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THE SHOT Across enemy line Came stinging rockets Reducing our platoon to nine. Bullets squirts off its sockets, One slitting a soldier's bowel Like a razor "On your heels!" Says the Colonel, Signalling his friend, the major. Six cowards dropped their accouterments And carried their legs Away from the cantonments, Ignoring our pleas and begs. They ran out and into the militia zone Like a brave coward... Booom! The militia let off their own - They matched forward (and).... Further buzzed on Like bees towards a honeycombed tree, Shooting from every corner and turn At any grassy-carmo they see. The colonel's rifle became sick A magazine, its antidote. His pistol also went bleak... Surrender or also bolt? Far from us three I saw them all, The 6 cowards got down with an RPG I watched their mutilation fall. Fear pinched me But professionalism won't let me be. My fingers lost a grip to my tool Due to my shivers, I heard the Major say "poor little fools" With pitiful quivers. Kpaa! A pebble of death Hit the colonel's throat and he fell to the ground, The Major yelled as the Colonel's breath Got lost in the cacophonous sound. Like an animal the Major charged, Squinting through his rifle Into their midst he barged, His life suddenly lost in a daredevil trifle. Taking down about twenty four Militia before my eyes, Then retreated on the floor Panting towards me while backing the sky. He raised his arm, and shook his head He's left with just one shot off his magazine. His eyes went browny-red That's far from the worst fear I have seen. Because our situation was dire, In confusion, I saw him bit his lip, And his fingers all red like a wild fire, With his arm loosing arm grip. He stole a brave glint and laughed like a child, But I knew it was his fears - The roar from the other side... He secretly wiped off his stubborn tears. Aha! For once, I saw a brave man cry, I believe he was worried about his family. Who wouldn't when he's about to die? Their pictures, usually the last in our memory. He pulled off his last shot And cleaned it with his sweat, I cleaned my lense too off its dirty spot And assumed my Russian roulette. We shook hands like comrade-in-arms And positioned for the last shot of our life. 'Click!' 'Kpaa!!' ... Our tools fell from our palms My last image was that of my young wife. Baby, that last shot was for you, My camera has really made me brave. Hey! To my boss, this is journalist Rotimi Tolu Reporting live from my grave.(Over!) |
[b]THE SHOT Across enemy line Came stinging rockets Reducing our platoon to nine. Bullets squirts off its sockets, One slitting a soldier's bowel Like a razor "On your heels!" Says the Colonel, Signalling his friend, the major. Six cowards dropped their accouterments And carried their legs Away from the cantonments, Ignoring our pleas and begs. They ran out and into the militia zone Like a brave coward... Booom! The militia let off their own - They matched forward (and).... Further buzzed on Like bees towards a honeycombed tree, Shooting from every corner and turn At any grassy-carmo they see. The colonel's rifle became sick A magazine, its antidote. His pistol also went bleak... Surrender or also bolt? Far from us three I saw them all, The 6 cowards got down with an RPG I watched their mutilation fall. Fear pinched me But professionalism won't let me be. My fingers lost a grip to my tool Due to my shivers, I heard the Major say "poor little fools" With pitiful quivers. Kpaa! A pebble of death Hit the colonel's throat and he fell to the ground, The Major yelled as the Colonel's breath Got lost in the cacophonous sound. Like an animal the Major charged, Squinting through his rifle Into their midst he barged, His life suddenly lost in a daredevil trifle. Taking down about twenty four Militia before my eyes, Then retreated on the floor Panting towards me while backing the sky. He raised his arm, and shook his head He's left with just one shot off his magazine. His eyes went browny-red That's far from the worst fear I have seen. Because our situation was dire, In confusion, I saw him bit his lip, And his fingers all red like a wild fire, With his arm loosing arm grip. He stole a brave glint and laughed like a child, But I knew it was his fears - The roar from the other side... He secretly wiped off his stubborn tears. Aha! For once, I saw a brave man cry, I believe he was worried about his family. Who wouldn't when he's about to die? Their pictures, usually the last in our memory. He pulled off his last shot And cleaned it with his sweat, I cleaned my lense too off its dirty spot And assumed my Russian roulette. We shook hands like comrade-in-arms And positioned for the last shot our life. 'Click!' 'Kpaa!!' ... Our tools fell from our palms My last image was that of my young wife. Baby, that last shot was for you, My camera has really made me brave. Hey! This is journalist Rotimi Tolu Reporting live from my grave.(Over!)[/b] |
Hmmm...... Get me "How Rich People Think" by Steven Seibold |
The Convict (Ninette) Fate, God's game On mere men, Life's on the play; Watching as he's tossed. "Live up your strength" Says the heart, Keep the Faith! |
**The stage is set** |
What a piece! Keep it up bro. |
Dr. Chike Mgbediachie First class in English and linguistic (Ansu) Masters in English and foreign literature (University of Leeds, Uk) Ph.D University of Exeter, UK Age....28 |
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They should also question his wife who is currently battling with Wuye market owners in Abuja for their shops |
JigsawKillah:Then the spirit must be gansta too |
Heheheheheheheh. You need to see me feeling like a rapper/gangstar trying to act out this piece in my little imaginative theatre. Like Lake said the is really something from the Street. Lastly, mehn you're gangsta! (let. Me memorise it jare) |
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The Convict (Rhyme Royal) I've lost my shadow but I am not dead, My soul seems nake d as my body flee From the crown of crisis around my head. Darkness and light, both are now against me, Shouldn't my breathe be scared of what i'd be If my life is nothing but a mere trifle? A hunting peg for stern looking men with rifle. The clock has ran for a dozen month now Since I broke-free from my captor's claw. No love, no hate; before me are ups and down, Face of frown, drowning dreams, a broken jaw, A dampened heart, forlorn thought on mazing yaw Which locks me in that sadness that fans my rage, Blustering the embers of revenge that i wage. Happiness has a face, I seen and worn it Even under blemishes of worries, I grin-glee, Now i'm silenced by the same smile my face lit; To move on I need to put on a chameleon skin. I've evinced my fears, no words of my family of me, I've looked up before getting stuck on the floor That my prayers are ricocheting before heaven's door. My intentions are my actions with carefulness, Scheming amid the puzzle of choice, day and night; My imagination arms my feats of thoughtfulness: But further thought could buy me craziness at first sight And I don't trust myself because I have no living might Until I decide to accept the prospects which will embrace - My concern - my well-being, family and love case. |
Martha Ankomah
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emaculate99:Weldone and welcome bro! You did well. Your verses are filled with catchy meanings of what we hear through our politicians. However, for the sake of your readers, your punctuation should to be properly placed (though it's a free verse, such punctuation could be skipped but it is necessary). I love the fact that you selected your words carefully with each having to give a meaning to the poem - "emaculate" "emaculatable" "emaculated" "immaculate" Bravo! Please we need to read more of your poems here. Thank you. |
llaykorn:Lolz. I. Just dey enter kontiry now sef. Make I find d phone from where I hide am. **Done** |
GIYAZZ: Heheheheheheheh. I'm not in for rap battles and besides my punchlines suck. |
GIYAZZ:Me cool, though busy with life. That section seems like a fun place to be. I'm gonna stroll down there one day (not for battle) |
GIYAZZ:Hi, Giyazz What's up? Longest time. |
It has been long since I read something like this.... I'm thrilled. Carry on... |
He should survive. 50 Cent survived 9 shots. Get well soon man. |
tolutweety:Tolutweety writes... ![]() Smiling words - Poetry adorns. ![]() |
Alexpissu:Little pebbles Turning rocks To sands. ![]() |
joseph1832: Screw harder Talk softer Snooze later. |
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