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[quote author=alkaline.ak]Nice piece of work @OP whats your location?[/quote]Thanks. I'm in Akure.

KingPradas: the ending is confusing.

Really? *clears throat*

*Rolls eyes* this comparison...not again...lol

But I would still choose 24 over PB.

kunle fox: This is cool! i was with it from the beginning(though it's not much)....hahaha i was telling myself that Funmi is so open which i thought was dumb at first but then when it got to the introduction of the family members..i totally got it.
it can be related to so well that what you want sometimes are weird and definitely not what they seem to be...loool!
Do i need to say i love the concept of the dialogue with his image....it's good!
i agree with Villageboi that the touches should be done to the character description bits.

Tanks very much. I tot I had modified the file by adding the character descriptions...wud do that again.

VillageBoi: True, very nice poster. Remeber the old posters with the 200 faces of Cast, crew and all the waka-pass people?

Lol...'WickedBoi'

Of course, I know Nasbock Bukayo Ogunlude...isn't he the OP of this thread?

Nice poster.

Fm007: Synopsis: bayo aguda the activist moving motion critisizing the present govt for a change.the president adopt the activist way forward article an implement it accordingly and the citizen tends to enjoy the govt for a while till one of the govt official conspire with an underground assasin company and get rid of the president & the activist with an untraceable bullet for killing there plant business.femi the activist son suffer jail term for what he knew nothing after the assasination of his parent.the assasin company adopt him as there new machinery after his jail term but later got to know the company he's working for are the one behind the death of his parent an ready to take revenge with the last drop of his blood by exposing the company hidden agenda.find out how he achieve dat

Hmmmmm!!!! Innovative plot but I must say sincerely, the way you write militates against communication. Try working on your tenses. If it's past or present you want to use, do so throughout your write-up/script. I may be wrong...maybe you typed this synopsis under the influence of hot pounded yam.

I will come back to suggest ways you can improve on the plot.
Lol@ 'assassin company'.

Urrgh! Would try seeing 'cos of the mixed cast and it has been a long tym I saw Yemi Blaq onscreen but I'm not expecting much.

Innovative plot btw but that doesn't guarantee a very good movie.

Em...Op, are you one of the executive producers of this movie?
You really impressed me in the way you sold this movie.
I hope it would be worth it.

Madam CC has spoken well

Thank God I no be woman oo. Kai! See life!

Villageboi, you've said it all. The 2nd logline still sounds like arabic to me.

OP, try giving us a proper, detailed synopsis. I am an up-and-coming scriptwriter and I don't seem to understand ur logline.

MrBible: You are still a baby, you better stay in the romance section or be quiet and learn from wise men here.

Yes sir...I'm surely learning from wise men here...but a pity you are not one of them, cos u re not WISE! Kai! I wonder how wisdom is this scarce.

OP, u no well, u wan do 'interview and hot-seat screening' for the posts of waitress and cook?

MrBible: Since your wife can not tell you what you are doing wrong but wants you to keep guessing, this shows that your wife is a selfish and jealous woman, does not have a mind of her own and some wicked and jealous relatives or friends of your wife has told her she married the wrong man that their man is better than you.
If this issue is making you to loose your sleep, then you have to act fast before you loose your mind. Go and get a place for yourself to live, have condoms ready for emergencies and let your wife live by herself, if she does not come and beg you and show you she has changed then it means she does not want the marriage anymore because of the nonsense that has been fed into her head by the wicked and jealous people that are advising her.

Proverbs 14:1
The wise woman builds her house, but with her own hands the foolish one tears hers down.

Try and get the prayer below by Dr Olukoya on cd or dvd and play it quietly all night if you can but stay away from pastors as they will even join your wife against you.
WICKEDNESS MUST DIE http://www.mfmhouston.net/AUDIO%20MESSAGES/WICKEDNESS%20MUST%20DIE.wma

Jesus Christ! Did you just quote the Holy Bible after spewing trash?! LMAO!

He shud get condoms ready for 'emergencies'? Pls expatiate, MrBible indeed. Dumbest comment on the thread so far...clap for ursef.

And you constant hammering of 'wickedd ppl ill-advising OP's wife' shows you are disillusioned.

@OP, you'd beta listen to madam CC's comment and give us feedback.

So, how does this prevent another 110 people from losing their lives in road accidents? Mschew!

Too many meaningless topic making FP these dayz.

Kalu looks smashing...

And why is Nse dressing above her age? Or is she that old? Is she mourning anybody? Or did her character die in the movie being premiered? Why the black parade?

VillageBoi: Cool. When next I enta na something we fit shoot in a day.

That's good to hear. It's my pleasure if you work with it. Wud be looking forward to that bro.

prof800: nice write up..u can do better.
i hope u are going to shoot it ooo...because i really liked it.

Thanks. But I dnt currently have the resources and skill to shoot nw. I am a scriptwriter and an actor.
But I dnt mind Villageboi working with it...

semid4lyfe: Na real paranoia

Classic! Short, Concise, Precise, no wasted words and scenes, I absolutely loved it. . . .

Thanks.

What kind of joke is this?

*Shaking my head*

PLEASE, IT IS 'CAREER', NOT 'CARRIER'.

vicade: front page

Hun-hun, back page ni.

Rita looks smashing!

Wizee: well i dont knw who's dat. bt i blive everybody is diff n unique, and nobody on NL can b lyk Debi. They might cum close dough!!

Oga, it's true evryone is unique in his or her own way. But roles can be switched and ppl replaced, it's dat uniqueness dat may serve as personal flavour.
Madam 'May God help us all" has been doing a great job.

Lol@Chaircover and maclatunji...neva knew dis ppl cud be quite funny.

asionkion: having my lover back was the greatest thing that has ever happened to me. I have been dating my lover for 3yrs now, we have never had a misunderstanding that would lead to us leaving each other till last month when my lover accused me of cheating when am not, his jealousy turned us apart. Everytime i message him or call him he tells me to go and meet my new boyfriend that he has found himself a girlfriend too, I was so depressed that i could not take it any more then i told a friend what i was going through. That was how i was introduced to a lady called priestess Ifaa online who they say it does spells. I told her all that happened and. The spell lady said that i shouldn't worry that she's going to restore my happiness At first I didn't want to believe her when she said my lover is now dating someone else that's why he is looking for an excuse to leave. She was right on because after she has done the spell to return my lover to me the other girl was trying to intrude into our relationship again that was when my lover beats her up and warned her never to come closer ever again. The lady spells worked to the fullness, you can contact her on this email templeofloved@gmail.com You will not be disappointed in ordering a spell from her. Sheila

WTF?! Is this a nollywood script or wat? Nonsense!

Lol...I have also missed her. Don't know where shz though.
I am also criosly missing Chaircover. She don run go health section. I sense shez undergoing the 9-month journey.

I think they've handed over the baton to Madam 'May God help us all'...I hope you know who I'm talking abt.