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Seun,

I knda laughed reading your story,I don't know why but I did all the same.I think you make a good Children's Book writer as all your characters from your stories are ideologist living in a real world,the exact recipe for a children's book.No matter our individual believes we are still products of our society but your characters always seem to be immuned from this

1.Is Mary an African living in Europe/Nigeria that would ever think of asking her Younger Brother to pay for food and board in her own house?

2.Why would Mary be pissed that her brother came visiting;why is she reluctant about family contact that only her mother had her mobile number and her address?Surely members of her family must be able to get in contact with her with being webmasters!

3.I think that the next installment of the Mary saga you must give her background and why she is cold to wards her younger brother.

You are an idealist,Male Feminist is there such a word and it reflects in your stories but you must understand that you are writing for adults  who live in the real world where things are far from ideal.

Waiting for the next part,

Cheers

Orkinla,

\if you are such an accomplished writer/preacher;why then are you still in paid employment in LNG Bonny? I thought I was the only one who knew that you a[b] NARCISSIST[/b].Kai,sorry for the big grammer,I couldn't help myself.

BTW,whatever happened to your poetry night in the canteens of LNG.