Infant, please can you cut down the use of this phrase
"With smiles on her face" in your story.

And the Economics department, what you are selling to us is that there are only three guys in the department, or Chris can't relate with guys?
don't they play ball?

I know you are trying your best to describe the whole scene but you are leaving out important areas
Like we still don't know why them girls say Christain's room is impressive
or what Chris or Dr Mike main features are or what the name of the school is.

And so that i don't forget: this part of the story
"I opened the door and saw Sylvia standing at my door"
Before where was he expecting her to stand?


Just my little contribution to your work,
all in all a captivating story I would say.