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Poems For ReviewRe: The Demons Inside Me by timpaker(m): 7:16pm On Aug 11, 2015
joseph1832:
That's my man Tim!.
Boss! cool

Ymix94:
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Thanks for d motivation bro, I'll really appreciate it if could please illuminate me More on how u arranged it...

Erm... just click on "modify" then check each of the lines (there is a space that started each line of yours in the poem) delete those spaces and you're good to go...

Better still... go to the one I edited and quote then see how I did them.

Get it?
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Poems For ReviewRe: Cuntribute by timpaker(m): 7:04pm On Aug 11, 2015
Speechless! undecided
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Poems For ReviewRe: The Demons Inside Me by timpaker(m): 6:37pm On Aug 11, 2015
Ymix94:
Boss how did u go about it.... bad me
Just remove the space that you used in starting each lines.

Then try to properly punctuate your poems so that it would have meaning while reading... I tried a little in the punctuation..

Above all, you did great. Nice poem bro!
Poems For ReviewRe: The Demons Inside Me by timpaker(m): 6:20pm On Aug 11, 2015
Ymix94:
The demons inside me,
One on the right and one on the left;
Weighing one'forty grams each.
Their hidings as obscure as the dark
They work diabolically, typical of a devil.

I protect and maintain them,
Yet, they turn my blood and water
Against me.
They use my arteries, veins and plexus
To plague me,
They made me to be drinking water like
An elephant in the wild,
Devouring anything green like an hopper
In the field.

Alpha and Omega of what I eat and what I drink,
When I sleep and when to wake -
They call the stones and invite d' tumor.
They made nephritis their governor
And together they caused a failure,
Starting a war that will not end until
I breathe my last.

Mephistophelean they replicate;
Armistice I long for, but these my fiendish
Friends would not agree.
Show me d' exit door O yee good friends,
Let me rot with these daemons
Beneath d earth that torment like hell.

Now I'd change my mind to fight,
Ready to lead a war for my aspirations
And dreams.
Anyway to avoid this war? No I guess.
How I wish I was not created with my
"KIDNEYS" tormenting me and wanting
Me dead.

Dedicated to a friend recuperating from a
kidney failure...My first time of writing... Please
Cc...Laykorn
Texanomaly
Genarality07
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CelebritiesRe: There's No Two Ways About It: Caitlyn Jenner Only Likes Women. by timpaker(m): 11:59pm On Aug 09, 2015
She's scary, walahi!
PoliticsRe: Ex-CSO, Obua, At National Hospital Critically Ill (Photo) by timpaker(m): 12:47pm On Jul 29, 2015
joseph1832:
Em speak for yourself sir, because if Heaven fall... I quiver. That's all I can say. grin
Don't worry. nothing dey happen!

This man is not the problem of Nigeria.
PoliticsRe: Ex-CSO, Obua, At National Hospital Critically Ill (Photo) by timpaker(m): 12:02pm On Jul 29, 2015
Get well soon sir!

We aren't shaken and we won't shake even if heaven fall.
Art, Graphics & VideoRe: New Strokes From Centje And Bro by timpaker(m): 10:35pm On Jul 23, 2015
Nice piece of work my dear poet.

I will like to buy one of your art work, the one about a mother and child walking under the rain (that's if you wanna sell it).
Poems For ReviewRe: The Nigerian Speak Of Wonders. by timpaker(m): 4:37pm On Jul 21, 2015
HEheheheheheheh. Nice prose. cool

I must confess the fourth paragraph had me thinking about my darling Greece.
I pray Nigeria never get to that level.
LiteratureRe: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by timpaker(m): 4:22pm On Jul 21, 2015
standd:
Any pastor that dares to flog me will lose his clothes fast fast cheesygrin

Which kain yeye deliverance, abi na to chop snake like chocolate again?
What I need starts with D, but please do not attempt to complete the D word with that devilish Nigerian mind.

cheesygrin
Am I thinking what you're thinking? wink
Hmmm..... (I'm mot devilish sha) grin
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PoliticsRe: INEC Fixes Dates For Kogi, Bayelsa Gov Elections by timpaker(m): 10:44pm On Jul 10, 2015
My home boy Moses Siasia will win the Bayelsa State Governorship election come December 5th, 2015. cool
LiteratureRe: What Book Impacted You The Most? by timpaker(m): 11:02pm On Jul 08, 2015
joseph1832:
I also have craven African literature. African writers have touched me a lot. Kwame Nkrumah Neo Colonialism: The Last Stage Of Imperialism was an eye opener for me.

Read this one and I assure you eh you'll be glad you did and you won't stop talking about the book. Since the book is scarce in the market, you can read it at goodreads dot com.

This book brings you the perplexing paradox of religion, corruption in the society, love and loyalty... let me not go ahead with the spoiler
Remember to thank me later.
LiteratureRe: The New Man By Femi Ademiluyi by timpaker(m): 10:40pm On Jul 08, 2015
OMA4U:
The New Man is one of the best African books I have ever read. I love the book! Ayo Badejo
You read that book too? That book is classic! I wonder why it is not rated amongst the best books in Africa.
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LiteratureRe: What Book Impacted You The Most? by timpaker(m): 10:38pm On Jul 08, 2015
joseph1832:
Who's the author of the book?.

For me guys I stopped reading inspirational and motivational books, rather, I chose to expand my knowledge and I delve into esoteric books.

So I will say I really don't have any book per say, each book I read reach/teach me certain things in certain ways. However I will say the book I read that piqued my curiosity into knowing more about arcane knowledge was Erik Van Lustbader book, The Kaisho.

Note. Eric Van Lustbader is a second level Reiki master!.

The author of the book is Femi Ademiluyi. Ever since I read that book about 10years ago, my love for Nigerian/African books increased.

I use to have the book but misplaced it somewhere in Ibadan when I went to get it autographed by the author. It is still painful remembering the book and not getting a hold of it to peep.
LiteratureRe: What Book Impacted You The Most? by timpaker(m): 9:24pm On Jul 08, 2015
The New Man
LiteratureRe: Happy Birthday, OMA4U by timpaker(m): 9:23pm On Jul 08, 2015
Happy Birthday Chairman!!! (even though I called in late - better late than never, isn't it?)

Wishing you many more fruitful years ahead.



Far and loud we heard the cry of joy;
Out he came, a bouncing baby boy,
We joined the earth to dance it's dance
With sour but refined wine from France.

Under God's eye you sat, crawled and stood
Into a man we understand to understood.
He fed us from his pen, the food of his heart,
We ate his poetry and dined in his table of art.

He made us an Oliver Twist - always wanting for more;
Today, we don come again joor!

For our boy is a man,
We're his fan,
Our felicity we've come to share
Shan't we all dance to his new year?


I can't be late for this party na.
Poems For ReviewRe: The Convict by timpaker(op):
The Convict (Drama)


THE CONVICT
Bits by bits i watched myself broken by you,
Even the walls of Jericho would crack by your touch
Let alone me, an old broken man, caged by your love
Which pours out the tenderness and soothingness of care.
The touch of a goddess it seems, submissively my body yield
To thee whose love my heart now crave for.

YOUNG LADY
At dusk, under the soaring sapphire sky
It is my face you steal at morning sight,
While your wrinkle melt with kiddies blushes,
Butterfly smiles polish your rumple cheeks
You feel alive, young and like a conqueror,
With which your face blossom like the roses of Athens.
Is that love i see on your face?

THE CONVICT
Oh dear!
See not the garden of wool on my hair
Nor the tears that hides under my creased flare,
Your love and its absence i cannot bear
For my son's love and I you cannot compare.
If you extinguish the spark i have for you
Where else would my heart go?
When it is locked in the coop of your love.

YOUNG LADY
Ah! The heart of my heart beat!!
Why is your thought blurred with the unimaginable?
Is it the lemon grass, aloes and the dried pawpaw leaf?
Or the bitter herbs from the forest's garden of St. Paul's shrubbery?
We together is like making incense from the devil's beans,
And the sun, moon and stars would blind us for incest.

THE CONVICT
Can't I be caged with you my dear?
If your beauty would lead me astray,
If it turns me against the world again, i'd gladly beseech it dearly,
For I'd rather burn in the devil's lake, drown in its fieriest of fire
Till my breathe is whisked like the ode on a Grecian urn.
Please lock me in your heart where i'd feel safe of this world,
I wish to be imprisoned till your love sets me free.
Do not wait for my son, the law doesn't love, it only lives -
My son lives for the law.

YOUNG LADY
Please don't speak so of the love of my life
because not even the Stockholmic love i bore,
nor the affluently blessed or other audacious men,
together can match the modest nature of his love.
However, we could have one sin in secrecy
Just to test your prowess... the forth night we shall...
But please have more wine...
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Poems For ReviewRe: Sojourning Mind by timpaker(op): 10:47pm On Jul 05, 2015
joseph1832:
You never lived for your country.
I think the part where I said "I live for you" covers and took care of that part. The word "you" is ambiguous. cheesy
Poems For ReviewRe: Sojourning Mind by timpaker(op): 9:13pm On Jul 05, 2015
joseph1832:
So unpatriotic. You never lived for Nigeria. gringringrin
Heheheheheheh. What did I miss? grin

Well, that's just a rough poem... the main one is somewhere in a sheet of paper.
I couldn't remember all what I wrote so I just put up the lives without much explanation (I will edit it when I see the paper.

Someone accused me of bn non-religious just cuz I skipped the "God" part..... i.e. "one life... I live for God"... the critique was so funny eh.

So tell me, which did I miss that made me unpatriotic? huh
Poems For ReviewRe: The Jezebel Of Our Time by timpaker(m): 11:55am On Jul 04, 2015
joseph1832:
Yes bro. Pleasure to the senses. Art arouses the senses, it makes us see things and experience things different ways thus giving pleasure to the senses.

And yes fine art are normally explicit. i.e explicit with gore/horror, explicit with sexual imagery, explicit with ridicule, explicit with nonsense or explicit with beauty/magnificence. Artists like Michael Angelo, Bottecelli, Borsch, Donatello, Alighieri, Raphael, Da Vinci etc made such explicit works of art!. grin


Hehehehehehehehehe. I was pulling your legs! grin

If an art isn't explicit then it's just a piece without imagination.
Good job bro!
RomanceRe: A Story Told Via Pictures….guys, Don’t Jump Into Bed With Every Girl You See by timpaker(m): 11:04am On Jul 04, 2015
Okay. How did it end? huh
Poems For ReviewRe: The Jezebel Of Our Time by timpaker(m): 10:56am On Jul 04, 2015
joseph1832:
Yea right, lemme take a rain check on that. Lol.

Sex is an art, so is poetry and I sir I'm an artist. grin and no I'm not a IndecentStar. I'm just an artist who appreciates fine art!. Especially the art that gives pleasure to the senses... gringringrin
"Pleasure to the senses..." huh

And fine art are to be explicit right? grin
Nice logic! cool
Poems For ReviewRe: The Jezebel Of Our Time by timpaker(m): 10:27am On Jul 04, 2015
joseph1832:
I could arrange a private meeting for you if you're willing. grin

How do you like my tyburn poems? Lol.
Private meeting? Maybe in the afterlife. wink

Your tyburn poems are great. But why waste it on erotic poems? grin are you a p0rnst*r?
cheesy
Nairaland GeneralRe: A Thread For Night Crawlers. (late Sleepers) by timpaker(m): 2:52am On Jul 04, 2015
basille:
Ah Mr timpaker so you self follow? lol.

Heheheheheheheh. I'm very much awake at night. I'm even thinking it's very much abnormal but after reading people's comment here I'm force to say "na wa oooo" grin
Nairaland GeneralRe: A Thread For Night Crawlers. (late Sleepers) by timpaker(m): 12:43am On Jul 04, 2015
Present! undecided
Jobs/VacanciesRe: Jobs/vacancies Section Chatroom by timpaker(m): 10:03pm On Jul 03, 2015
Happy birthday Tolutweety!!!

Wishing you many more fruitful years ahead
cheesy
LiteratureRe: Join Me To Wish Larry Sun Happy Birthday by timpaker(m): 1:00pm On Jul 01, 2015
Happy birthday Larrysun..

Wishing you many more fruitful years ahead.

One day, I will grow up to write just like you grin
CelebritiesRe: "I've Been To Your House In London' - Atiku's Son Reacts To Dangote's Claims. by timpaker(m): 12:09am On Jul 01, 2015
It is true. Dangote is renting his own house to himself in London grin
Poems For ReviewRe: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by timpaker(m): 10:00pm On Jun 30, 2015
joseph1832:
I just wrote two tyburn poems with this... Its very easy.
I'm just seeing/hearing/reading this form of poetry oooo. "tyburn". I can't believe i have never heard/read of it before.

I will look it up and try and write one...

Can we see the tyburn you wrote?
Poems For ReviewRe: Sojourning Mind by timpaker(op):
NINE LIVES

One life
I live for my family.
That the blood glues all -
Its a bond that has no enemy.

One life
I live for naivety.
I take responsibility for my unknown
Deeds alone.

One life
I live for joy.
That it takes a thimbleful of tears
To wash up a face clean for cheers.

One life
I live for love.
That life's true meaning is what really
Maddens one to the grave early.

One life
I live for you.
My loyalty could have been bruised
By my love for awed choices but i stayed true.

One life
I live for my mistakes.
That each time I fail and cry,
I always get better after another try.


One life
I live for hope.
For as long as breathe still travels
Through the nostrils why should I mope?

One life
I live for memories.
That a sing-song is made
Of my actions; a feat for jamborees.

And above all,

One life
I lived for life,
That after my deeds on earth
I was proud to have a date with death.
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Poems For ReviewRe: The Convict by timpaker(op): 10:20am On Jun 28, 2015
OMA4U:
I read this series all over. Sir Tim, you are a great poet!

Is this the end? Come and continue abeg
Thanks man.
I will continue this week. I just found some pieces of the poems that got missing on my drive.

Happy Sunday!!! cheesy

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