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naijacartoon:
just wanted to know if your active in script production, then am sure we can produce something together in 2d animation i.e a short cartoon film

I have been "dormant" for sometime due to a very tight schedule but I write when the inspiration is strong and persistent.

naijacartoon:
It is niece to see a script structured correctly, perhaps this may not be the first draft but all the same, keep it up

Thanks very much.

These are great.

vaxx:
teni teni takisa ni ta tan...meaning whatever belong to you is trully yours...

I am Africa , a trully black man from a black mother... I have every right to honour black race... If a white man deem it fit to also honour her race let him go ahead.......I do not support racism bro....

What is this one saying?

Why not all mothers (or Nigerian mothers if you are being specific) ?

If a white person created a similar thread on a worldwide forum, it will be seen as racism.

shutupareyouGOD:
Remember when I created this thread. ...Thanks know you Lord for changing my story.

Congrats.

Ini looks superb.

The lady is quite pretty I must say.

This is heartbreaking.

The story of John the beloved.

The story of Elijah.

The story of Moses & the people of Israel.

The story of Jesus Christ.

Joseph Benjamin

skylane:
I am done with Naija babes tei tei,their mentality too low(majority)

It is well.

NollywoodNews24:
This guy is a talent

I am humbled.


Also try reading this: https://www.nairaland.com/3736835/mothers-heart-short-film-script

ChiClassic:
nice story line

Thanks.

nanaiza:
I just got around to reading this.
As always you blow me away
Love it.
Love everyone's comments and contributions too.
Well done.

Thank you very much.

Please help me beg lalasticlala to take this to the frontpage. If it is Tonto Dike or Mercy Aigbe story now or a snake was killed, there wouldn't be the need for a plea.

emyibe:
if its true then its IVF! we know everything nah

So?

Congrats jare Jenifa.

stanway:
saving a life can never be a sin,whether through blood donation,kidney transplant and what have you,,,you will never know the importance of donation until you are in critical need of it

Well said.

I really love the message of the script! And you really tried in capturing the realism of the environment.

Yet, I found some parts of the dialogue too...like you were making efforts to tell the audience some things (like the effects of domestic violence on the child) by using Rose & Amina's words (which isn't very bad either) but remember film is more of a visual medium. And i just didn't buy the 'lecture' from Aproko neighours like Rose & Amina. What makes a script stand out more is how it captures or tells the story; it's not always about the story itself most times (especially on the world stage). So, you can always work more on how you tell the story with scenes & dialogue.

Good effort.

So...what happens to the men that slept with an underaged girl?

CharlyG1:
Oh yes.. I have seen it and i will reply you tonight.

But, i have seen previous PM's from you and have replied those, it keeps telling me that since i'm not connected to you i will need to reply the mail.
It keeps recurring. What could be the issue?

I have replied your email bro. Thanks.

CharlyG1:
Thank you sholay.

Been a while

More grace to you too. May God beautify and enrich your life with milk and honey, just like the promised land.

Remain blessed

Thanks bro. Tried sending you a PM.

Happy Birthday CharlyG1. More grace unto you in Jesus name.

*Space booked*

Will read soon.

An old film: "Thunderbolt: Magun".

This is a classic.

Thumbs up NSG.

Brimmie:
**Reading

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Modified: Done Reading.

BrB to Comment.

Still waiting for your comment oo.

What I tooknow from the video is that she stood for her fellow Nigerian. Chikena

lalasticlala:
OP, you didn't give credit to the person behind the makeup effect.

Oga, abeg put my short film script titled 'My Mother's Heart' on frontpage naa. I have seen worse threads on frontpage for crying out loud.

It's either they are sworn enemies or best friends. This one pass ordinary eye.

@lalasticlala

Dyoungstar:
Please, next time do correct color balancing on your camera and grade your pictures correctly.

And the acting and editing too...