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Poems For ReviewRe: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by timpaker(m):
[b]Poetry to some, may be very easy to compose and scribble, while others may find it difficult to write and that could be as a result of what to write, what style to write with and what vocabulary to use etc.

Writing a poem for the first time, it is advised that the writer/poet picks a subject or topic - an issue bothering you, nature, an event - it could be anything. But then try and look at it in a different way. e.g. The sun, moon and stars could be called "the bulb of the earth". This could be borne out of the fact that without them there would be total darkness.

Secondly, write down all the words and phrases that come to mind when you think of that topic/idea, then put the idea into your own words rightly describing, appreciating, abstracting your topic. Just like the above example whereby the sun was described as the "bulb of the earth". You can write your ideas in phrases or words like "light", "Illumination", "sky", "cloud", "shadow", "dark", "shadow" etc.

Thirdly, try and juxtapose (merge or put side by side) your words into phrases using your imaginative skill. Note: The writers imagination is his/her greatest asset so you have to display your creativity here in painting your words. Always ensure that the words appeal to your reader i.e. it must make sense. Also, you should try to use different poetic devices like metaphors (the use to describe somebody or something of a word or phrase that is not meant literally but by means of a vivid comparison expresses something or humans) and similes (comparing of two things). Please while doing this, learn not to use an overused expression or idea; You can come up with phrases like "Heaven's light above the cloud"...."Its shadow pierced the sky"....."The earth sleep with its eyes open"...It sees through the dark illumination"....etc.

Fourthly, Organize them into a structure and style. For beginners, it is advisable that you use the free verse form. Place the most catchy part of your lines and message at the end of the poem so that it can evoke meaning and have the reader thinking.

Lastly, read your poem and edit it for spelling errors and punctuations etc...... then voila!!!! you've got your self a poem like:

"The bulb of the earth is
Like a beam of heaven's light below the cloud.
Its shadow pierces the senescent sky
To see through the illuminating darkness
Of what seem like the earth
Sleeps with its eyes open."


Thank you.

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Poems For ReviewRe: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by timpaker(m): 11:19am On Dec 19, 2014
laykorn:
*walks into the class from the back and searches for the farthest seat so leki10 won't see him to ask questions.

Smart student grin

Ayamlaykorn
Can I add to your lecture on how to write a poem or poetry for beginners?
Nairaland GeneralRe: Home Page Updates: We Need Your Feedback! by timpaker(m): 11:25pm On Dec 18, 2014
Nairaland is becoming more of Instagram.... (It is cool though in an awkward way)
LiteratureRe: What Should This Be Called? by timpaker(m): 3:30pm On Dec 18, 2014
HumbledbYGrace:
Confirm?
Yes ma'm.
LiteratureRe: What Should This Be Called? by timpaker(m): 6:16am On Dec 18, 2014
HumbledbYGrace:
I nominate you for the poetry segment. Please confirm/decline
OMA4U:
I nominate Larrysun for fiction, Timpaker for poetry.
Wow! Thank you very much.
LiteratureRe: What Should This Be Called? by timpaker(m): 10:44pm On Dec 17, 2014
HumbledbYGrace:
CC Timpaker
Great idea...
LiteratureRe: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by timpaker(m): 7:40pm On Dec 17, 2014
maclatunji:
"The Poet". How are you these days?
The Famous/Great boss! I'm doing great ooooo. I'm compiling names of people and places i'll be visiting this season. Afterall, all work and no groove makes Timpaker a jackass (not Kanye West).
How's things? I love those stories you usually cull from Storried dot com, hopefully mine would come out soon.
FamilyRe: Few Weeks To Wedding, Young Lady Jumps Down From Speeding Vehicle And Dies by timpaker(m): 8:00am On Dec 17, 2014
Settling out of court is one thing that baffles me with some Nigerians...How do lawyers survive?
RomanceRe: Stop Discussing The Ladies Or Guys You Bleeped With Friends. by timpaker(m): 10:15pm On Dec 16, 2014
Is like you want some dudes to go dumb abi (aside sport)? It is like telling ladies to stop gossiping.
CelebritiesRe: Tonto Shares A Bathroom Selfie, Says She's Fat Now by timpaker(m): 11:22am On Dec 16, 2014
I'm interested in knowing the size of that bra hanging behind her wink
CelebritiesRe: A Collection Of Genevieve's Kisses by timpaker(m): 11:09am On Dec 16, 2014
prince3009:
Perhaps they have started making outrageous demands for higher subventions and 200% pay like they did under Obi's administration. Those lecturers are greedy. Like they don't realize that their pay comes from the the state's IGR
No subventions at all, they just want their monthly pay accrued to them.

If you're in Obiano's camp please help pass this message to him.

Thanks.
CelebritiesRe: A Collection Of Genevieve's Kisses by timpaker(m): 5:57am On Dec 16, 2014
prince3009:
Anambra State lecturers have been paid.
For October and November? I don't even wanna mention September.
PoliticsRe: PDP Uses Hummer Jeep To Campaign (pics) by timpaker(m): 10:25pm On Dec 15, 2014
I saw it too at Emab plaza, Wuse 2. The owner of the car must have bn paid some serious cash to love-vendor his car that way.
Poems For ReviewRe: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by timpaker(m): 9:46pm On Dec 15, 2014
I'm in too.
CelebritiesRe: A Collection Of Genevieve's Kisses by timpaker(m): 8:47pm On Dec 15, 2014
prince3009:
The kind of stories that makes frontpage these days makes me wonder if Seun has ventured into something else and handed over Nairaland to his teenage cousin. undecided
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Anyways,

See all the Good Works of Gov. Willie Obiano in Pictures as he transforms Anambra.

Show that you are a true Anambranian...

Like the official page of Anambra State on https://www.facebook.com/pages/Anambra-State-Online/729514517126819

ANAMBRA A'DIGHO MMA!

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Tell him to pay his lecturers their 3 months salary first or else sorting would increase by 200% in line with the new exchange rate of a naira to a dollar.
RomanceRe: Why You Should Cook For Your Partner by timpaker(m): 4:26pm On Dec 15, 2014
heheehehhehe grin

I know I cook better than most girls.
My recipe #BreaksThekitchen cheesy

So I'm less bothered. But sometimes I prefer they bomb the rules and just cook while I entertain them with stories that touches.
LiteratureRe: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by timpaker(m): 4:17pm On Dec 15, 2014
laykorn:
Ayamlaykorn
It has been sent.
LiteratureRe: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by timpaker(m): 4:16pm On Dec 15, 2014
Good day peeps... cheesy
Forum GamesRe: Six Letter Word Game: Start New Words With Last Letter by timpaker(m): 3:50pm On Dec 15, 2014
Inland
HealthRe: My One Month Child Fell, Please Advise by timpaker(m): 2:41pm On Dec 15, 2014
Take him to the doctor asap!
Nairaland GeneralRe: Robbed At Douglas RD Owerri by timpaker(m): 2:39pm On Dec 15, 2014
Owerri of all city.... Rochas and the Imo State commissioner of Police....Over to you.
Poems For ReviewRe: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by timpaker(m): 1:13pm On Dec 15, 2014
Nice idea... cool
LiteratureRe: Nairaland Poetry Club Chatroom. by timpaker(m): 12:10pm On Dec 15, 2014
laykorn:
I'm doing great sir.
Its okay sir. Will we be able to get them today sir?
Ayamlaykorn
Yes boss. In about an hour
LiteratureRe: Nairaland Poetry Club Chatroom. by timpaker(m): 12:05pm On Dec 15, 2014
laykorn:
Hi Tim.
Ayamlaykorn
How are you doing?
Sorry I have been busy last weekend.
LiteratureRe: Nairaland Poetry Club Chatroom. by timpaker(m): 12:02pm On Dec 15, 2014
Good day poets..
European Football (EPL, UEFA, La Liga)Re: UEFA Champions League Draw - Live by timpaker(m): 12:00pm On Dec 15, 2014
kossyablaze:
U mean weak?
I meant weak angry
European Football (EPL, UEFA, La Liga)Re: UEFA Champions League Draw - Live by timpaker(m): 11:58am On Dec 15, 2014
Please we need weak team for @Arsenal FC embarassed
FoodRe: Making Ogbono Soup by timpaker(m): 3:38pm On Dec 14, 2014
I remember the day I first (and last) cooked this soup as a university student... The thing just didn't form a draw soup after all the procedures I followed - it was watery... I just sieved the pot off the meat and fish and threw the soup away. #NoTime
FoodRe: Making Ogbono Soup by timpaker(m): 3:38pm On Dec 14, 2014
grin
CelebritiesRe: Happy 37th Birthday To Nollywood Actor Aki, Chinedu Ikedieze by timpaker(m): 4:31pm On Dec 12, 2014
37? shocked
Happy birthday man
PoliticsRe: Obanikoro Takes PDP, Agbaje To Court Over Lagos Guber Primary by timpaker(m): 4:11pm On Dec 12, 2014
What's the essence? He should accept defeat and move on..

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