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Ohibenemma:
Racealfst: nice story telling (once you look past the fact it's unedited yet), but the two main characters So FAR haven't been REAL. On one hand, the pastor's means of beating Ademide into shape has appeared kinda childish and unpastoral; Ademide's attitude towards him, on the other hand, has been recklessly silly, disrespectful and mannerless. If for nothing, the fact that he's her pastor and her family's too should have made her more respectful. Her attitude is the type stalkers usually get, not a pastor who had no untoward intentions towards her in the first place.

And it would have appeared exaggerated even to a stalker.

Enjoying the story though. Recent updates have been quite short.

Centino:
Not to worry malificent, I've been working all week on the situation that will have us have CONSTANT midweek updates from next week God willing. This may be the last Wednesday you don't see my troops

Centino:
Of course you are. I love you too

Centino:
I go tell you?

Centino:
I go tell you?

KpagoGIN:
Achike had to ejaculate during the heat of passion that's the criteria of the ritual, cause at that moment just before and during ejaculation the soul opens up (pure energy) making it pretty easy to drain one's essence. Escaping that moment was what pissed agbonifineboy to try drilling the soul from the back door, all what Achike has to do is to lock up and not flow with the rhythm [b]hopefully that brother of his comes to his rescue[/b].

KpagoGIN:
Achike had to ejaculate during the heat of passion that's the criteria of the ritual, cause at that moment just before and during ejaculation the soul opens up (pure energy) making it pretty easy to drain one's essence. Escaping that moment was what pissed agbonifineboy to try drilling the soul from the back door, all what Achike has to do is to lock up and not flow with the rhythm [b]hopefully that brother of his comes to his rescue[/b].