₦airaland Forum

LemuelIrabor:
Thanks, DanseMacabre.


PS: Do hashtags work on Nairaland?

I don't think so man.

Done. Won't say much by way of criticism, since the story itself is almost seamless, and the 'miserly' errors won't stand an edit, even by you.


Funnily, I just need minute clarifications on the characters. Mart speaks flawless English, I can relate with that, but some of his words might be a tad obtuse, especially when conversing. I can totally relate with him though, I mean he'd certainly know these words enough to use in his journal, but I think slightly 'simpler' synonyms could accentuate his dialogues better.


Then of course I'm interested in knowing how sixteen (hope I'm right) -year old Martha can cook such delicious meals that have aroused my appetite, even after gorging myself tonight.


Theresa is coquettish, agreed, but isn't getting Mart's number on the first day of school too 'libertine' for a young Nigerian girl her age, who's just getting her first tastes of the opposite sex? I would think she isn't that liberated yet to be so forward.



Then:
Can 'Lol' be used verbally while speaking?

Wonder how the earlier mention(s) eluded me.

Just read this instalment, and it's almost error-free, both grammatically and syntatically; and that's impressive - almost a first on here. Will check out the earlier posts.



Good one bro.