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[quote author=real-teflon]Putting a phone call to Patience ozokwuo to play Madam Q[/quote] Yes oooo. That woman must accept the script oo.

importexpert: Nice thread brother. You have written well. Keep it up

Tnx very much bro. Love your words of encouragement.

aprokomania: [color=#990000][/color] white rice and fried stew with
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.nice story but i feel the above is too nollywood. all they ever eat and drink is rice and juice. pisses me off personally.

Lolz. This is the funniest comment I've read on this thread. Thanks. In case of next tym, dem go chop akpu. tnx very much.

kayswag100: Nice one guy.

safe for a few grammatical errors I can't all point out, you are sound. Your use of English appears impressive.

... but don't you think putting your work here leaves it open to plagiarists? I have an experience with that sort of thing. ...

Thanks bro for your comment. I would try going through the script once again to correct such errors.

And for me to put any script on a public forum, I am not really keen on a personal use of it 'cos I see it as a way of improving one's craft.

Tnx for ur advice. Well-noted.

ekwurekwu: I love this, though predictable. The ending was fanstatic! Kudos!

Tnx bro. I appreciate.

Tayeni: thank you! Although I enjoyed reading it but I couldn't place a finger on what was wrong wt it until I read ur comment.......Mary not knwing madam Q was her mother unlaw is a hard sell......its not believable to me. They've lived in d same estate 4 atleast 4years and must hv had mutual friends or neighbors.......I'm not literary, I'm just a consumer yet I spotted that loophole.

Lol. Tnx for d comment. 4 miscarriages don't necessarily mean 4 years Besides, Madam Q knew what she was doing when she refused to identify wiv her 'daughter-in-law' 'cos she saw her as just a sacrificial lamb for d moment while a new wife wud be the real deal. Her priority was her son's interest.

Btw, it's an horror story...vampires too are never real.

lynx200: Nice one Sholay. Just keep on practicing your writing craft and you will get better. The story is good though it could be better.

Tnx very much bro. God bless.

sexytabhi: This quote summeried the whole story,so on point.

this touched me and I almost forgot that it wasn't real,getting all emotional for mary.

Tnx v much. I appreciate. Don't get too emotional oh...lol.

4C2215131: Classic Nollywood script. Nice effort though.

Tnx. I appreciate.

lanlokunomolara: guy,u ar too much... continue representin prof sholay

Lol. Tnx very much dear.

Megaflex: Nyc one Sholay

Tnx very much bro.

spade: Hmmmm... Not bad, Sholay.

Spade hw u dey? Lng tym. Tnx for d comment.

[quote author=god_of_music] I just heard Nigerian female soul singer, ASA's song played on MBC 2 movie promo 'THE LAKE HOUSE' wow!!! Naija don go far oo [/quote]That's nice.

No Qualms: Stopped raining roughly one hour in Akure. It started on Sunday afternoon, stopped in the night and resumed yesterday morning around 10a.m. It rained since then till about an hour ago.

Exactly.

VillageBoi: It is quite good, do watch it!

Tnx for validating it.

It's end tym

sexytabhi: Seriously it got me disappointed. Although it's been a while I watched nollywood movie,it is not becausei don't Like them but they can be so fake most times. Also the artistes are not classy at all. Even though we rate them so high.

Don't mind them. But pls, there are gud nollywood movies too that are being made. Incase you've nt seen 'Anchor Baby', try watching it. It would show you the hardwork some ppl put to realise their creative dreams. Our best is yet to come.

Afam4eva: It's just about the money for a lot of them

Though, I won't totally blame d actors sha 'cos they may av been looking for scripts but weren't getting any nd did what was available. At least, man go chop. Dats y I'm against being a full-time actor (wiv no other job as 'back up') as a newbie in this present nollywood except one doesn't have personal standards.

It's far from wrong to do a movie on the menace of ASUU strike but such sensitive topic should be done with care and focus on quality.

The title sef get as e be.

Why dem no call 'The Social Network' a name as lucid as 'Facebook' or 'Zuckerberg'? It still has to do wiv creativity though.

sexytabhi: Has nollywood gon cray? What's with this movie ASUU strike or is it some kind of joke?

Did you read my mind? 'Cos we just posted almost same tin. D thread dey vex me...I swear.

Damn! I'm still vexed wiv dis Nollywood 'ASUU strike' movie thread. It makes Nigerians dt dont do cinemas to think dats how 'boring and stewpeed' every nollywood movie is.

Oge Okoye sef fall my hand...

@ Villageboi and prof...Thank you very much. I appreciate.

speedyboi: I will be back tomorrow

Ok then.

mufex: This is absolutely perfect!!!! Nice one.

I appreciate your feedback bro. Thanks.

tunapa2009: Yes ooo... Everything should be done in moderation...

@tunapa...hw far? Just confirmed from Ikoku that agric isn't there. Though, I had my doubts before sha.

All izz well. Best wishes to ppl in oda depts.

peterDiamond: mr sholay my english cordination is not that bad...as usual just wanted you to show off your supposed love for your alma mater......oau peeps too dey form.

Bros...no vex abeg.

peterDiamond: these oau peeps ....is this desperation or anxiousness....much ado about mob number.....

It's 'anxiety'...not 'anxiousness'.

tunapa2009: The person should be on his way by Now... If it is true, please just post ur name, matric no and dept as fast as possible...(I will let u all know)

You get mouth joor. Make d pesin check for us too oh.

Demmylade: I'm not really on campus now, but I'll get there very early 2mao morning.

Abeg, help me also check if any dept in faculty of agric dey d acclaimed list. Tenk.

Demmylade: serious, now at d DSA. A friend just told me now

Eh eh...o ti sele oh.

Briareos: Sholay, do supply a pdf of this script na.

I would look into that, papa mod.

semid4lyfe: Dear Lord! Sholay, this is BRILLIANT. You absolutely killed it this time

Interesting, fascinating, riveting and I never saw any of it coming.

Also, important for me. . .it is "authentically african" (apology to Chimamanda) and relatable.

I still dey look for loopholes & wetin to criticize but I never see. Maybe the Title cos "Horror" depicts something scary, of intense fear or dread and I didn't feel any of those emotions reading this BUT that has no reflection on the story itself.

For me, this is the best script I've read on Nairaland. I'll limit my remaining comments to the score card

9/10



[size=4pt]N.B: At the appointed time, your ministry will be moved to the permanent site [/size]

I am humbled oo. Thanks, I'm glad you like it. So, d story wasn't 'horrific'? Okay na.

Lol@permanent site. *In Yuzedo's voice* Tenk