nyc story and tanks for the episode

Hmmm.... O boy na u sure pass.... Carry go, i dey feel u

thanks for d update pal, can't wait for more plsss

Carry dey go..o, u too much

Thanks for the mention....

I owe you one....

Nice update though...

Nice one...glad you're back for good

Buzzboy:
Dedicated to bluette, bummybummy, mubarakyoung, joanee20, pami90, and Awesome55.
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Chapter 15
Blossom was sad. How could she be rejected by a guy she liked so much. Was it her fault that she had money or that her parents were wealthy? She thought. She remembered how she cried herself to sleep that night promising herself to forget about him. It worked for the first few hours of the next day but after sometime she started thinking about him again.
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Later in the evening her two friends came to visit her and keep her company. "I cant still believe that he told you no" Vera said after Blossom explained everything to them. "That poor fool, why are you still thinking about him? When you have Pablo all to yourself". "Vera, not everyone would be like you, you should learn to respect people's decisions" the third girl spoke up. "He may have his reasons for not wanting to be with Blossom, do you know how bad it is for a girl to be the breadwinner? "I have an uncle who was also in the same situation and now he is always trying to live up to expectations, borrowing this and that everytime. Please let the poor boy be". The quiet girl said. "Ify, that is why I like you, you are so quiet but when you talk, you talk sense, not like some girls I know (Blossom looks at Vera). "It is me you are yabbing abi? No P na, we go see. There is one new club at the island that I've been wanting us to check out, we can go tonight' Vera said. "Hope it has a nice cachet? Ify asked. "I no know wetin be cachet, but I sha know say the club na confirm club. Vera said. "So what do you say Blossom? Are you in or out? "Just give me time let me get ready and also make sure my siblings are asleep". Blossom said and went out of the room.
After a while they all entered Blossom's range rover and drove to the club.
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Tope was nervous. He could feel his hands and legs shaking. This was the first time that he would be performing to a large crowd that was not his church members. He had heard that a new club opened at the Island so he did not waste time in going to meet the owner begging for a chance to be a regular performer in the club. After much pleading and auditions, he was accepted but he was going to be tested today. The crowd in the club were not less than 160 people. The song he was going to sing was Mama by kiss daniel, though he has rehearsed it with the club band like a million times, he was still afraid that something might go wrong.
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"Ok, ok, ok, we have a new act in the building" the Mc's voice boomed from the speakers. "give it up for "T-Strings". The crowd cheered. Tope walked to the stage checking everything, making sure that it was in place, drums> check, background singers> check, keyboardist> check, bass gui...., wait, he closed his eyes and opened it wanting to be sure he was seeing well, sitting at the front area was Blossom, Vera and one girl he didn't know. "Why where they here? He tried to read Blossoms expression but she avoided his eyes. Anyways, he has to continue, the show must go on. He introduced himself and was about to start when he heard a loud sound "gbooaa". He turned and saw smoke coming out of the speakers, the sound engineers were running here and there, the crowd were streching their necks to catch a better glimpse of what was going on. "chai, what is this now" he though as his heart started beating fast, one of the sound engineer's ran to him and told him " Guy our speakers don burn o, na only one still dey work o, and e no fit carry any instrument o, you gats improvise'' he said and went back. Tope looked at the crowd and saw that few of them were feeling bored and most of them were frowning and that was when he knew that he was finished...
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Im so sorry guys, I was having issues with my phone, but it has all been rectified, so im gonna be updating frequently for real real this time. Meanwhile, what are your thoughts, corrections about the story, what do you think will happen in the next chapter.

Thank God. At last!.
Relaxing with pop corn and moi vanilla ice cream.

Awesome story bro... Waiting patiently for the next episode

I need to be part of this superlative nd interesting story, am moved already,.cried little for Tope oooo, pls where is the remaining chapters?

kongru:
guy why..more update pls...i am interested because u mentioned unilag

hhehehehehe...... Unilag awuuuuuuu

Buzzboy Brother abeg Mention me when you are about to post your next chapter. I'm feeling your story

niceone........ Next post

buzzboy ur story make sense die,,,weldon buzzboy ur story make sense die,,,weldon

I so much love this story. Guy u dey try big time. Patiently waiting for the episode.

Ur story dey make me fall in love

wao you write well. keep it up bro.

Guy you try o. I like your fiction story. the story is in course of making my day. like our writers like our artists/film directors.

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Dis's amazing. Keep it up o. More knowledge nd understanding 2 ur path in Jesus Name. Amen!

Buzzboy!I doof my cap for u ride on wid ya tori cus am blind folded in love already

Nice story bro, good creativity and good thought.
Thou the intro was dry dry you were able to change that
Also there was suspense in the intro but you later strayed away.
One of the important things you learn in writing such article is that for you to get full attention of readers is to put them in suspense, interesting and fun filled. To be sincere, I knew the next thing that would happen every time. You should work on that too. Then the part where the man slapped his wife, that's lame. Then the riches, too much
Thou it was a great piece of work, I really enjoyed reading it. Good luck.

lovely story

Pabliobellins ur right bro

Interesting.. Deriz always room for improvements

oya pull your trousers let me see your bum-bum'... [/quote]for university?

U re d don bro, u re just too good, i hope u re not copying from somewhere?

Ur write up is fascinating and irrestible. You just muddle a bit of scenes together without completing one. Nice one. Success to you

nice write up. Keep it coming. Don't forget to keep us on suspence. More grease to ur elbo.

I love your piece....try not to end it soon ...

Tope my guy, you did well.

I so much need a Blossom in my life ryt naw

Bro I'm loving the story, some observations are that we could easily kw where the story is headed and the suspense was too shortlived a lil bit more suspense and not really heading towards the expected direction could take you there. You don't necessarily have to make a happy ever after ending....... and we need some realistic rocky paths for the guy @Tope to follow ............ not trying to put ideas in ur head as u are the writer.................. my humble opinion

Buzzboy:
To all readers complaining that I ain't updating, Im sorry. But the problem is from you the readers, I am not getting any encouragement. Everyone just reads and pass, patiently and silently waiting for the next update, how can a story have close to 5000 readers and only four people comment regularly. I also want to see criticisms, your views about the story and the characters. The more the comments, the more I get motivated to update.

Sorry man.