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Poems For ReviewRe: About A Player Or Players by syren: 9:03pm On Jul 07, 2008
Janji:
the concept is that a player is glorified in his own eyes
but the end of it is that, he is diggin his own grave
even if he escapes on earth, what about heaven
Its actually for players who have stopped playing and those who are still in it
its like choice

i hope we could build a bridge and share our poems on a page
its your call
originality and concept, thanks

i know we both have a lot to offer
looking forward to a reply
Ok I that's cleared it up for me thanks. grin

The poem you read was my first attempt at poetry and I wanted to get feedback to see if I'm any good at it. I was very inspired reading peoples work on this forum and I've studied it but never written my own. I think sharing our work would be very helpful thanks. cheesy
RomanceRe: The Professional Virgin by syren: 8:10pm On Jul 07, 2008
fekuti:
The professional virgin, are you one?

Plenty girls make a sanctity out of the fact that they're "saving" themselves until marriage.
There is nothing obscure about saving sex for marriage, but it's a different issue entirely to encounter someone who sees sex as a commodity to be bartered for a f-ucking wedding ring.

I'll advise you men to leave these kind babes alone. They're looking for guys so special that you'll never live up to their clouded delusions.
Everyones entitled to live their lives the way they want. Don't complain tongue
RomanceRe: Correct chics go 4 clean guys by syren: 7:42pm On Jul 07, 2008
desireoge:
Why is it that Beautiful gals go 4 handsome guys?
If I'm 2 say, I'm of d opinion that fine gals shld get glued wit ugly guys, because doing so'll help reduce d number of ugly kids we produce in this country. My beautiful friend has rejected quite a no of guys 4 marriage wit d excuse that they re not handsome. Can I read your views 2 enable me advice her beter
Not always, a lot of the time beautiful girls can go for ugly guys as long as they have something else to offer like fame, money etc. Example: Russel Simmons is not exactly in his prime in terms of looks, but still manages to date beautiful women. Same goes for Hugh Hefner and a few I won't mention.  grin cool
Poems For ReviewRe: About A Player Or Players by syren: 7:34pm On Jul 07, 2008
I like your originality and the concept. I can clearly see the predicamnt he's in but also does it change him in anyway or does he continue to be a player.

Janji:
A retard even if I claim that from the game, I am retired
From this I thought he had stopped but wasn't sure? wink
Poems For ReviewRe: I Am Nigeria by syren: 7:21pm On Jul 07, 2008
StephenP:
And has become a concubine of a rich man who taps her oil
Drains her bare and leaves none to provide for her own soil
Yeah that one did it for me too grin Your words are gold Stephen and extremely insightful.   wink grin
Poems For ReviewRe: This Love? (comments needed) by syren(op): 7:01pm On Jul 07, 2008
Thanks for your input, so you think it should be longer?

I'll read yours 2 grin
Poems For ReviewThis Love? (comments needed) by syren(op): 5:38pm On Jul 07, 2008
[center]This Love[/center]

[center]My smile, he calls it his only sunrise,
Never will it set, in his eyes.
My tears, diamonds, he could never prize,
Where is this love?

My lover's touch, he strokes to please,
Evokes tremors like Autumns own warm breeze,
While a sensual sigh, escapes my lips with ease,
Where is this love?

To heal fragmented memories, split, torn,
Pierced by life's callous thorn.
Bruised by flesh and with a spirit so worn,
Where is this love?

His words fabricate the blanket for my aching soul
To rest, while our days turn old,
He is the womb from a world so cold,
Where is this love?

If there be this love on earth,
No journey could exceed it's worth
To fill this void and replenish my dearth,
Tell me, where is this love?[/center]


(Constructive criticism would be great)  grin
RomanceRe: Things Women Say That Drive Men Nuts. . . Nuttier Than A Fruitcake by syren: 8:27pm On Jul 06, 2008
Sisikill:
For #3 - Why for goodness sake, why? I don't think I'll ever understand that one. . . Ever!
You and me both sisikill cool
RomanceRe: Things Women Say That Drive Men Nuts. . . Nuttier Than A Fruitcake by syren: 8:00pm On Jul 06, 2008
3) "It's just a game."
I don't like fanatics cool

5) "I sound like my mom."
Guy's tend to dislike their mothers-in-law, quite frankly I don't want to sound like my mum either  grin

6) "I just want to be friends."
What's wrong with that?  cool


9) "Do you think she's pretty?"

I don't care if he thinks another women's pretty there are tons of em out there anyway, just as long as he thinks i'm beautiful  grin
RomanceRe: Attention! Ladies. What Physical Features Can't You Stand In Men. by syren: 7:02pm On Jul 06, 2008
[quote author=Negro_Ntns link=topic=146212.msg2468574#msg2468574 date=1215363189]As much as we do to make you all happy and content, you still criticize how we look. Be gracious and say what you admire in us. You know we love you all. You all are the beast of all the creatures of God.[/quote]I just hope that was a typo Negro Ntns undecided cool
RomanceRe: content deleted by syren: 11:34pm On Jul 05, 2008
lucabrasi:
so u agree outer beauty is as important as the virture of a girl/lady then?
Hah, no o, huh i said when guys focus on outer beauty first women feel the need to appeal to them in that way, hence the make-up, clothes etc. It's not as important but it is still part of being beautiful. I understand a man not wanting an ugly wife but as long as her inner virtues and good qualities are the reason you are with her then that's ok. I mean if a woman is physically stunning but you can't stand the way she behaves it doesn't make sense to be wit them rite? wink
RomanceRe: content deleted by syren: 10:53pm On Jul 05, 2008
lucabrasi:
yes i do,lets be honest here and stop kidding ourselves why dyu girls spend so much on make ups,hairstyles,clothes e.t.c if you believe inner beuty is more important?people just say it because its what the world wants to hear,girls are the most guilty of this,one one hand if a girl puts on a tiny weight or just one wrinkle she starts getting worried but if she has a fat girlfriend asks her opinion if she s fat they ll be like "no girl you r perfect" ;Dspot on
Because dey kno it's what men look at first. You've all said that unattractive women don't get attention no matter how nice a person she may be, so why won't they want to look good? I don't agree with spending loads of money on it tho, if it takes that much effort don't bother. cool
Poems For ReviewRe: The Confessions Of A Love Slave Pt.1 by syren: 10:34pm On Jul 05, 2008
I'm very impressed, onyinye & rotimy, i feel you , keep em coming please grin
Poems For ReviewRe: Amazing by syren: 10:20pm On Jul 05, 2008
mmmhhh now i'm curious cool
Poems For ReviewRe: Amazing by syren: 9:03pm On Jul 05, 2008
OMG!! That was NICE. I like. grin Please, could we have some more Stephen grin
Forum GamesRe: One-word Association by syren: 6:08pm On Jul 05, 2008
freedom
RomanceRe: How Long Is Too Long To Be Kept On Hold? by syren: 5:55pm On Jul 05, 2008
If i'm enjoying da convo and dey want me 2 w8 den, 2 or 3 mins. If dey take 2 long, i'll w8 for dem 2 call back. Still, I've neva been put on hold b4 so undecided grin cool
Forum GamesRe: One-word Association by syren: 12:13pm On Jul 05, 2008
lips kiss
Music/RadioRe: Jay Z In Nigeria by syren: 10:34pm On Jul 04, 2008
All this will do is add to his already over inflated ego. Jay-Hova my ass tongue cool
RomanceRe: Is It True:that A Woman Needs A Reason To Cheat, While A Man Just Needs A Woman? by syren: 7:37pm On Jul 04, 2008
zeal500:
IF YOU HAVE A PARTNER YOU SHOULD BE FAITHFULL TO HIM/HER. IF YOU ARE TIRED AND KNOW THAT YOU CANNOT STAY OR ZIP UP YOU BETTER QUIT AND HIT THE ROAD THAN CHEAT.
FOR ALL I CARE THERE IS NOT JUSTIFICATION TO CHEAT BE IT A GUY OR LADY
I agree. Just leave the person if you know you can't be faithful. Better to just tell them it won't work out and go your seperate ways than hurt them for no reason.  cry  grin

If it's one of those "I got caught up in the moment things" i don't take that as an excuse. If your conscience doesn't tell you to stop, then your partner can't mean that much to u. cool
RomanceRe: The Sexes Are Equal: Not The Same Abilities, But Equal Weight! by syren: 6:32pm On Jul 04, 2008
agwoko:
How can we b equal when u were made from men.
Will people think b4 they post?

"The woman was made of a rib out of the side of Adam; not made out of his head to rule over him, nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him, but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be beloved."

My 2 cents cool

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