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Poems For ReviewSojourning Mind by timpaker(op):
[b]The Godfather Muse.

Black and white tux
Well fitted,
Tilted fedora hat
Resting on scanty hair,
Puffing,
Smoking,
Coughing,
Pointing,
Disloyalty sways
No mercy.

Flammable Vodka
Caresses opaque copita glass,
Burnt parejos
Buried in a golden ash tray,
Burning,
Sipping,
Slurping,
Exhaling,
Belching,
The price for snitching my pay
Is death by dismemberment.

Stainless blade
Nicely sharpened,
Titanium glock
Death's teeth and mouth gladden,
Shooting,
Cutting,
Squirting,
Fountain of blood gushing,
When crossing that path,
Death is never enough!

Domestic beasts
Scampering body parts on the floor,
Greed is like Oliver -
Hungering for more,
Barking,
Fighting,
Laughing,
Godfather doesn't forget
He whose body he gored.

Gunshots echoed
Over hungry beasts,
Fear feeds
Through his fealty feast,
Panting,
Sitting,
Smiting,
One more guest, Silence - joined
The dinner at least.

Money piled in black boxes
An exchange for dead body parts
Counting,
Stashing,
Packing,
He who must do crime
Must first sell his heart.[/b]
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FoodRe: Myths About Alcohol by timpaker(m): 3:32pm On Mar 17, 2015
grin
PropertiesRe: Pics: Which Of These Nigeria Banks Has The Finest Building by timpaker(m): 4:43pm On Mar 10, 2015
That FCMB building na shop?
PoliticsRe: Ishaya Dare Akau Replace Agwai As SURE-P Chairman with immediate effect by timpaker(m): 2:54pm On Mar 10, 2015
I saw that coming....
CelebritiesRe: Yemi Alade Live From France. Her Hairstyle Though :) by timpaker(m): 11:53am On Mar 03, 2015
Is Phyno still in charge of that 'area'?
Poems For ReviewRe: Alas! The World Became An Empty Drum by timpaker(m): 2:14pm On Mar 02, 2015
Heheheheheeheh.. I don't know but I find this poem hilarious grin
The piece is highly picturesque and captivating.

OMA4U, may your ink never run dry... cool
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CelebritiesRe: Mercy Johnson And Husband Prince Okojie's Hot Picture by timpaker(m): 5:41pm On Feb 26, 2015
darlenese:
abeg she's fine jor, Una too dry find flaws, afterall ur own babe get two left leg
.
No vex... But where is your humour? cheesy
Poems For ReviewRe: Help Decipher This Poem by timpaker(m): 1:57pm On Feb 26, 2015
yuzjet:
How abt we make it an ultimate search grand finale and see who will get the treasure first? huh
As you type, I am currently heading to the true spot for the treasure. Don't worry, I won't be greedy, you'll get a fair share when I return. Just wish me luck.
CelebritiesRe: Mercy Johnson And Husband Prince Okojie's Hot Picture by timpaker(m): 12:16pm On Feb 26, 2015
That 'Christian Mother' hand though grin
TV/MoviesRe: What Series Are You Watching Now? Part 2 by timpaker(m): 12:12pm On Feb 26, 2015
DrDre1:
Vikings is back already smiley Garfield must be laughing at u grin
Really? I'm quite outdated. Jheez!!! Download mode activated... shocked

Forget Garfield jare... The dude is lazy. grin
Poems For ReviewRe: Help Decipher This Poem by timpaker(m):
JigsawKillah:
Fenn's poem

As I have gone alone in there
And with my treasures bold,
I can keep my secret where,
And hint of riches new and old. (The journey to hide his treasure)

Begin it where warm waters halt (A lake near a rock or mountain, I guess)
And take it in the canyon down,
Not far, but too far to walk.
Put in below the home of Brown. (Underneath the lake surrounding a mountain... Note: there is a place called Brown mountain near a lake in USA)

From there it's no place for the meek, (It is a tough place)
The end is ever drawing nigh; (Cuz the river is quite rocky)
There'll be no paddle up your creek, (You gats get liver to paddle it.....)
Just heavy loads and water high. (Cus it is a Stand Up Paddle {SUP}) that leads to a waterfall)

If you've been wise and found the blaze, (Immediately you find the waterfall,....)
Look quickly down, your quest to cease, (Look down... i.e. at the edge might kill you)
But tarry scant with marvel gaze, (But if you wait at the edge you'll see it)
Just take the chest and go in peace. (Take it and go)

So why is it that I must go
And leave my trove for all to seek?
The answer I already know,
I've done it tired, and now I'm weak.

So hear me all and listen good,
Your effort will be worth the cold.
If you are brave and in the wood
I give you title to the gold
I think I'm gonna take the next flight to America.... I think I know where the treasure is...... Who's coming with me? your job is to take photograph of me lifting the treasure. Hhehehehheh
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TV/MoviesRe: What Series Are You Watching Now? Part 2 by timpaker(m): 11:02am On Feb 26, 2015
DrDre1:
Hmm...be careful what u wish for. Are u sure u want to dive in deep? Ok, try Black Sails, Vikings and Reign. The three mix horse riding, sword fights, twists and turns well. Vikings is quite gory if u don't mind though but it's a very nice production. Don't try the 3 at the same time or esle u may be pinned down more than u wished for. I won't be responsible if ur boss starts calling u to find out where u are late on monday morning grin
I have seen Vikings and I'm patiently waiting for the next season to be released later in the year. cool

However, Black Sails and Reign would keep me company over the weekend as I have ordered them from Dan Ibro's shop. grin I promise not to watch them all at the same time cuz I love my job..... and mondays, God knows I hate that day more than Garfield. angry
TV/MoviesRe: What Series Are You Watching Now? Part 2 by timpaker(m): 3:39pm On Feb 25, 2015
DrDre1:
Cheer up man. Don't be sad. Move on to something else. There quite a couple of interesting shows that'd make u forget about Atlantis in no time smiley
Please reference some to me bro. The weekend is fast coming and I need enough of it to sustain me and pin me and home embarassed.
TV/MoviesRe: What Series Are You Watching Now? Part 2 by timpaker(m): 12:33pm On Feb 25, 2015
Atlantis sad
FamilyRe: Nigerian Parents Give Birth To White Baby (Photos) by timpaker(m): 11:55am On Feb 25, 2015
Neighbours..... smh
Poems For ReviewRe: Can You Write A Peom Using Titles Of Books And Poems by timpaker(m):
[b]
Basking under a huge "anthill of the savanna"
Wondering why "Jame hardly chase me" no more,
In teed up field flanked with black dusty bandanna
Where we catch tiger-grasshoppers hopping the grassy floor.

He toed "the new man" path, so he alleged to his ploy,
Heaving in contrite friendliness that I 'kerosined'
His soul; how can it be? "The beatification of area boy"
I know have sinned more than the devil has sinned.

They said he's gone in "flying colours" in the souring sky
But I know him as a chameleon-butterfly wafting around "purples hibiscus"...
His absence has made me walk around like a black rainbow under squinting eyes
With my name on their dried lips as a discussion to discuss...

It’s getting late, as the sky has bitten off "half of the yellow sun".
James was my pal of habitual temperament
A fungi fun-guy with adventurous bag of fun.
Now it tickles me with tinges of attention for our "estrangement".

I cried till my tears washed off his blemished memory
In me; then dust myself to the “famished road”
Having accepted his parting as the "tragedy of victory"
That he desired, then hopped home like a disabled toad.
[/b]
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Poems For ReviewRe: Madonna, Madonna [poem - Plz Review This] by timpaker(m): 3:37pm On Feb 20, 2015
Hi Boss,

Your poem is awesome.

Your poem is almost similar to the poetry form of a Kyrielle
Your lines are in rhyming couplets or quatrains and has a refrain.

Your personification in line 3, stanza one is mind-blowing.


Note: The refrain of line 2 in your last stanza is what made me use the word "almost".



All in all, bro, you did a very good job.



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Poems For ReviewRe: A Poem- In The Valley Between by timpaker(m): 2:57pm On Feb 20, 2015
betty88:
In the valley between
Naked soul met the sing song
As the mountain cross seven artezuma's temples
In search of Montezuma' s prize possession

In the valley between,
Where Thor's hammar clamps the sacred temple of blood to thunder
Only to comprehend such great love

In the sacred temple
That strong bond unite
So different and so unlike rivers
Rivers of Osun and Oyo
To flow down stream yonder
Entwine by the prietess call love
In the valley between.
Hmmm.... Nice poem madam but wait ...

Montezuma? Abeg explain that word to me because the Montezuma I know is a chocolate bar in UK, an act in a cartoon that wears funny headgear cap and a place in Colorado.

Love poem gives me the sdv jdfhdfbsdjvndsvisdv cheesy
Poems For ReviewRe: Smoking Fish. by timpaker(m): 2:46pm On Feb 20, 2015
[quote author=Olusharp post=30837085][/quote]cheesy

Boss, is this a "drabble"
Poems For ReviewRe: The Jezebel Of Our Time by timpaker(m): 2:40pm On Feb 20, 2015
I think i am in love with this Jezebel of our time oooo. grin

Great piece from a great dude....
grin
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LiteratureRe: Nairaland Poetry Club Chatroom. by timpaker(m): 12:01pm On Feb 17, 2015
joseph1832:
Timpaker! I believe so too. The poem speaks volume. It was locked because Ishilove said the moniker missghost is a troll!.

To me the reason given by her reeks of beef!. I wonder why people who don't even understand poetry will be given the key to moderate and speak over things they understand not!.
Well, i'm not aware
TV/MoviesRe: Game Of Thrones Discussion (Beware Of Spoilers) by timpaker(m): 12:00pm On Feb 17, 2015
Kaycee7:
All men (boss) must die. angry
Not my darling actors
TV/MoviesRe: Game Of Thrones Discussion (Beware Of Spoilers) by timpaker(m): 4:02pm On Feb 16, 2015
I can't wait for GoT5.
Days should journey into weeks and month for the D-day abeg.


And they should remember............. no more killing of my favourite characters abeg. I lost so many in season 4.
Poems For ReviewRe: Nairaland Poetry Club Assignments Comments Thread by timpaker(m): 2:37pm On Feb 16, 2015
joseph1832:
Can do, will do. This is the link. www.nairaland.com/2149190/romance-cold-touch-death
That poem (a dramatic monologue) na die! Quite abstract if you ask me. I wonder why it was locked for troll.

Abeg lets moves our discussions here:https://www.nairaland.com/2011764/nairaland-poetry-club-chatroom/11
Poems For ReviewRe: Nairaland Poetry Club Assignments Comments Thread by timpaker(m): 2:22pm On Feb 16, 2015
joseph1832:
I will, have many in my archive. Am working on one now. Its titled An Ode To Death. By the way, did you read missghost poem?.

Great title. Please tag me when you post it.

Nope. Please send me the link to the poem.
Poems For ReviewRe: Nairaland Poetry Club Assignments Comments Thread by timpaker(m): 2:15pm On Feb 16, 2015
joseph1832:
Oh yea?
please drop a poem, boss. cool
Poems For ReviewRe: Nairaland Poetry Club Assignments Comments Thread by timpaker(m): 1:58pm On Feb 16, 2015
joseph1832:
I miss this thread so much!!!.
The thread is back!
Poems For ReviewRe: Echoes Of My Voice by timpaker(m): 11:04am On Feb 16, 2015
Erm... Where is my dictionary cool

Each line had me skimming through my dictionary.

Nice poem bro. I wish I could write as good as you do. Walahi
Poems For ReviewRe: Murder Of Violencehood by timpaker(m): 10:57am On Feb 16, 2015
I'm speechless. cool
Poems For ReviewRe: My Poetic View About Val by timpaker(m): 10:55am On Feb 16, 2015
Great piece bro.
keep it up [s](but no let all these valentinos catch you sha)[/s] grin
LiteratureRe: Fun Time: Drop An English Word That Will Make Someone Check The Dictionary by timpaker(m): 10:51am On Feb 16, 2015
OMA4U:
Oga o. Larrysun no go kill person.

These are my few words:

Schadenfreude
Phantasmagoria
Plenitude
Scintillate
adactylous

Tag: Timpaker
Pyre
Pulchritude
Agoraphobia grin

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