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Poems For ReviewThe Shot by timpaker(op):
THE SHOT

Across enemy line
Came stinging rockets

Reducing our platoon to nine.
Bullets squirts off its sockets,

One slitting a soldier's bowel
Like a razor

"On your heels!" Says the Colonel,
Signalling his friend, the major.

Six cowards dropped their accouterments
And carried their legs

Away from the cantonments,
Ignoring our pleas and begs.

They ran out and into the militia zone
Like a brave coward...

Booom! The militia let off their own -
They matched forward (and)....

Further buzzed on
Like bees towards a honeycombed tree,

Shooting from every corner and turn
At any grassy-carmo they see.

The colonel's rifle became sick
A magazine, its antidote.

His pistol also went bleak...
Surrender or also bolt?

Far from us three
I saw them all,

The 6 cowards got down with an RPG
I watched their mutilation fall.

Fear pinched me
But professionalism won't let me be.

My fingers lost a grip to my tool
Due to my shivers,

I heard the Major say "poor little fools"
With pitiful quivers.

Kpaa! A pebble of death
Hit the colonel's throat and he fell to the ground,

The Major yelled as the Colonel's breath
Got lost in the cacophonous sound.

Like an animal the Major charged,
Squinting through his rifle

Into their midst he barged,
His life suddenly lost in a daredevil trifle.

Taking down about twenty four
Militia before my eyes,

Then retreated on the floor
Panting towards me while backing the sky.

He raised his arm, and shook his head
He's left with just one shot off his magazine.

His eyes went browny-red
That's far from the worst fear I have seen.

Because our situation was dire,
In confusion, I saw him bit his lip,

And his fingers all red like a wild fire,
With his arm loosing arm grip.

He stole a brave glint and laughed like a child,
But I knew it was his fears -

The roar from the other side...
He secretly wiped off his stubborn tears.

Aha! For once, I saw a brave man cry,
I believe he was worried about his family.

Who wouldn't when he's about to die?
Their pictures, usually the last in our memory.

He pulled off his last shot
And cleaned it with his sweat,

I cleaned my lense too off its dirty spot
And assumed my Russian roulette.

We shook hands like comrade-in-arms
And positioned for the last shot of our life.

'Click!' 'Kpaa!!' ... Our tools fell from our palms
My last image was that of my young wife.

Baby, that last shot was for you,
My camera has really made me brave.

Hey! To my boss, this is journalist Rotimi Tolu
Reporting live from my grave.(Over!)
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Poems For ReviewRe: Sojourning Mind by timpaker(op):
[b]THE SHOT

Across enemy line
Came stinging rockets

Reducing our platoon to nine.
Bullets squirts off its sockets,

One slitting a soldier's bowel
Like a razor

"On your heels!" Says the Colonel,
Signalling his friend, the major.

Six cowards dropped their accouterments
And carried their legs

Away from the cantonments,
Ignoring our pleas and begs.

They ran out and into the militia zone
Like a brave coward...

Booom! The militia let off their own -
They matched forward (and)....

Further buzzed on
Like bees towards a honeycombed tree,

Shooting from every corner and turn
At any grassy-carmo they see.

The colonel's rifle became sick
A magazine, its antidote.

His pistol also went bleak...
Surrender or also bolt?

Far from us three
I saw them all,

The 6 cowards got down with an RPG
I watched their mutilation fall.

Fear pinched me
But professionalism won't let me be.

My fingers lost a grip to my tool
Due to my shivers,

I heard the Major say "poor little fools"
With pitiful quivers.

Kpaa! A pebble of death
Hit the colonel's throat and he fell to the ground,

The Major yelled as the Colonel's breath
Got lost in the cacophonous sound.

Like an animal the Major charged,
Squinting through his rifle

Into their midst he barged,
His life suddenly lost in a daredevil trifle.

Taking down about twenty four
Militia before my eyes,

Then retreated on the floor
Panting towards me while backing the sky.

He raised his arm, and shook his head
He's left with just one shot off his magazine.

His eyes went browny-red
That's far from the worst fear I have seen.

Because our situation was dire,
In confusion, I saw him bit his lip,

And his fingers all red like a wild fire,
With his arm loosing arm grip.

He stole a brave glint and laughed like a child,
But I knew it was his fears -

The roar from the other side...
He secretly wiped off his stubborn tears.

Aha! For once, I saw a brave man cry,
I believe he was worried about his family.

Who wouldn't when he's about to die?
Their pictures, usually the last in our memory.

He pulled off his last shot
And cleaned it with his sweat,

I cleaned my lense too off its dirty spot
And assumed my Russian roulette.

We shook hands like comrade-in-arms
And positioned for the last shot our life.

'Click!' 'Kpaa!!' ... Our tools fell from our palms
My last image was that of my young wife.

Baby, that last shot was for you,
My camera has really made me brave.

Hey! This is journalist Rotimi Tolu
Reporting live from my grave.(Over!)[/b]
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LiteratureRe: Tell Me Any Book Or Software You Need. I Have It!! by timpaker(m): 6:53pm On Oct 19, 2015
Hmmm......

Get me "How Rich People Think" by Steven Seibold
Poems For ReviewRe: The Convict by timpaker(op): 6:42pm On Oct 19, 2015
The Convict (Ninette)

Fate,
God's game
On mere men,
Life's on the play;
Watching as he's tossed.
"Live up your strength"
Says the heart,
Keep the
Faith!
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Poems For ReviewRe: To Reply To Poems With Poetry Parlance.. by timpaker(m): 6:21pm On Oct 19, 2015
**The stage is set**
Poems For ReviewRe: Regrets by timpaker(m): 6:10pm On Oct 19, 2015
What a piece!
Keep it up bro.
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EducationRe: List Of The 5 Youngest PhD Holders In Nigeria by timpaker(m): 11:06pm On Oct 18, 2015
Dr. Chike Mgbediachie

First class in English and linguistic (Ansu)

Masters in English and foreign literature (University of Leeds, Uk)

Ph.D University of Exeter, UK

Age....28
Forum GamesRe: The Comment Without Any 'Like', Wins. (LIKERS' PARADISE) by timpaker(m): 3:57pm On Oct 13, 2015
sad
PoliticsRe: Breaking: Efcc Questions suswan by timpaker(m): 1:27pm On Oct 12, 2015
They should also question his wife who is currently battling with Wuye market owners in Abuja for their shops
Poems For ReviewRe: I Know I Love Her by timpaker(m): 10:52am On Oct 10, 2015
JigsawKillah:
lol @gangsta. I just wrote as the spirit lead me, Sir
Then the spirit must be gansta too
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Poems For ReviewRe: I Know I Love Her by timpaker(m): 10:43pm On Oct 08, 2015
Heheheheheheheh. You need to see me feeling like a rapper/gangstar trying to act out this piece in my little imaginative theatre.

Like Lake said the is really something from the Street.

Lastly, mehn you're gangsta! (let. Me memorise it jare)
RomanceRe: How Do I Politely Return Her Gifts? by timpaker(m): 2:45pm On Oct 08, 2015
The watch no follow... angry
Poems For ReviewRe: The Convict by timpaker(op): 2:42pm On Oct 08, 2015
The Convict (Rhyme Royal)

I've lost my shadow but I am not dead,
My soul seems nake d as my body flee
From the crown of crisis around my head.
Darkness and light, both are now against me,
Shouldn't my breathe be scared of what i'd be
If my life is nothing but a mere trifle?
A hunting peg for stern looking men with rifle.

The clock has ran for a dozen month now
Since I broke-free from my captor's claw.
No love, no hate; before me are ups and down,
Face of frown, drowning dreams, a broken jaw,
A dampened heart, forlorn thought on mazing yaw
Which locks me in that sadness that fans my rage,
Blustering the embers of revenge that i wage.

Happiness has a face, I seen and worn it
Even under blemishes of worries, I grin-glee,
Now i'm silenced by the same smile my face lit;
To move on I need to put on a chameleon skin.
I've evinced my fears, no words of my family of me,
I've looked up before getting stuck on the floor
That my prayers are ricocheting before heaven's door.

My intentions are my actions with carefulness,
Scheming amid the puzzle of choice, day and night;
My imagination arms my feats of thoughtfulness:
But further thought could buy me craziness at first sight
And I don't trust myself because I have no living might
Until I decide to accept the prospects which will embrace -
My concern - my well-being, family and love case.
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CelebritiesRe: Power Of Makeup- See What Female Ghanaian Celebrities Look Like Without Makeup by timpaker(m): 4:29pm On Oct 07, 2015
Martha Ankomah wink kiss kiss kiss

Poems For ReviewRe: Madness Fever by timpaker(m): 7:53am On Oct 07, 2015
emaculate99:
No, this is not my first poem but I wish to develop myself. thanks very much for the review
Weldone and welcome bro!

You did well.

Your verses are filled with catchy meanings of what we hear through our politicians. However, for the sake of your readers, your punctuation should to be properly placed (though it's a free verse, such punctuation could be skipped but it is necessary).

I love the fact that you selected your words carefully with each having to give a meaning to the poem - "emaculate" "emaculatable" "emaculated" "immaculate"

Bravo! Please we need to read more of your poems here.

Thank you.
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Poems For ReviewRe: The Poets' Café : Chat Room! by timpaker(m):
llaykorn:
Timpaker, I sent a request, sir. E done reach like one month now o... sad
Lolz. I. Just dey enter kontiry now sef. Make I find d phone from where I hide am.


**Done**
Poems For ReviewRe: The Poets' Café : Chat Room! by timpaker(m): 12:29pm On Sep 30, 2015
GIYAZZ:
Lol, me too.

And yes, the Rap battle section is a fun place to be. But it's filled terrorists, villains and gladiators. Hahahahahaha!! Don't be scared though, Laykorn survived. I'm sure you will.

I'd love it if you come for a visit though, it'd be cool. wink

Heheheheheheheh. I'm not in for rap battles and besides my punchlines suck.
Poems For ReviewRe: The Poets' Café : Chat Room! by timpaker(m): 8:04am On Sep 30, 2015
GIYAZZ:
Whassup Timpaker? Yeah, longest time. I've been around though, but mostly in the Rap section. How are you?
Me cool, though busy with life.
That section seems like a fun place to be.
I'm gonna stroll down there one day (not for battle)
Poems For ReviewRe: The Poets' Café : Chat Room! by timpaker(m): 7:36am On Sep 30, 2015
GIYAZZ:
Hello
Hi, Giyazz

What's up?
Longest time.
LiteratureRe: Tade - The Rise Of An Activist. by timpaker(m): 4:57pm On Sep 29, 2015
It has been long since I read something like this....

I'm thrilled.

Carry on...
CelebritiesRe: Young Artiste Shot Four Times By Army Officer In Lagos (photo) by timpaker(m): 1:12pm On Sep 23, 2015
He should survive. 50 Cent survived 9 shots.

Get well soon man.
Poems For ReviewRe: Six Word Poem Game... Who's In? by timpaker(m): 11:50pm On Sep 21, 2015
tolutweety:
Tim n Joe
Baddest duo
Ever ready . smiley cheesy
Tolutweety writes... smiley
Smiling words - shocked
Poetry adorns. cool
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Poems For ReviewRe: Six Word Poem Game... Who's In? by timpaker(m): 11:17pm On Sep 21, 2015
Alexpissu:
Kissing shadows turned street to syria
Little pebbles
Turning rocks
To sands. embarassed
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Poems For ReviewRe: Six Word Poem Game... Who's In? by timpaker(m): 11:14pm On Sep 21, 2015
joseph1832:
Tease easy
Touch gentle
Screw harder.

Screw harder
Talk softer
Snooze later. cool
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Poems For ReviewRe: Six Word Poem Game... Who's In? by timpaker(m): 10:38pm On Sep 21, 2015
llaykorn:
Then T's
Friend-
With All
Three. tongue
Burning kiss...
Long piss...
Fun tease
grin
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Poems For ReviewRe: The Lady Of The Night. by timpaker(m): 10:20pm On Sep 21, 2015
joseph1832:
Specialist at what Tim? LOL.

Why are you frowning?
On woman matter tongue
Poems For ReviewRe: Six Word Poem Game... Who's In? by timpaker(m): 7:37pm On Sep 21, 2015
llaykorn:
Let us
Guess which-
Three, sure? grin
The one
That causes
The others.
cool
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Poems For ReviewRe: The Lady Of The Night. by timpaker(m): 4:06pm On Sep 21, 2015
Specialist! grin

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