less weight to their employment ties to the r country’.

Cc
frankrobin, julesiki, chukwuemkatehi,mcobex,okonkwobestman1,juswise and all other gurus

With this profile of yours, I am 99.9% sure the issue is from your SOP or Choice of degree in relation to your present employment but don't worry, SOP isn't that hard, you just have to locate where you missed it the first time. I can assist you further if you need assistance with your SOP.

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Education › Re: Guide To Foreign Admission Statement Of Purpose by SOPWriter(op): 10:58am On Jul 26, 2019*

How is a personal statement different from a statement of purpose?
Although most graduate programs require a statement of purpose, a few will ask for a personal statement instead, yet some schools will request both.

A statement of purpose places a narrative to your achievements to demonstrate that you have prepared for success in your graduate studies. On the other hand, a personal statement draws from your personal and professional experiences to explain how you have come to the decision to pursue a graduate education in your field of interest. In addition, your personal statement can be used to give admissions committees a sense of who you are as a person, including any obstacles you’ve had to overcome, explanations of your less-than-ideal academic record, and contributions you’ve made to your community.

If you are asked for a statement of purpose and personal statement, you should reserve information about your personal journey and hardships for your personal statement and discuss career-related experiences and academic accomplishments in your statement of purpose.

Note: If you’ve written a statement of purpose, you can easily modify it into a personal statement for programs and fellowships that ask for one and not the other.

Education › Re: Guide To Foreign Admission Statement Of Purpose by SOPWriter(op): 4:21am On Jul 26, 2019*

To expand, your statement of purpose should argue the following:

Why you want to go to graduate school

How you’ve prepared for graduate studies

What field and specific area you intend to study and why (Ph.D. in History with a focus on the Nigeria Revolution).

Why you’ve chosen University of X for your studies (specific offerings, resources, faculty).

We will be considering the difference between the statement of purpose and personal statement next.

Education › Guide To Foreign Admission Statement Of Purpose by SOPWriter(op): 4:17am On Jul 26, 2019*

A statement of purpose is an essay that summarizes your past work and preparation for further studies. It lays out your most important experiences (jobs, internships, apprenticeships, teaching) and accomplishments (publications, presentations, grants, exhibitions, speaking engagements) with the goal of getting you into your first-choice further program.

Whereas strong grades and test scores are the foundation of your application and are necessary to be considered at top programs, your experiences are what set you apart. Therefore, the goal with your statement of purpose is to organize and present your academic journey in a way that convinces the top institutions’ admissions committees that you are perfect for their program.

Travel › Re: Canadian Student Visa Thread Part 16 by SOPWriter: 3:34am On Jul 26, 2019

Freeworld321:
I remember when this use to be my home morning afternoon and night, now different priorities already talen over.

To as many TRV hopefuls. Stay prayerful, its just a matter of time.

Oh, yeah, I could recall your story in part 15. Trust you're doing great?

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Travel › Re: Canadian Student Visa Thread Part 16 by SOPWriter: 10:03pm On Jul 25, 2019

litterbug:
Someone help me shout Hallelujah....My God has done it for me.....PPR for me and my dependants...

Congratulations!

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Travel › Re: Canadian Student Visa Thread Part 16 by SOPWriter: 8:26pm On Jul 23, 2019

Doueme:
Please, I just got a passport request. Do I need to book an appointment before I go to submit?

Not mandatory.
Congratulations... We need more of this!

Education › Re: Guide To Writing Visa Sop (Statement of purpose). by SOPWriter(op): 6:34pm On Jul 23, 2019*

nicerichard05:
OK THANK. I AMA ACTUALLY A FIRST TIME APPLICANT AND I HAVE WRITTEN AN LOE. SHOULD I CHANGE THE TITLE TO SOP?
KINDLY SEND ME UR EMAIL. SO I CAN SEND U MY LOE

It depends on what you have written in your SOP. if it contains information that are supposed to be in your SOP then you can go ahead.
You can send me a PM via Nairaland.

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Education › Re: Guide To Writing Visa Sop (Statement of purpose). by SOPWriter(op): 6:23pm On Jul 23, 2019

SOPWriter:
The theme of a SOP is geared towards the first time visa applicants. In this case, the applicant will more likely talk about how the advance studies is going to complement past academics and how it will brighten up the future career scope. In addition, various other topics will be addressed such as capability to finance your studies and living cost, why particular program, why Canada, why particular institution, etc.

The theme of a LOE is geared more towards the re-applicants (whose visa application was earlier rejected). In this case, the applicant will start first-half of the letter by explaining what went wrong in previous applications and on what ground it was rejected. It should also include the way you have been able to address the previous problem in your preceding application.

@ nicerichard05, Kindly inform me if you have any more question.

Education › Re: Guide To Writing Visa Sop (Statement of purpose). by SOPWriter(op): 6:09pm On Jul 23, 2019*

nicerichard05:
what is the diff between SOP and LOE

The theme of a SOP is geared towards the first time visa applicants. In this case, the applicant will more likely talk about how the advance studies is going to complement past academics and how it will brighten up the future career scope. In addition, various other topics will be addressed such as capability to finance your studies and living cost, why particular program, why Canada, why particular institution, etc.

The theme of a LOE is geared more towards the re-applicants (whose visa application was earlier rejected). In this case, the applicant will start first-half of the letter by explaining what went wrong in previous applications and on what ground it was rejected. It should also include the way you have been able to address the previous problem in your preceding application.

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Travel › Re: Canadian Student Visa Thread Part 16 by SOPWriter: 6:02pm On Jul 23, 2019

alubarikalomo:
Hello my people, I seriously need your help the guru in the house. I got my refusal mail on 9th of july 2019. I applied for Bsc Health programme at university of Regina. But intend to reapply for a masters programme in Agric my major undergraduate focused area.

However I'm yet to receive a mail to go pick up my passport at vfs in lagos since I got my rejection mail because I applied through paper route. Please I need the gurus advice on how I can get back my international passport and how I can also repackage my application. I will appreciate all gurus contributions on my case.

Bellow is the my refusal mail. I look forward to your prompt reply. Thank you all.!

Final Decision Letter

Thank you for your interest in visiting Canada. After careful review of your student permit application and supporting documentation, I have determined that your application does not meet the requirements of the Immigration and Refugee Protection Act (IRPA) and Immigration and Refugee Protection Regulations (IRPR). I am refusing your application on the following grounds:

I am not satisfied that you will leave Canada at the end of your stay, as stipulated in subsection 216(1) of the IRPR, based on the purpose of your visit.

I am not satisfied that you will leave Canada at the end of your stay, as stipulated in subsection 216(1) of the IRPR, based on your current employment situation.

I am not satisfied that you will leave Canada at the end of your stay, as stipulated in subsection 216(1) of the IRPR, based on your personal assets and financial status.

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You are welcome to reapply if you feel that you can respond to these concerns and can demonstrate that your situation meets the requirements. All new applications must be accompanied by a new processing fee.

Sincerely,
IRCC Nairobi
High Commission of Canada to Kenya
www.cic.gc.ca

Sorry about your refusal.
Do you mind briefing us on your profile and submitted document?

Travel › Re: Canadian Student Visa Thread Part 16 by SOPWriter: 1:41pm On Jul 23, 2019

SOPWriter:
I want to tender my sincere apology to everyone who had sent me a PM but got no response, especially to those who needed urgent attention regarding their statement of purpose.
Please, do not see this act to be disdainful, as it was due to my busy schedule in the past three weeks, owing to one of our books we are about publishing in the US. Probably you noticed my less contribution to the thread, it is a confirmation that authenticate my honesty, notwithstanding, my mind never skipped your inquiry, therefore, I will be replying to all private messages today, also, will be reviewing all SOP sent in today for free.

All SOP received last Sunday had been reviewed and returned. In case your SOP was sent-in on the 21/07/2019 but didn't receive my acknowledgement, kindly inform me. I wish everyone an approval kind of good luck.

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Travel › Re: Canadian Student Visa Thread Part 16 by SOPWriter: 1:18pm On Jul 22, 2019

lansha2006:
Good morning house. Please I need an advise on the following
1. What is the age limit to access canadian study visa approval.
2. What is the most appropiate educational gap that the embassy considers ok
3. Is over 20years academic gap acceptable? However the gap is filled woth work experience.
4. What is the best advise for a 43year old with such an academic gap but with interest in canada study experience?
Thanks

1) There's no particular age limit stated by CIC, so far you have a genuine reason to further your education.
2) None is specified by CIC, you just need to clarify how your study gap was utilized (curriculum vitae will be cool).
3) Depends on your educational level, notwithstanding, your work experience will answer some questions.
4) Despite the gap length in your academic pursuit, Its not impossible, you just need to express this educational passion in your statement of purpose, and state the reasons you choose to further your education at this age.

Travel › Re: Canadian Student Visa Thread Part 16 by SOPWriter: 1:00pm On Jul 22, 2019

degxyflexy:
I sent you a PM bro

Responded.

Travel › Re: Canadian Student Visa Thread Part 16 by SOPWriter: 3:52pm On Jul 21, 2019*

I want to tender my sincere apology to everyone who had sent me a PM but got no response, especially to those who needed urgent attention regarding their statement of purpose.
Please, do not see this act to be disdainful, as it was due to my busy schedule in the past three weeks, owing to one of our books we are about publishing in the US. Probably you noticed my less contribution to the thread, it is a confirmation that authenticate my honesty, notwithstanding, my mind never skipped your inquiry, therefore, I will be replying to all private messages today, also, will be reviewing all SOP sent in today for free.

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Travel › Re: Canadian Student Visa Thread Part 16 by SOPWriter: 3:14pm On Jul 21, 2019

passionate2019:
Thanks mcobex.

The father would not be applying with them. What I forgot to state in my last message, was that they are all presently in Europe. The father is presently a diplomat attached to one of Nigeria embassy in Europe. I think he is only trying to establish the family pending when he is called back home.

The major issue, is how can the mother prepare a SOA/LOE to buttress her intention if she is only going to complete a 1 year diploma in Personal Support worker.

Or should she just go with the minor as a guardian a and get a longer visa duration, but not able to do anything while she is in Canada.

Follow mvobex's advise, especially now that the tuition had been paid, clarifying their interests and intentions. However, they should make their SOP straightforward and logical as possible.

Good Luck.

Travel › Re: Canadian Student Visa Thread Part 16 by SOPWriter: 3:10pm On Jul 21, 2019

mcobex:
She can go for the 1 year diploma, all she needs to say is that she is accompanying her children to Canada but also want to use that opportunity to upgrade herself by studying a 1 year diploma. Since she is applying from outside Nigeria and her husband is a diplomat (which is a very strong tie) I don't see her having issues. It should be a straightforward app.

100%

Travel › Re: Canadian Student Visa Thread Part 16 by SOPWriter: 6:59am On Jul 17, 2019

MsJu:
Approval Alart........
See what HE has done for me!!!!!

Matured applicant
College diploma
Change of career
Family application

Indeed there's a God that hears and answers prayers.

Congratulations....

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Travel › Re: Canadian Student Visa Thread Part 16 by SOPWriter: 6:54am On Jul 17, 2019

calebq:
Hello Guys, I hope everyone is having a good day, so I completed and paid for my Canadian student visa application online and they didn’t request I upload my medical or police report, who knows if they will eventually ask so I can start getting the documents sorted or they will not request for the medical and police report atall..

Please answer anyone. �� thanks

Medical could be done upfront but it is not essential, you can always be called for medicals when the time comes.

Police Clearance Certificate is not mandatory, however, it could be important to clarify and ascertain your credibility in terms of law abiding and criminality, notwithstanding, its absence in your application doesn't mean you will be rejected.

Good Luck.

Travel › Re: Canadian Student Visa Thread Part 16 by SOPWriter: 10:25pm On Jul 15, 2019

Ymin:
A P P R O V A L A L E R T !!!
Program: MSc Biosystem Engineering, University Of Manitoba(Fall,2019)

This is my 3rd Application after 2 previous refusals and I have been a silent reader on this forum:

Application timeline
Route – Paper, processed in Nairobi Kenya
Applied 15th May 2019
Biometrics not required as the previous one is valid. I was able to link it online on the 26th May and then Background check already running.
Eligibility review 12th June
Medical Request 14th June
Medical Done 17th June at IOM Ikeja
Medical Passed 20th June
BVL-July 9th
Approval- July 10th
Then I got a text message late evening on Thursday 11th July from VFS Lagos that Passport is ready for pick up.
Passport pick up 12th July 2019(Within 2mins at VFS counter in Lekki, which was the fastest of all the waiting process from the beginning of the application)

Documents submitted:

Academic Qualification

B.Eng Degree in Agricultural Engineering
Msc Admission letter
Transcript from the University
CV
O Level Cert

Proof of Financial Support

Personal statement of account comprising current account balance of N3M and Fixed deposit of N3M
Reference Letter from the Bank to support SOA
Letter of Sponsorship as Postgraduate research assistant with funding of CAD18,000 for each year of my study.
Tuition is CAD12, 400 but also got an IGSES Scholarship of CAD5, 400 which is usually applied on the Tuition to effectively reduce it to CAD7, 000

Other documents

IMM Forms
Passport photo
Police Clearance Certificate was submitted during the first application so didn’t bother doing it again.
NYSC certificate
A work ID, Promotion letters and introduction letter from work
Landed property with Survey and Deed Of Assignment
Marriage cert and kids birth cert
Wife's passport biodata page
SOP and LOE address previous refusals in details

A few of my success stories and testimonies:

I first applied for a study visa to Canada in April 2018 and was refused June same year with Purpose of Visit.
Second Application was in Feb 2019 and was refused the same month with Purpose of visit and travel history.

In both cases, I used the services of an agent and I applied with the M.eng (One year course based) admission letter
Shortly before my second application, I contacted Frankrobbn to assist proofread my SOP. Despite his kind assistance then with every effort put in place, I was still delayed. Then after my second refusal, I contacted Bracha who encouraged me not to give up and assisted with part of my SOP correction.

Sometimes in Jan this year, I had thought of switching from the Meng to Msc but getting supervisor was the issue. After a series of emails with usual "no funding, no space" responses, God finally came through for me and that marks the turning point in my Canada journey. I got a Prof willing to supervise me and provided the Stipend that fully covers my study around April and then I decided to reapply for the 3rd time in May 2019.

This time around,Qudkom came to my rescue. We talk extensively, exchange emails and I had to even travel to a neighboring city to meet this wonderful and kind guy that I didn't know from anywhere just to ensure I get it right this time. Anyway, no more agent as I am prepared to take all the advice of the gurus to do it by myself.

Few days to my submission date, I had to literally go through all of Franks past post to ensure all my T's have been crossed and I's dotted.

My special appreciation thus goes to Frankrobbn, Bracha and Qudkom who positively influenced my application in a way or the other
Every other guru: Makano, Justmellow and so many Monikers I may not mention. God bless your selfless efforts on this thread.

I need to also mention that I am advanced in age and I have never traveled outside Nigeria before and I also graduated university in 2006 with about 11 years working experience. Married with 2 kids but I decided to apply alone first.
This is to encourage someone not to really give up.

Nevertheless all human efforts, IT IS NOT OF HIM THAT WILLS, NOR OF HIM WHO RUNS, BUT OF GOD WHO SHOWS MERCY....

More Success stories to every applicant awaiting feedback from Schools or the Embassy!!!

Congratulations!
We need more of this kind of Alert. grin

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Travel › Re: Canadian Student Visa Thread Part 16 by SOPWriter: 10:23pm On Jul 15, 2019

ghabrhiel10:
Good day guys, please if I'm to travel to Canada with Lufthansa airline with lay-over in Frankfurt, Germany, do I need a transit visa?

No, transit Visa is not required!
Wish you the best of luck as you journey....

Travel › Re: Canadian Student Visa Thread Part 16 by SOPWriter: 2:18pm On Jun 30, 2019

ahiboilandgas:
Pls my bros student visa refuse for the 3 rd time ,tution deposit ,sponsors accounts 50 m balance ,his accounts 12 m pls what can be the problem the tution fees is 9000 k what else u dey want ?

Order your GCMS note; it will help to understand the reason for denial better.

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