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This Rita girl, why am I feeling one kain one kain.
Bidemi, come back to us

Divepen1:
Yeah. Chloe.. If you're following the ones called Dogs, you would have encountered him oo

Ehn ehn, I'm going there now

But why are there siblings like Jake? Btw, I think Mike should have told Isa

Mr Comas is right, Ndi should give her the money. Love doesn't solve all problems and his love for her definitely can't solve this.
She need to trust him to an extent no one can make her believe whatever she did not want to about him and then denying her of her money because he wants to protect her is a wrong way of going about it. It would actually serve as a proof that her mother is right even when she isn't.

authorsegun:
In my writing style, I'm trying to do more of 'showing' emotions with words than 'telling'. The reason I avoid dialogue tags such as:

" I lost my wallet," he said sadly.
instead,
"I lost my wallet," he said without looking up from the floor as he spoke.



"i said, get out of my house!" He shouted angrily and walked up to the stranger to drag him out.
instead,
"I said, get out of my house!!!" he said, pointing his forefinger towards the stranger and matching forward to him without a break.

the exclamation mark has covered for 'shout' now, 'pointing his forefinger towards the man and matching to him without a break' simply show anger or warning that would likely lead to him being kicked out. But the interesting part of it is that, a vacuum is created for readers to explore and solve the riddle created by the writer. sometimes a reader can give it a better justification. The bottom line is that it engages readers and not spoonfeed them like the initial.

if you can understand the 'showing' then it wouldn't be difficult for you to follow the story proper, hence, the answer(s) to your questions would be smiling at u in the lines that you've read, and you won't keep searching.

follow this new understanding and go back to read every line and get the best of this story. It's meant to touch your thinking/emotions, your ability to pass judgement and solve riddles.


thanks for reading all along! love love love y'all!

I love this

Oh yeah, Chloe my lover.
I think I would love Bidemi, Jerry, Leech or whatever his name is of a guy irrespective of whatever his past was. I'm guessing he was a dangerous assassin and also had a soft part to him regardless of how ranked he was before losing his memory and I'm almost certain when he regain his memory, he won't be thrilled remembering who he was and his kind of life

Lol, this suspense isn't good

Wow, all in a circle niyi. I'm not even sure Jerry is really Jerry

Ngozi and Sensanrella my lovers

kayo80:
I want to say thank you to all the moral support I got from you guys while writing this story. Most of my novelettes are usually about 10,000 words, but this one is 13,400 (Completed in exactly 3 weeks and 3 days). Thanks to you guys.

Thank you Ann2012, nastynic, LightQueen, skubido, crossfm, queenitee, collinometricx, OluwabuqqyYOLO, abubakarbabang7, carloz685, OlufemiWhit, MhizDherbee, evajael, shedrak1, froze6, fabulousbrainzz, emperorblog21, superjaks, CivilyzedTiger, Oloyedprince1, Djex614, michael123pelemo, Electricboy, Happiness98...I really appreciate you guys. It ain't easy writing sometimes, but you guys kept me going during the course of writing this story.

You are welcome

Preshbeauty:
Okay, I think Evelyn's father has a hand somehow in her predicament.



Sending Ken off like that is suspicious




well done OP

Me too or he probably has a plan and wants Ken to fall into a trap

Awwn, sesanrella Darling

do4luv14:
as in, be souloho19 no like the guy sef

chaiii ANDY must survive ooo,

but wait oooo, so Helen don go jst like that,

nah lie the bae still dey alife

Imagine o, that's like killing Andy twice

Andy again? Jesus!!!

Oh, poor Jemeh

Awwww, my dear Jerry

Ngozi chun lee

Divepen1:
Thanks...o for the shoutout.

Let me quickly use this opportunity to call a lot of guys.
My memory is like that of Jerry's I might surely forget some names but do bear with me

Hii, sorry I'm a late comer

TiffanyJ:
I've received mails from readers asking for a continuation so I'm thinking of writing the concluding part. This book was meant to be into three parts, originally. I wrote it for someone but when we couldn't agree on a few things, I decided to hold the copyright.

.Oh, that's nice man

Adesina12:
What kind of comment is this queenitee?

forgive me

These people of katakata street will not kill kuku themselves

TiffanyJ:
Okay then

Is this going to have a book two?

Divepen1:
Will expect to see you there...

It's not going through sir



I've been able to now, thank you

Fazemood:
Hello queenitee, been awhile. How u?

Been fine and you sir?

Divepen1:
Have you seen Writertain yet


cc: misswrite

No! Lemme check it out

Hmmm, I'm so loving this