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Ignatio:
Hi, hope I'm not late on this. Just seeing it this morning.
What I've read so far is cool. I like the back theme of how machines are taking over from men and how it's linked to the story so far.

Interested to know what follows up and I'm hoping Kunle doesn't leave Kemi for Lara

Thanks for your feedback. Means a lot.

And trust me, I knew that would be the immediate reaction seeing Lara on the scene but she is there for a different thing or things over the course of the story.

Attached is an updated version. Your feedback will be appreciated. Thanks.

Coldplay007:
you acted suspiciously.
parents have hammered it into little girls' heads that they should not allow men to touch them intimately.
You sent her elder one out then tried to touch her, which probably set off all the alarms in her head.

for your own good, don't ever try that kind of shit again.
If it was in the US, you could be in prison now. It's her words against yours.
SHe could say you were trying to touch her bumbum or something like that. Don't touch/carry kids when there are no adults around. it's too dangerous these days.

You just said my mind.

I will overall choose movies over series.

You slapped your own sister because of your 'boyfriend/husband'?

Then, went further to scatter her relationship/marriage?

After all she did for your child (school fees when your husband can't perform his duty to provide etc.)?

Sister, you are wickedness wrapped in human form. Isaiah 48:22 is for you: "There is NO peace, says the Lord, for the wicked". You'd better repent and find a way to confess your sins because you will surely reap in multiples the seeds you've sown.

Fear human beings...! 'You were happy seeing your sister like that- lose her man, her job, depressed because she insulted "your guy".
Ode, oponu...mumu of the highest order...God will visit judgment on you and that guy that plugged straw on your brain to sip out all the grey matter.

The story even sounds too bad to be true.

The ever-dependable God.

Lol

The first advice to the 'fiancee' is to consider changing her friends.

Many people believe because I'm 'nice', I'm a doormat but I know how to put people in their place when push comes to shove. And just easily as I can treat people with detailed attention, I can take my mind and heart off them forever if that person persistently falls short by habits such as selfishness, using people, lacking empathy etc.

October 17

Faithful Father!

cococandy:
New year lunch. I’m keeping it simple this year. Besides I don’t really like New Year’s Day anyway. It’s a signal that all the celebration is over.

1) Oven roasted turkey. I added ham glaze to the marinade and it’s amazing. Successful experiment.

2) Beef feet and goat peppersoup.

3) The ever present jollof and plantains because it’s not a celebration without jollof.

4) And a bottle of Vueve Cliquot. The only dry brut champagne I like. I don’t like dry champagnes.

I hope this year rings in lots of blessings for all of us.

Yawns. A sister is tired. Going to bed.

Madam Coco! This one is keeping it simple abi?

The Leftovers

Watchmen

Hello everyone. I just started penning a feature length film script and decided to share the first few pages here for review, critique and feedback from fellow scriptwriters, lovers of cinema and other people involved in various aspects of film making.

It is just a 13-page script so far. Your comments will be welcome. Please, find the attached pdf document. Thanks.

@prof800, @villageboi, @briareos, @speedyboi, @semid4lyfe @tonyayo, @morsadh, @lynx200, @ignatio, @cnario, @chromatic @thesoj.

Agege shepherd

Looks interesting.

Are they supposed to speak in English though for such a film?

mumumugu:
draw her close, hug her say " I love you" Is anything bothering you, my attention is yours

Who were the unrealistic people that liked this post?

Forward77:
Take my advise.

Men are big babies and you know babies are possessive and stubborn.

You have to understand that he’s your husband and not just anyone else.

He said clearly that women who work are not submissive.
He’s right about that.

He is wrong! Jesus, what is wrong with people on this forum?

Is this story even true??

Wow...what a realistic drawing (it's not a photograph right?) that says a lot!

Kudos to the artist.

Looks good.

cococandy:
It’s Samyang. They are probably made by the same Asian noodle company.

It’s sooo spicy beware. In case you were planning on getting it.

I will search for it here. Shin Ramyun noodles are also spicy but taste so good.

cococandy:
Spicy noodles . Come join

Is that Shin Ramyun noodles?

Yustash001:
what will you now call him if not Dad?

Abi oo.

You can't be too old to call your Father 'dad' in my opinion.

smartolala:
some years later when I was discussing with my father,he told me that in his presence the maid told my mom she will prefer eating alone in her room,but my mom declined,so that she won't feel isolated.when she came to sitting room,she refused to seat on the chair,that food digest easily whenever she sit on the floor while eating.

Oh okay then. Apologies I drew the previous conclusion but I always look at things from all perspectives...or I think I do.

Hmm...interesting story. I understand where OP might be heading to with the story (putting people in their place) but why will your mum ask a human being (even if she was a maid) to sit on the floor while you people have dinner? Doesn't the maid have her own room? Why should she eat AFTER you have all eaten? And these questions are just from the little information you provided. It looks dehumanising to me (no matter how much 'shebi other people do it" it is). Whether the maid turned evil or not might be independent of how your mum treated her....or not

And I am in no way defending the maid but calling out the way she was treated. We also had maids growing up and they were treated very well. Some misbehave, some don't.

lionlee216:
You very stu.pid for that statement of yours.

Too bad your reasoning is so warped you cant even differentiate btw asking "questions" and "attacking someone"

Shalom

Human beings sha

francesawesome:
sister I am also a graduate of English Education but I'm in Nigeria. Sis which way?

lol

rentAcock:
These guys are getting angry because they didn't meet a stripper? We have a long way to go in this continent. An American artiste enters Africa and all our big celebrities are salivating in the mouth just to pose with her.

Finally! A post that makes sense. I am ashamed of my people I swear.

I did it oo

Enemyofpeace:
that time wey you dey possessed abi?

May God forgive you.

Omg....awww.

I remember when my mum took us all to his crusade then in Akure.

"Say he"..."he!"

RIP