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Janji:Ok I that's cleared it up for me thanks. ![]() The poem you read was my first attempt at poetry and I wanted to get feedback to see if I'm any good at it. I was very inspired reading peoples work on this forum and I've studied it but never written my own. I think sharing our work would be very helpful thanks. ![]() |
fekuti:Everyones entitled to live their lives the way they want. Don't complain ![]() |
desireoge:Not always, a lot of the time beautiful girls can go for ugly guys as long as they have something else to offer like fame, money etc. Example: Russel Simmons is not exactly in his prime in terms of looks, but still manages to date beautiful women. Same goes for Hugh Hefner and a few I won't mention. ![]() |
I like your originality and the concept. I can clearly see the predicamnt he's in but also does it change him in anyway or does he continue to be a player. Janji:From this I thought he had stopped but wasn't sure? ![]() |
StephenP:Yeah that one did it for me too Your words are gold Stephen and extremely insightful. ![]() |
Thanks for your input, so you think it should be longer? I'll read yours 2 ![]() |
[center]This Love[/center] [center]My smile, he calls it his only sunrise, Never will it set, in his eyes. My tears, diamonds, he could never prize, Where is this love? My lover's touch, he strokes to please, Evokes tremors like Autumns own warm breeze, While a sensual sigh, escapes my lips with ease, Where is this love? To heal fragmented memories, split, torn, Pierced by life's callous thorn. Bruised by flesh and with a spirit so worn, Where is this love? His words fabricate the blanket for my aching soul To rest, while our days turn old, He is the womb from a world so cold, Where is this love? If there be this love on earth, No journey could exceed it's worth To fill this void and replenish my dearth, Tell me, where is this love?[/center] (Constructive criticism would be great) ![]() |
Sisikill:You and me both sisikill ![]() |
3) "It's just a game." I don't like fanatics ![]() 5) "I sound like my mom." Guy's tend to dislike their mothers-in-law, quite frankly I don't want to sound like my mum either ![]() 6) "I just want to be friends." What's wrong with that? ![]() 9) "Do you think she's pretty?" I don't care if he thinks another women's pretty there are tons of em out there anyway, just as long as he thinks i'm beautiful ![]() |
[quote author=Negro_Ntns link=topic=146212.msg2468574#msg2468574 date=1215363189]As much as we do to make you all happy and content, you still criticize how we look. Be gracious and say what you admire in us. You know we love you all. You all are the beast of all the creatures of God.[/quote]I just hope that was a typo Negro Ntns ![]() |
lucabrasi:Hah, no o, i said when guys focus on outer beauty first women feel the need to appeal to them in that way, hence the make-up, clothes etc. It's not as important but it is still part of being beautiful. I understand a man not wanting an ugly wife but as long as her inner virtues and good qualities are the reason you are with her then that's ok. I mean if a woman is physically stunning but you can't stand the way she behaves it doesn't make sense to be wit them rite? ![]() |
lucabrasi:Because dey kno it's what men look at first. You've all said that unattractive women don't get attention no matter how nice a person she may be, so why won't they want to look good? I don't agree with spending loads of money on it tho, if it takes that much effort don't bother. ![]() |
I'm very impressed, onyinye & rotimy, i feel you , keep em coming please ![]() |
mmmhhh now i'm curious ![]() |
OMG!! That was NICE. I like. Please, could we have some more Stephen ![]() |
freedom |
If i'm enjoying da convo and dey want me 2 w8 den, 2 or 3 mins. If dey take 2 long, i'll w8 for dem 2 call back. Still, I've neva been put on hold b4 so ![]() |
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All this will do is add to his already over inflated ego. Jay-Hova my ass ![]() |
zeal500:I agree. Just leave the person if you know you can't be faithful. Better to just tell them it won't work out and go your seperate ways than hurt them for no reason. ![]() If it's one of those "I got caught up in the moment things" i don't take that as an excuse. If your conscience doesn't tell you to stop, then your partner can't mean that much to u. ![]() |
agwoko:Will people think b4 they post? "The woman was made of a rib out of the side of Adam; not made out of his head to rule over him, nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him, but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be beloved." My 2 cents ![]() |
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i said when guys focus on outer beauty first women feel the need to appeal to them in that way, hence the make-up, clothes etc. It's not as important but it is still part of being beautiful. I understand a man not wanting an ugly wife but as long as her inner virtues and good qualities are the reason you are with her then that's ok. I mean if a woman is physically stunning but you can't stand the way she behaves it doesn't make sense to be wit them rite?