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Hmm... I love that other guy's black 'kick' ![]() |
Mortiple: Lol @ "Jew men" ![]() |
If this had happened in Nigeria I'm sure people would tag it extremism/ fanaticism and the gleeful bashing of islam would be spewed. |
Hmmm... If someone had told me that the Poems for Review Section would be this revamped, I swear I would have argued. Walahi Laykorn I lack words of praises right now but I really appreciate the effort you and other poets put into our dear Section. Happy New Year to you and all the poets that made this Section lively.... 2014 was awesome with ya'll and 2015 would be very interesting too I believe. I'll try and give a special shout out to ya'll later. ![]() Cheers! |
These peeps should mind their biz and stop spoiling thingz for some peeps. ![]() |
Nice poem bro. Please try and put the lines in stanza (s) so that it can enhance proper reading and also check the punctuation, e.g. In line 5 and 8 the commas shouldn't be there... Same with other lines too. But generally your piece is awesome (what's the title?). Keep it up and coming bro. |
The movie is hilarious... More like a mockery of the North Korean baby boy. |
Literature and Poems for Review...... I'm still searching for a story on the Literature section written by one hajiya like that..... The major cast are Ibrahim (one unserious lover), Faquan ( a bad tempered lover to Aisha) Aishat (a confused lover)..... I was reading it before the Nairaland data loss... Please anyone with the story should please help me with the link. Thanks. |
laykorn:I'm not either but its good to be yourself and have your own style. Try and study E. E. Cummings poems and see what I'm talking about. |
Taylor184:Sure it can. Just stick with the teachers there or PM me, we can work on it together. Cheers. |
laykorn:Good job bro! The Section is indeed proud of you. |
Merry Christmas!!! |
Laykorn and Everestdebliu nice poem...... I'm sorry for sending mine late.... I lost it while posting and had to start thinking of something else to write as I couldn't recall the one I once wrote. In order not to leave the topic empty I decided to post a 'freestyle' *too much drinks I guess** Merry Christmas ya'll. |
[b] That Christmas How many people Saw it coming, The saviour from the cold Birth the night before morning? A festival of felicity For both the farandoles And the feigned fantods Who rocks and rolls. Some wondered why They were hastily slow, And that it precipitantly came As regretful winds blow. Musing; last year, few valued notes Hugged their crying pockets, This year, it seems Their affection finally dotes. Another empty vault Echoing in austerity; The pleasure of one season, Laughing at the loss of levity. It's like when harmattan came It dried up some senses. Prepping months to months, Who says joy has no consequences? ************************* Sojourning ancestral visitor Lounging in a luxurious coach To flaunt a progressive scorecard While debt is left stranded. 25th December is the day Chicken loses its innocence In the pot of the buoyant beings. Who knows the essence? Aromatic stew swam the senses Of drooling tongues, visitors beat their chests And swore that palm oil stew Is the best! But while on merriment, Remember that someone has none To make merry of, smiles seems to have erased With the memory of merriment gone. [/b] |
bjims:No qualms. ![]() |
#Following ![]() Abeg continue.... this is going to be interesting.. You must finally 'toast' a babe oooo ![]() |
laykorn: Exactly! |
Great job Laykorn. ![]() @tolutweety and Sigmundfreud: Thank you very much ![]() The story is inconclusive though ![]() |
EverestdeBliu:Please sir, can you give an example to some of these literary devices? Just for clarification for those who are new to poetry. Thanks |
**Claps** |
joseph1832:Heheheheheheh. Nobody is discouraging anybody oooo. This is Princesa for you. And for me, when I said "explore!!!" I want him to dig deep and come out with something horrific and bloody (with rhyme as the name of the thread demands |
laykorn:word freak ke? AyamTimpaker |
princesa:I no see rhyme too. Oooo abi my glasses dey deceive me? @samflexxy: you can do better. Explore!!!!! |
laykorn:I use to be a watch freak. But truly, watches na fashion oooo |
The dude has got some real timepiece there. Apart from the Frank Muller watch (which is priced for about 35k) all others are nothing. I'll take him more serious when he displays a Hublot (big bang ceramic titanium), AP Royal, and a fossil....and btw Rolex is cliché. |
It has bn long I posted here. ............ Monday please come quickly. Firestar nagode!!! |
Blood of God!!!!!!!!!!!! |
# TeamIiam ![]() |
laykorn:Friday sounds cool. But the time what I can't guarantee. |
Nice one... But try and correct some typos Overall, you did great... Good day. |
joseph1832: Present!!! ![]() |
laykorn: Thank you. |
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@samflexxy: you can do better. Explore!!!!!