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waxdude: huh...bat giniGood morning, bro. E kaaro gbogbo ile oo. #Sept ending tinz# |
speedyboi: Hmmmmmmmmm.....how I wish a lady will ask me too to come somewhere so she can spoil me*Laffs weekedly* Kikikikiki...four yor maind Lemme dayal @tpia's nomba four yu. ![]() |
These are mine: "You only live once; but when done the right way, once is enough. " ![]() "My best is yet to come" |
Agbako nile tete (Yoruba). That book sent shivers running down my spine when I read it then. ![]() |
StateOfMind: What?Lol. All izz well sha. |
StateOfMind: I'm fine..happy sunday to u too..So na Ib tinz abi? I no go dull at all. ![]() But OAU didn't mobilise my faculty again for Nov batch. ![]() |
StateOfMind: *sshhhhhh..will you lower your voice*...Am gud. How re u? Happy Sunday. |
StateOfMind: Lmao..Who describes someone as slimfit..My God! Shez here!!!! SOM, welcome. I hope to see more of you here. |
StateOfMind: Lmao..Who describes someone as slimfit..My God! Shez here!!!! SOM, welcome. I hope to see you more here. |
semid4lyfe: Uju, I checked your profile and I now understand why the guys are swooning over youSupermod to jasi! ![]() |
[quote author=sir.law]*wakes up from sleep* Who just made that animal noise?? Villageboi, must u continue doing as ur name suggests? **sees that its not villageboi but refuses to apologise to him** Bia, slowboi, stop disturbing my sleep. if u want to open a church, come to me later, i av many warehouses at Onitsha, Lagos, PH and Enugu. I repeat, dont disturb my sleep again...[/quote]Sa law, teik yor taim oh. Only mee af di rite to yap speedypikin. Ayaf commishund him in da worrk of da gospul. If yu goe to hiss shosh, yu winnot remein di same. Preise ye da lor!!!! ![]() |
Happy Sunday oo. # Sermon about to start # |
[quote author=Mynd_44]Super-mod [/quote]Lmao! ![]() |
semid4lyfe: Don't do chat rooms, just passing byCaught ya! Oga semid! Bawo ni ke? Why don't you do chat rooms? You no wan make we yarn on kentro level abi? Owo meji fun eeyan kan o! ![]() |
^^^^^^ Speedypikin, if I cash you ehn . And leaf ujsizzle allone, sheis allreddy takin. |
prof800: Eeewoooo....!Himpersonnation ke? Pruf, teik ya taim oh. Theese iz Sholey reloaded. I don'tt leave at Agege again; mai adresss his nau Banana Iceland. Ayaf step up. Mai lefu don cheinge. ![]() |
tony ayo: Sholay, thanx for ur comments, FYI - i want ppl that has watched pulp-fiction to know it's a rip off from the film, that's why i gave it a resemblance title and also said that i'm not much of a 'short' guy, and also got inspired by your work and villageboi's. I just want ppl to comment on the concept + dialogue etc whc u just did. For the caps locks, that was me trying to indicate my shots, others were necessary, like the sounds. Pls try to indicate for me to see whr i used plural instead of singler. Let's not argue abt characters being out of characters, but how do u mean that the hitmen changed from naija to Americana b'cos one spoke pidgin in one line? I can remember vividly, one of ur scripts i read, a character spoke yoruba in his/her line, what makes u to think that the hitmen were speaking americana? I understand what u're trying to do and i appreciate, pls clear me on those points i indicated, maybe others can help me to understand you too.Are you kidding me?! You want ppl to know you ripped off a whole scene from a movie without subtlety and dats why u gave it a similar title?! Accept that I caught you "red-handed" and didn't swallow your story as "original". Simple!I should indicate where you misused verbs meant for plural nouns? Okay oh. Here are excerpts from your script: *In the BACKGROUND, Ibiwari opens the door and two men ENTERS *Alero and Ruth APPROACHES and STANDS before Doug, Frank and Ibiwari. *Doug and Frank GIGGLES. There are many of them in your script bro. Do you get what I'm saying? Let me also indicate how your characters were out of character. Follow this dialogue with an open mind, an excerpt from your script: DOUG Mmh, this is good. (To Frank) Are you enjoying it man? Note the way Doug spoke. Which Nigerian adds "man" at the end of his statement? Even if he is a posh naija assassin, this one too much. FRANK The meatpie dey there. Bro, this is bad dialogue. How can my friend ask me a question in "correct" English and I would respond like this? Lemme assume Doug too be proper naija pesin and that "man" was just by the way. Check the following dialogue:DOUG I'm bleeping used to "what" Alero! How can someone whose partner-in-crime speaks pidgin be saying "bleeping"? And the conversation continues like this:ALERO He-he's my uncle. DOUG Your uncle? I see, and you bleeps your uncle, mmh? Which real naija assassin says "you bleeps"? Bro, it's not realistic! You've seen too much of Pulp fiction. ![]() Bro, you're right that I used a Yoruba line in my script but it made it more realistic. That Yoruba line already portrayed the character as a Yoruba man...and since his English is okay...then he is an educated Yoruba man. But he doesn't go about saying "bleeping", "you bleeps", "gonna", "wanna" 'cos he isn't an American or a Nigerian in diaspora. Bro, if you are open-minded in taking my criticisms, you will get my points. |
speedyboi: But I didn't say anything na...just an innocent kweshionYou shood nt annoi mee oh. I also haf a plott of landi at banana iceland, jost besaid Chief Sweetus Yuzedo and Reeta Dummynick. Ayam reach and moni plenty yafun yafun four mai pourcket. Ayam nefa bankropt. Take ya taim, speedypikin. |
speedyboi: Has Sholay gone bankrupt?* Warn yasef, speedypikin. |
VillageBoi: I have seen that thread almost as soon as it was posted.Okay then. |
VillageBoi: Thanks. Yes I filmed everything you see here... it's a selection of some of the projects I've worked on edited into a short showreel.Kudos to you bro. Nice editing. Your best is yet to come. |
Pls, check this thread out: https://www.nairaland.com/1454468/web-fiction-short-film-script |
This is nice! I like it. But pardon my ignorance Villageboi, was it that you filmed all those places ursef and then juxtaposed it to make this reel or ... ? Just explain to newbies like me abeg. And I love the music at the background. *Walks out of the thread humming it* |
Danhumprey: Please,how do I post the link of a thread on another thread? Urgent advice needed,pls.You copy the link from the search bar and paste it on the target thread. |
Wishing him quick recovery....and looking forward to another 'correct' naija flick. ![]() |
Beaurriful Dillish ![]() |
Hello Villagepikin "in speedyboi's words*. Have you seen this thread?https://www.nairaland.com/1454468/web-fiction-short-film-script |
diranfbi: What will it cost you to follow the link?Are you okay at all? Are you a learner? What will it cost you to post it ON NAIRALAND WITHOUT US VISITING YOUR SICK LINK !This thread needs to be closed asap. Nonsense ![]() |
Afam4eva: Has anyone seen the new Chiwetel Ejiofor movie where he played a slave? How was it?You mean "12 years a slave". I heard the movie received rave reviews. Looking forward to seeing it. |
^^^^^ Is that ibo? I'm lost. |
sushieater: (Y)I dnt get u. Just commending the series you recommended. |
xynerise: How are u my boy? Have you washed your disgusting mouth?Yes, I have washed my mouth, Mr antelope. The odour your mouth oozes can close this thread. You should clean it bfor you endanger lives here. Thanks. ![]() |
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, he should stick to his daredevil abeg...gudmornin prof,uj sizzle,mynd,sholay,speedyboi,villageboi,SOM,GOM...
I need it 
Lemme dayal @tpia's nomba four yu. 

...all will be well.
Pruf, teik ya taim oh. Theese iz Sholey reloaded. I don'tt leave at Agege again; mai adresss his nau Banana Iceland. Ayaf step up. Mai lefu don cheinge.
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